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Leaving Cert English Masterplan  by Paul McCormack

In this article, Paul McCormack takes a look at the Leaving Cert Higher Level English papers and breaks down exactly what you need to cover with tips on what to focus on and the depth required. 

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Marking Scheme - PCLM

• Purpose (30%)
• Coherence of Delivery (30%)
• Language (30%)
• Mechanics (10%)

Paper 1 -200 marks

Timing – 2hrs 50mins = 170 mins

• QA – 60 minutes
• QB – 30minutes
• Composition – 70 minutes
• 10 minutes – ‘wriggle-room’

Comprehension – QA  - 50m = 12.5%

• 3 texts – Answer on 1
• 3 Questions: 2x15m + 1x20 marks
• Expectation – 5 marks = 1 paragraph
• NO opening or closing paragraph required

Expect Q(i) to be very straightforward – often a simple character analysis task.

Based on your reading of the written element of TEXT 3, explain three insights you gain into the character of Ariadne O’Neill. Support your response with reference to the text.

Expect Q(iii) to be a style question – vital to prepare and be able to identify the key qualities of different styles of writing: a)    Argument -----> Discursive  b)    Persuasion ----> Speech / talk c)    Story / narrative d)    Description / Aesthetic e)    Personal writing

Expect Q(ii) to be the most challenging . In recent years, these questions have required candidates to be imaginative . These questions often do not require direct reference to the attached Reading Comprehension passage.  

Example: In TEXT 1, Jeanette Winterson claims that, “We go to Shakespeare to find out about ourselves now.” With reference to a Shakespearean play you have studied for your 2019 Leaving Certificate course, identify an image, moment or episode that revealed something to you about “yourselfnow”. Explain the insight(s) you gained from engaging with this image, moment or episode.

Comprehension – QB - 50m = 12.5%

• 3 tasks – Answer on 1
• Pick QB first
• Imaginative tasks – often requires candidate to adopt a persona
• Task usually involves a ‘framework’ instruction, i.e. A speech; a talk; an introduction to a collection of essays; a magazine article / blog post / article for school website; a formal letter; a Diary entry

Questions will also usually contain a list of tasks that must be addressed across the response. The key here is to be:  1)    Accurate 2)    Consistent 3)    Imaginative 4)    Concise  

Example: In TEXT 1, Jeanette Winterson extols the virtues of the arts, arguing that artistic activities are beneficial both for individuals and for society in general. She also gives her views on the relationship between art and money. Write an opinion piece, suitable for publication in a broadsheet newspaper, in which you extol the varied virtues of sport, put forward a reasoned argument to persuade readers that sport benefits both individuals and society, and give your views on the appropriate relationship between sport and money.

Composition – 100m = 25%

• The most important section of the exam
• 7 choices – select one
• Questions always genre-specific
• A personal essay
• A short story
• A discursive essay

There will also likely be an option to write: 

• A descriptive essay
• A persuasive essay
• A magazine / newspaper article

The style of writing is the most important criteria for assessment here. Tasks are genre-specific, so:

• A short story should contain obvious elements of narrative / aesthetic language
• A speech should display an understanding of persuasive and argumentative techniques
• A discursive essay should display a balanced, informed, considered approach
• A personal essay should be reflective and contain ‘individual observation’

The marking schemes very clearly lay out the expectations related to each style of essay and should be studied closely.

The quality of language and expression  will be closely examined in this task above all others. The expectation is that the candidate will display a strong understanding of the particulars of the selected genre and will write in an articulate and clear style.

Imagination and Originality are key factors in a successful composition.

Paper 2 – 200m – 200 minutes.

Time management: take one hour to write each essay, and then spend 20 minutes on Unseen Poetry at the end.

