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Read 2 Transfer Student Essays That Worked

Strong transfer essays can help pave the way to admissions offers.

Read 2 Transfer Essays That Worked

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Though it isn't a golden ticket, a strong transfer essay may boost an applicant's odds of admission.

There are as many reasons to transfer colleges as there are transfer students. But regardless of why someone wants to move to a new institution, the process for doing so usually requires an admissions essay.

Colleges With the Most Transfer Students

Josh Moody Jan. 28, 2020

In a 2018 National Association for College Admission Counseling survey , 41.5% of colleges polled said a transfer applicant's essay or writing sample is of either considerable or moderate importance in the admission decision.

A compelling, well-written transfer essay doesn't guarantee acceptance – many other factors are at play, such as an applicant's GPA. However, a strong essay can be a factor that helps move the odds in the applicant's favor, says Kathy Phillips, associate dean of undergraduate admissions at Duke University in North Carolina.

Know What Colleges Are Looking For In a Transfer Essay

Some schools have prospective transfer students use the Common App or the Coalition Application to apply. In addition to the main essay, students may be required to submit a second writing sample or respond to short-answer questions, though this isn't always the case. Prospective students can check a college's website for specific guidance regarding how to apply.

Whatever application method they use, prospective students should be aware that writing a transfer essay is not the same as writing a first-year college application essay, experts advise. First-year essays are more open-ended, says Niki Barron, associate dean of admission at Hamilton College in New York. When applying as first-years, prospective students can generally write about any experience, relationship or goal that has shaped who they are as people, she says.

This contrasts with transfer essays, where the focus is typically narrower. Barron says she thinks of transfer essays as more of a statement of purpose. "We're really looking to see students' reasons for wanting to transfer," she says.

Katie Fretwell, the recently retired dean of admission and financial aid at Amherst College in Massachusetts, says prospective transfer students are in a position to be a bit more reflective about their educational goals because of their additional year or years of experience post-high school. The essay helps admissions officers get a sense of whether an applicant has done "an appropriate level of soul-searching about the match," she says.

Transfer Essay Examples

Below are two transfer essays that helped students get into Duke and Amherst, respectively. Both institutions are very selective in transfer admissions. For fall 2018, Duke had a transfer acceptance rate of 8% and Amherst accepted 4% of its transfer applicants, according to U.S. News data.

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Common App Transfer Guide – 2024

December 8, 2023

A college diploma features the name of just one institution. Yet, for many, this hardly tells the true story of their unique college journey, which is often an amalgam of experiences across two or more postsecondary settings. In fact, at some point, approximately one-third of all U.S. college students temporarily transform into “transfer applicants,” a role that they are often thrust into with little preparation or support. This time, the transfer Common App looms before you, and too often, little guidance is available.

Transfer students come in different shapes and sizes and the particular contours of a given applicant can dictate what type of process awaits. There are those who, for financial or academic reasons, began at a community college, performed well, and are now jumping up the big leagues of a four-year university. On the other end of the spectrum, there are transfer applicants already attending a reputable four-year establishment who have their hearts set on swapping out their present location for the highly selective college of their dreams.

One common denominator is that no matter what type of transfer applicant you happen to be, you will likely be tasked with filling out the Common App for Transfer, a variation of the traditional Common App that you may have used when you originally applied to college. To assist you, the following article will address:

• Do I qualify as a transfer applicant?
• When are the transfer deadlines for colleges?
• How do I complete each section of the Common App Transfer application?
• Do I need SAT/ACT scores to transfer colleges?
• How do I approach the Common App Transfer application essay?
• What are the chances of getting accepted as a transfer applicant?

Let’s begin by exploring who qualifies as a transfer applicant.

Am I a transfer or freshman applicant?

School policies vary here. At many schools, just taking one two or four-year college course post-high school is enough to make you a transfer applicant. At other schools, you’ll need 24-30 credits under your belt before transferring is even an option. You’ll want to investigate this thoroughly before beginning the Common App transfer application. Fortunately, our Dataverse has an institution-by-institution breakdown. Check out our sortable chart  for more information.

When are transfer deadlines?

Each college sets its own transfer deadline or deadlines; some schools only have one application deadline each year while others have two. The most common time to apply as a fall transfer (for the following year) is around March. In fact, all eight Ivy League schools have annual deadlines between March 1st and March 15 th :

Many universities also offer a deadline for those wishing to start at a new school in the spring semester; these applications are typically due between October 1st and December 1st (although there are outliers). For a complete and up-to-date list of transfer deadlines for the current transfer admissions cycle visit our chart of transfer admission deadlines .

How to complete the Common App Transfer Application – A section-by-section breakdown

There are four sections to the Common App transfer application: 1) Personal Information, 2) Academic History, 3) Supporting Information, and 4) Program Materials.

Before you begin, select the schools that you plan to apply to. You can do this by navigating to “Add Program.” The schools you select will then populate in the “Program Materials” section.

Need a visual? Here’s a step-by-step tutorial:

Personal information.

This includes your basic demographic info including ethnicity, physical address, gender identity, and information about your parents/guardians. Nothing here should be too challenging.