There is an expectation that all answers on Paper 2 will be:

• Substantial (anywhere between 1,000 & 1,200 words is a reasonable expectation)
• Evidence-based. Quotation is vitally important here. There is an absolute expectation of supporting quotation for answers to Single Text and Studied Poetry answers. Quotation also adds to the quality of comparative answers.
• Analytical – the expectation is that answers will contain thoughtful and considered question-facing commentary. All Paper 2 tasks are exercises in CRITICAL THINKING.
• Properly structured.  

Note: In responses to Single Text and Studied Poetry tasks, opening and closing paragraphs certainly should be written . However, they should be brief and only need to accomplish one task – state the candidate’s response to the statement proposal in the question. Every answer on Paper 2 must be written in the language of argument  so provide your THESIS and move on. Closing paragraphs should again be brief and simply re-iterate the thesis. Candidates do not need to ‘list’ points on the OP or CP.

Single Text – 60m = 15%

Five texts are prescribed for study:

• All the Light We Cannot See
• A Doll’s House
• Frankenstein
• The Picture of Dorian Gray
• There will be 2 questions on each text and candidates must answer one question.
• The question will contain multiple elements

Examples: #1 Discuss how Shakespeare makes effective use, for a variety of purposes, of the contradictions and inconsistencies evident in Othello’s character. Develop your discussion with reference to Shakespeare’s play, Othello.

#2 Discuss how Shakespeare’s use of language, including imagery, plays an important part in developing our understanding of one of the following aspects of his play, Othello: themes; characterisation; setting and atmosphere. Develop your answer with reference to the text.

Expectations:

• Answers will be question-facing.
• Answers will not ‘narrate’ the studied text.
• Answers will be thoughtful, and points and evidence will be contextualised in the light of the question.
• Between 4-6 relevant points will be presented in a logical and structured essay.

Othello – Key Topics for Revision:

• The story-arc of the main characters
• The modern appeal 
• Universal themes like corruption and deception are particularly important.

Comparative Three modes are prescribed for study:

• The cultural context
• Theme and issue
• Literary genre

CANDIDATES MUST ANSWER ON ONE MODE.

• Each mode will offer a choice between two questions.
• One choice will be a stand-alone 70-mark essay. 
• In 2021, candidates could refer to 2 texts when answering this question WITHOUT FEAR OF PENALTY.
• The other choice will be divided into Part A (30) marks and Part B (40 marks).
• Candidates are expected to be able to refer to three texts when answering this question.

Expectations: Answers will

• Be written in the comparative spirit
• Display a detailed knowledge of the selected texts
• Avoid paraphrasing / narrating the selected texts.

When writing a Comparative answer, ensure you clearly identify your selected texts before you begin to write. The list technique is a very effective way to do this.

Try to develop 3-4 points in a thoughtful and analytical style. 

Studied Poetry: Poets Prescribed for Higher Level 2022

• Expect to see at least one poet from each category on your exam. 
• 4 poets are usually examined
• In 2021, 5 poets were examined.
• Candidates have to answer on one poet.
• Questions will usually explicitly refer to  a)    The thematic content of a poet’s work b)    Aspects of the poet’s style of writing  
• Candidates should refer to between 4-6 poems in an answer.
• Candidates will focus in on 3-4 core poems and then refer to another 1-2 other poems in context.
• Candidates will not summarise the poems. 
• Candidates will be selective in choice of evidence. 
• You do not have to tell the examiner the story of the poem.  
• The questions will vary in difficulty . Decision-making is a key skill here.
• A good example if this comes from the 2020 Paper 2:

Emily Dickinson  Discuss how Dickinson’s unique approach to language, and the balance between beauty and horror in her imagery, help to relieve some of the darker aspects of her poetry. Develop your response with reference to the poems by Emily Dickinson on your course. 

Adrienne Rich Discuss how Rich makes effective use of a variety of characters, often in dramatic settings, to probe both personal issues and wider social concerns in her poems. Develop your response with reference to the poetry by Adrienne Rich on your course.

One of these questions was much easier than the other...

Finally, some comments from the Chief Examiner that are worth considering...

The Leaving Certificate English Syllabus states that, “Developing control and power over language is the most essential educational achievement for all students if they are to become confident, thoughtful and discriminating adults and citizens”, (Leaving Certificate Syllabus, English, para. 3.5). The importance of key language skills is emphasised throughout the Marking Schemes for Leaving Certificate English and candidates who exhibit competence and control in the use of language are rewarded. It should be remembered that  candidates’ language skills are continuously assessed in the marking of answers to all questions on both Papers 1 and Paper 2 of the Leaving Certificate English examination. The criteria for assessment are applied in the case of every answer at both Higher and Ordinary Levels. This means that candidates who exhibit fluency appropriate to the task are rewarded in relation to every question answered. It is worth noting that some examiners identified candidates who were able to demonstrate knowledge of a text or texts but were less able to deliver this knowledge in a lucid and coherent fashion. 

An appropriate awareness of grammatical and syntactical conventions contributed to the cohesiveness of better answers in the 2013 examination, as did the use of correct spelling and punctuation. Weaker responses tended to be characterised by an inability to organise answers in a logical and coherent fashion and a lack of clear expression. The syllabus requires that, “all students will be expected to be assiduous in their attention to paragraphing, syntax, spelling and punctuation.” 

Candidates at both Higher and Ordinary Levels benefited when they exhibited an ability to structure their writing, organise paragraphs, spell accurately and correctly employ punctuation. 

The criteria for assessment also make explicit reference to the “use of lively interesting phrasing, energy, style and fluency”. It is essential that candidates are aware of the many purposes for which language is used and the diverse forms it can take, to appropriately serve particular purposes and audiences. Creative and thoughtful users of language were rewarded.

Paul McCormack is a senior English teacher at the Institute of Education, Leeson Street, Dublin. He is the author of Bridge The Gap TY English and Uncovering History.

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• Leaving Cert. English (Higher) 2019: Paper 1 Section II Composing
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Preparation

Throughout your Leaving Certificate studies, be curious in all of your subjects. Read widely and write regularly. General knowledge, regular reading and writing will make you an interesting, articulate and quick-thinking student — three attributes that are necessary in responding to Leaving Certificate English papers.

Don’t stick to one style or one particular genre. Write in a variety of language categories:

• Information

Take care with your penmanship. Your writing must be legible and good handwriting will create a good first impression.

If you have built up a number of good written pieces, keep them for reference. You may well be able to utilise some of your ideas and techniques in the actual examination.

Read carefully what your English teacher writes about your written work. Re-write your work to improve it and learn from your mistakes.

This essay is worth a quarter of your entire marks for this examination. Its importance cannot be overestimated!

In the examination you should spend approximately one hour and twenty minutes on this section.

Remember you will be marked under the following criteria:

• Clarity of purpose (30%)
• Coherence of delivery (30%)
• Efficiency of language use (30%)
• Mechanics (10%).

1. Write a descriptive essay which captures a sense of the difference between dawn and dusk and celebrates both the beginning and the end of the day.

• Your essay must be descriptive. Concentrate on creating images and atmosphere for the reader. Consider a multi-sensory approach. Aesthetic use of language would be particularly effective in this task.
• Plan this essay carefully. Try to create a lively and engaging piece for the reader.
• Use figures of speech in your essay. This should create images for the reader.
• Consider how the landscape reflects the difference between dawn and dusk. What images are clear for you? How can you celebrate both the beginning and end of the day?

2. Write a short story, suitable for publication in a collection of spy stories, in which a librarian, a photograph and a chair are central to the narrative.

• You must write a short story. You can take a variety of approaches but generally, all short stories have a beginning, middle and end, have at least one character, and have some sense of tension, climax and resolution.
• Ask yourself questions to create ideas:
• Beware of creating an over-long timeline. You have limited space and time. It would be impossible to cover a character’s entire life in 2-4 A4 pages.
• Try to stick with 1-3 main characters.
• You have a long time to write this essay. Re-read what you have written to check it for mistakes.
• Create atmosphere and images for the reader — it will improve your writing.
• Your story must be a spy story. It must also involve a librarian, a photograph and a chair. These items must be central to the narrative.

3. Write a personal essay in which you reflect on what feeds your imagination.

• This title gives you the opportunity to take several different approaches but remember it must be a personal account. Your ideas should be at the heart of the essay.
• A personal essay should have a degree of personal reflection. You should not just tell a story or present a few anecdotes. You must personally reflect.
• Remember how you will be awarded marks in this section:
• 30% for clarity of purpose.
• 30% for coherence of delivery.
• 30% for efficiency of language use.
• 10% for mechanics.
• Your essay must show your reflection on what feeds your imagination. You might consider some of the following:
• Daydreaming
• Conversation.

4. Write a short story which captures the evolving relationship between two characters — one young and one old — as they travel in a strange land.

• See the notes on writing a short story in Question 2 above.
• Your essay must include the following:
• An old character
• A young character
• An evolving relationship
• Travel in a strange land.

5. Write a discursive essay about some of the items you think symbolise the values held by people of your age in Ireland in 2019.

• This is a discursive essay. You need to discuss what you think symbolises the values held by people of your age today.
• Ensure that you have strong views and that your essay is lively and interesting to read.

6. Write a personal essay in which you reflect on some of the places that have helped to shape and define you, and the significance of these places in your life.

• Think about the some of the places that have shaped and defined you. Can you describe them and say why they were so influential?
• Discuss the significance of these places.

7. Write a speech, to be broadcast online, for or against the motion: We are a self-obsessed generation.

• Consider the following devices:
• Reaching out to and directly addressing the audience.
• Rhetorical questions
• Vivid and contrasting imagery.
• Ensure that you show from the beginning of the task that it is a public speech. The examiner must know that you understand the genre.
• Thank your audience for their time and attention at the end of the speech.
• This is a debate speech, which has certain structures such as addressing the chairperson, adjudicators, etc.
• The speech will be broadcast online — consider how that may influence the text of your speech.
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Leaving Cert English 2024 notes, sample essays, text analysis, examiners’ advice, video – it’s all in there. Contents:

Essentials Paper I

Section I Section II Quotations in essays Speech/Talk/The Language of Persuasion Article / Opinion piece / Discursive Essay / Language of argument Report/The language of information Personal essay Letter – Letter to the Editor – Personal letter Descriptive essay Short story

Introduction Themes Style Detailed breakdown of essay on revenge Sample essays “Revenge and justice are finely balanced themes in the play, Hamlet.” Discuss this statement, supporting your answer with suitable reference to the text. “Hamlet’s madness, whether genuine or not, adds to the fascination of this character for the audience.” Discuss this statement, supporting your answer with suitable reference to the play, Hamlet. ”Cladius can be seen as both a heartless villain and a character with some redeeming qualities in the play, Hamlet.” Discuss both aspects of this statement supporting your answer with suitable reference to the text. “The portrayal of Hamlet as an outsider allows Shakespeare to critique the values of society.” “Uncertainty, which features constantly in Shakespeare’s play, Hamlet, adds significantly to the dramatic impact of the play”. Discuss how Shakespeare makes effective use, for a variety of purposes, of the contradictions and inconsistencies evident in Hamlet’s character. Develop your discussion with reference to Shakespeare’s play, Hamlet. Short notes on 2017 questions “Shakespeare’s play Hamlet has been described as “a disturbing psychological thriller.” “Shakespeare makes effective use of both Laertes and Horatio to fulfil a variety of dramatic functions in his play, Hamlet.”

Frankenstein

Themes Style Quotations Characters Key question Sample essay: “The consequences of Victor Frankenstein’s passion for scientific knowledge and experimentation in Mary Shelley’s novel, Frankenstein, are both fascinating and disturbing.” (2022) Sample essay: “Is the Creature a child? Discuss the idea of parenthood and childhood in relation to Frankenstein.” Sample essay: Discuss the role of Robert Walton in Frankenstein. Consider Walton’s contribution to the themes and style of the novel. Sample essay: Discuss the importance of companionship in shaping the reader’s understanding of the characters and the events of Frankenstein. Sample essay: Discuss the narrative purposes served by Mary Shelley’s inclusion of letters between various characters throughout her novel, Frankenstein. (2022) Sample essay: Discuss how the use of imagery and symbolism plays an important part in the themes of Frankenstein.

Comparative

General guidance Individual texts Link words Cultural Context Theme or Issue Literary Genre Comparisons: making a table (examples Educated, Never Let Me Go , Ladybird , Frankenstein, Rebecca, The Shawshank Redemption, Pride and Prejudice, Knives Out , Where the Crawdads Sing, The Picture of Dorian Gray, Macbeth, Room , Casablanca)

Unseen poetry

General guidance Sample answer

Prescribed poetry

General guidance

Emily Dickinson

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually “Hope” is the thing with feathers There’s a certain Slant of light I felt a Funeral, in my Brain A Bird came down the Walk I heard a Fly buzz – when I died The Soul has Bandaged moments I could bring You Jewels – had I a mind to A narrow Fellow in the Grass I taste a liquor never brewed After great pain, a formal feeling comes Sample essay : “Dickinson’s use of an innovative style to explore intense experiences can both intrigue and confuse.” Discuss this statement, supporting your answer with reference to the poetry of Emily Dickinson on your course.

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually The Sunne Rising Song: Go, and catch a falling star The Anniversarie Song: Sweetest love, I do not goe The Dreame (Deare love, for nothing less than thee. ..) A Valediction Forbidding Mourning The Flea Batter my heart At the round earth’s imagined corners Thou hast made me Sample essay: “John Donne uses startling imagery and wit in his exploration of relationships.” Give your response to the poetry of John Donne in the light of this statement. Support your points with the aid of suitable reference to the poems you have studied.

Seamus Heaney

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually The Forge Bogland The Tollund Man Mossbawn: Two Poems in Dedication (1) Sunlight A Constable Calls The Skunk The Harvest Bow The Underground Postscript A Call Tate’s Avenue The Pitchfork Lightenings VIII. (The annals say…) Sample essay: “Heaney’s poetry explores ordinary life and people through language that is anything but ordinary.” Support your points with reference to the poetry on your course.

Gerard Manley Hopkins

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually God’s Grandeur Spring As kingfishers catch fire, dragonflies draw flame The Windhover Pied Beauty Felix Randal Inversnaid I wake and feel the fell of dark, not day No worst there is none. Pitched past pitch of grief Thou art indeed just, Lord, if I contend Sample essay: “Hopkins’ innovative style displays his struggle with what he believes to be fundamental truths.” In your opinion, is this a fair assessment of his poetry? Support your answer with suitable reference to the poetry of Gerard Manley Hopkins on your course. (2013)

Paula Meehan

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually Buying Winkles The Pattern The Statue of Virgin Mary at Granard Speaks Cora, Auntie The Exact Moment I Became a Poet My Father Perceived as a Vision of St. Francis Prayer for the Children of Longing Death of a Field Them Ducks Died for Ireland Sample essay: “Meehan’s poetry communicates powerful feelings through thought-provoking images and symbols.” Write your response to this statement with reference to the poems by Paula Meehan on your course.

Eiléan Ní Chuilleanáin

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually Lucina Schynning in Silence of the Nicht The Second Voyage Deaths and Engines Street Fireman’s Lift All for You Following Kilcash Translation The Bend in the Road On Lacking the Killer Instinct To Niall Woods and Xenya Ostrovskaia, married in Dublin on 9 September 2009 Sample essay: “Ní Chuilleanáin’s demanding subject matter and formidable style can prove challenging.” Discuss this statement, supporting your answer with reference to the poetry of Eiléan Ní Chuilleanáin on your course.

Sylvia Plath

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually Black Rook in Rainy Weather The Times are Tidy Morning Song Finisterre Mirror Pheasant Elm Poppies in July The Arrival of the Bee Box Child Sample essay : “Plath makes effective use of language to explore her personal experiences of suffering and to provide occasional glimpses of the redemptive power of love.” Discuss this statement, supporting your answer with reference to both the themes and language found in the poetry of Sylvia Plath on your course.

Introduction Detailed analysis of each poem individually The Wild Swans at Coole The Lake Isle of Innisfree Sailing to Byzantium September 1913 An Irish Airman Foresees His Death Easter 1916 Stare’s Nest by My Window The Second Coming In Memory of Eva Gore-Booth and Con Markiewicz Swift’s Epitaph An Acre of Grass from Under Ben Bulben: V and VI Politics Sample essay : “Yeats uses evocative language to create poetry that includes both personal reflection and public commentary.” Discuss this statement, supporting your answer with reference to both the themes and language found in the poetry of W. B. Yeats on your course.

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Student Sample: 2021 Speech

“In TEXT 3, Chadwick Boseman draws attention to the dangers of stereotyping. You have been asked to speak, as a representative of a national youth organisation, at the launch of a major campaign against stereotyping. Write the speech you would deliver. “

Good afternoon everyone, my name is Ally McElroy and today I am going to talk to you about different stereotypes and the effects of stereotypes have on people in today’s society. 

Have you ever looked at someone and thought they don’t deserve to be treated equally because of what they look like or who they are? Exactly, neither have I. But the reality is that some people do, whether they wish to acknowledge it or not.

Stereotyping is forming a fixed general idea or image about someone or a group of people but nine times out of ten it is wrong. I strongly disagree with stereotyping as no two people on this earth are the same.

Look around, the only thing you people have in common is that you are all sitting in front of me here today… that’s it. Stereotyping isn’t just a trend going around now but it has been around for hundreds of years and will continue if we allow it. While it may seem like we can just stop paying attention to stereotyping, it’s not that easy. It can often turn into a voice of self doubt in our heads that can be extremely hard to ignore.

There are many types of stereotyping but I think most of us can agree that some are much more serious than others. Before I get started, I know there are two sides to every story but when things go too far, enough is enough. The stereotyping of people of colour has had a negative impact on  families and communities. For instance, the belief that people of colour are unintelligent, lazy and violent has affected education, employment and social status. 

Now , I don’t know if this is just me but I can’t understand how we, as a society, can judge a person and make all these assumptions based on the colour of a person’s skin. 

One problem that people of colour suffer from is their treatment at the hands of the police or people in positions of power.The problem has been going on for centuries. From Eugene Williams, a seventeen year old African-American boy who was stoned to death in 1919 all because he swam into what they deemed the wrong part of lake Michigan to George Floyd, a forty-six year old African-American who was choked to death by a police officer kneeling on his neck for nearly ten minutes in the middle of the road.  These two events may be almost 100 years apart but they are sadly tales that are all too familiar and highlight the hardships that people of colour endure in our society. Our police force is supposed to represent law and order and the communities they police. These police officers do not represent me, how about you?

This is not just an American problem.  The police in the U.K are three times more likely to arrest a black man than a white man in 2019. In fact, Jermaine Defoe, a former Spurs soccer player was stopped by police four times in one month because they found it suspicious that a black man was driving an expensive sports car.

I know some of you might argue that I am stereotyping police officers but when you see the statistics, it’s hard to ignore. Surely you agree that this is not acceptable in today’s world?

It’s hard to believe that in 2021, I am here talking to you about Gender stereotyping, but the reality is that it is still a problem in today’s world. Gender stereotyping is assuming men or women can only carry out specific roles. It all starts from before we are even born at gender reveal parties, if the balloons are pink we take for granted the baby will be a girl and if they are blue then the baby will be a boy. Who decided this? Obviously a few coloured balloons isn’t going to affect us but when gender stereotyping begins to affect people’s lives and careers then it is a problem. Since the beginning of time, women have been looked down on and seen more as objects than humans. Men tend to view women as more delicate and fragile and should really only handle things like cooking, cleaning and looking after children. I know you are probably thinking, it’s 2021 and that no one could possibly still think like this. However, according to studies there are still those who believe that women are inferior to men and should be treated as such. Speaking as a young woman, I don’t understand this and it really frustrates me. 

Even though it is proven that businesses with a higher  female employment rate are more successful and that women work ten percent harder than men, women still don’t get the acknowledgement and equal rights that they deserve. I don’t know if it is because men are scared of the power women have or jealous of their ability to do anything they put their mind to but I just want to remind you that women are not out working hard just to prove to men they can, they are doing it to be role models for younger females.

Before all you females out there go mad at the males, they don’t have it easy either. Male stereotyping isn’t talked about as often as it should be. Men, just like women, are constricted by stereotypes and penalised for acting outside their traditional role. More than one third of boys think society expects them to be strong and tough, that they must“be a man” and if things are tough, they need to “suck it up”. This is nonsense! We are all humans with emotions and feelings. I am sure all of you have had a bad day or been told bad news and to think that it is not acceptable to be upset or cry about it, is horrible. 

An Australian study based on stereotypes called ‘man box’, revealed that men between the ages of eighteen and thirty believe that talking about issues and concerns is considered weak. They believe that they should act strong even if they feel scared or nervous. They think that successful men look good but don’t spend too much time getting ready because that’s feminine. They say that real men don’t do household chores but that they should be able to provide for a family. They do not consider gay men to be real men and thatstraight men should not have gay friends. And finally, they think a man should have the last say in a relationship. Now, I want everyone here to think about that. I often wonder if they really believe all that or is that what they think society expects them to think? This type of toxic masculinity should be confined to the history books but it shows we have work to do in educating the next generation of men.

In that same study, 64% of men had suicidal thoughts in the last two weeks and 71%  had physically bullied someone in the last month. Not only are the numbers shockingly high but they’re still rising. I want all of you to please listen when I say this. We are going to create a new norm. Repeat after me, asking for help is a sign of strength, tough men show their vulnerabilities, authentic men are attractive and domestic roles and chores are not defined by gender. As Emma Watson once said, “ both men and women should feel free to be sensitive. Both men and women should feel free to be strong…. It is time that we all perceive gender on a spectrum not as two opposing sets of ideals ”.

Finally the last stereotype I want to bring your attention to is social media. We all have it, some of us might just have an account on one platform and others might have multiple accounts on a few different platforms of social media. You might be thinking, what is this girl talking about? How can  an app on my phone have such a large impact on my life?If you ever go to a celebration or event, what is the main conversation? Next time you’re at a gathering, sit back and listen, you will hear, ‘does my hair look ok?’ ‘What does my makeup look like in that photo?’ ‘Should I post this selfie later?’ ‘Let’s get a photo!’ You will soon realise everyone’s main priority is what they look like in photos so they can plaster them all over social media the next day. Yes I am guilty of this because it is lovely to have the memories to look back on but is it really worth it worrying about your appearance to share online?  If your main concern is to look like a stereotypical model you see online then that’s when it becomes a problem. 

Young people are seeing all these photo shopped and edited pictures online and thinking it is reality when every photo they see probably took two or three hours to edit before it was posted. This is a form of body image stereotyping. I think we all have seen a photo of someone and wished we looked like them but in reality the majority of posts we see online are fake and we all need to normalise being comfortable in our own bodies.

I know that everyone is not going to agree with me but I want you to leave today with even the slightest bit of motivation to do something to put a stop to stereotyping. I want you to think, what if it was you in someone else’s position? What if it was your family being judged for simply being themselves?  It is up to every one of us in this room and beyond to help put an end to stereotyping. The future is in our hands.

Thank you all for listening.  

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Language of Persuasion

Persuasion = ♥ Argument = ☺

Examples: Advertisements, competition entries, sermons, inspirational speeches.

Comprehensions – sample question

“ In your opinion, does the writer succeed in persuading us that… ”

“ Identify four features of persuasive writing used in this passage and comment on their effectiveness ”

Look for the following features / techniques:

Vivid imagery (adjectives/similes/metaphors/symbolism)

Emotive dramatic language / sensationalism

Humour / wit

‘ Expert’ reports / Scientific language

Urgent references to time

Rhetorical questions

Emphatic words

Use of ‘I’ / ‘we’ / ‘our’ to connect to the reader or audience

Repetition of key phrases

Reference to ‘big ideas’ – God / justice / truth / right / wrong / future generations.

Question B – sample questions

The above text is based on a series of public lectures delivered by various writers on the topic of influence. Young people today are subject to many influences. Write the text of a talk you would deliver to your class in which you consider some of the positive and negative influences on young people’s lives today and how they respond to these influences.

Your class had decided to produce a book about “un-heroic” or ordinary people as a fund-raiser for a local charity. Write the text for the introduction of this book, in which you explain the purpose of the book and why your class thinks it is important to celebrate ordinary people.

Your student’s School Council is currently discussing the issue of school outings, educational trips, theatre visits, etc. Write a persuasive article for your school website supporting or opposing such events.

Write a feature article for a travel magazine about a place you have never been but would like to visit. In your article explain what you find fascinating about this place and why you would like to go there.

Write a short speech in which you attempt to persuade a group of parents that older teenagers should be trusted to make their own decisions.

Write a letter to a famous writer or celebrity or sports personality of your choice offering your services as a ghost writer for a future book. In your letter you should outline the reasons why you believe you would make a successful ghost writer for your chosen author.

Write a letter to a photographic magazine in which you propose one of the four images for the award “Best War Photograph of the Year.”

Write a letter to one of the people from the collection of visual images in this text, indicating what appeals and/or does not appeal to you about the work which that person does.

Family Home and Contents for Sale

Drawing on the detail in the above text, and its accompanying illustration, draft the text of an advertisement that offers the home and its contents for sale.

Sample Essay Titles

Write a persuasive speech about the importance of literature in people’s lives.

You have been asked to speak to your class about what you think is indispensable in your life. Write the text of the talk you would give.

Write a persuasive speech in praise of science and technology.

Write a personal essay on the topic of daydreams.

Write the text of a talk you would deliver to your classmates on the topic: Appearances can be Deceptive.

Write a speech in which you attempt to persuade an audience that the past should not be glorified.

Write the text of a talk, serious or humorous, to be given to your peers, entitled: “How I intend to change the world!”

Write a magazine article (serious or light-hearted) in which you outline a get-rich idea of your own.

Write the speech you would deliver to a group of world leaders in which you persuade them to deal with one or more of the world’s problems.

Write a speech in which you attempt to persuade an audience that today’s obsession with the lives of the rich and famous has gone too far.

You are responding to a radio competition to find an ordinary person whose life story will inspire others. Entries should include an account of the person’s life and the reason(s) why it is inspirational. Write your competition entry.

You have been asked to give a talk to your class on the importance of not taking life too seriously. Write the talk you would give.

Write a persuasive article or essay in which you attempt to convince people of the meaning and importance of heroes in life.

You have been asked by the school principal to give a talk to your class group on the importance in life of “understanding the system”. Write out the talk you would give.

“Hope is a sustaining human gift” You have been asked to deliver a speech on this theme to a group of classmates. Write out the speech you would give.

You have been elected President of Ireland. Write the first speech you would make to the Irish people.

Write an article intended for inclusion in the sports pages of a newspaper in which you attempt to persuade your readers of the value of sport in our lives.

Write an article for your school or local magazine in which you explore your feelings about the place of music and/or songs in your life.

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