Academic History

Here, you will enter information about your high school and college(s) as well as courses you completed in college, if required. If applicable, you’ll also self-report any standardized tests you previously took, including SAT/ACT and AP/IB exams.

There is also a space for you to input continuing education courses. These can include Coursera , edX , or LinkedIn Learning courses as well as any other type of in-person or online course/workshop.

Common App Transfer Guide (Continued)

Supporting information.

The first subcategory within this section is labeled as “Experiences.” Applicants should feel free to include any experience that helps paint a picture of how they presently spend their time, including extracurricular clubs, internships, volunteer or paid work experiences, summer programs, hobbies, or family responsibilities. The greatest emphasis should be placed on experiences that have occurred since exiting high school, so we’d suggest placing those at the top of your list.

Relevant high school activities can be included, but only when they directly connect to present pursuits (i.e. a current business major was President of his Future Business Leaders of America chapter in high school). Ideally, any high school activities that you include will have occurred during your junior and/or senior years of high school.

When you’re ready to add an experience, you’ll first choose an “Experience Type,” which includes Employment, Research, Extracurricular Activities, Volunteer, and Internship.

After selecting the appropriate category, you’ll have the ability to add more information about the organization you are (or were) a part of, your supervisor’s information, and the dates of the experience. You’ll also be able to note whether the experience was part-time, full-time, or temporary. Finally, the “Experience Details” area will require the following:

• Title of the Experience (60 characters). This should be the role you held within the organization, ex. “President” or “Software Intern.”
• Type of Recognition . You can choose from Compensated, Received Academic Credit, or Volunteer.
• Description/Key Responsibilities (600 characters). Similar to the Activities section of the freshman Common App , focus on offering specific details about your level of involvement and leadership along with relevant accomplishments and measurable impact.

The second subcategory within this section is labeled as “Achievements.” You can add athletic awards, academic awards/honors such as Dean’s List or membership in an honor society, publications, and professional achievements/recognition, among others. Collegiate achievements are preferred, but significant high school achievements (i.e., those at the national or international level, such as AP Scholar with Distinction or National Merit Semifinalist) can be added.

To add an achievement, you’ll first select an “Achievement Type.” These include Publications, Honors, or Awards. You’ll then complete the following sections:

• Achievement Details (60 characters). This should be the name of the award you won or recognition received, such as “Dean’s List.”
• Name of Presenting Organization (60 characters). In this section, you’ll insert the name of the organization or school through which you received recognition.
• Issued Date.  For recognition you’ve received more than once, such as being named to your college’s Dean’s List, you’ll want to choose the earliest date that you received recognition.
• Brief description (600 characters). Here, you can provide several sentences of context and/or note the award criteria, such as the minimum GPA required to earn Dean’s List recognition.

Finally, in the third subcategory, “Documents,” you’ll have the opportunity to upload supporting documentation such as a resume, visa documentation, or military transcript.

Program Materials

This area is akin to the supplemental applications that you filled out during the freshman application cycle. In this section, you must address school-specific essays and questions that require a short response. It’s important to always check the “Questions” tab within the Program Materials section as some schools only list their essay(s) here. Other schools will list the main essay in the “Documents” section, which can be a source of confusion. Some schools list essays in both places. Within the “Documents” tab, you will also find a list of documentation required by each prospective transfer institution, which may include items such as college transcripts, a mid-term report, or a resume. You can very easily upload directly into the form.

On the Common App transfer application, the “Recommendations” tab is where you’ll add recommenders.

Need a quick breakdown of how that works? Watch here:

Do i have to submit standardized test scores.

Ever since the arrival of COVID in 2020, the majority of American colleges have introduced  test-optional policies . These policies often extend to transfer students as well. Some schools, like the UC and CSU systems, have even gone test-blind. This means that they will not consider SAT or ACT scores in the admissions process. To see which type of policy your prospective institution(s) have adopted, view our complete list of test-blind and test-optional colleges.

Overall, 99% of colleges in 2024 will not require transfer students to submit test scores. However, at highly selective schools, submitting strong test scores may greatly improve your chances. For example, elite SAT scores will help you if transferring to Ivy League or Ivy-equivalent institutions.

The Common App Transfer Essay

Not every college requires an essay as part of their transfer application; however, plenty of selective institutions do. Many present applicants with a prompt that asks them, in essence, to explain why they want to transfer. For example:

 “The personal statement helps colleges get to know you better as a person and a student. Please provide a statement discussing your educational path. How does continuing your education at a new institution help you achieve your future goals?” 

In the words of Kierkegaard, “Life can only be understood backwards; but it must be lived forwards.” Briefly tell them where you have been and then move the conversation toward the future. As you discuss your educational journey so far and reasons for transferring, it’s important to avoid bashing your current school. Instead, focus on the opportunities your current school has provided you with and how you’ve taken advantage of them. Then, share why you’ll be better served at a different institution.

The best reasons for transferring are grounded in academics; any social or environmental factors are secondary considerations.  After taking several data science courses, perhaps you’ve decided you’d like to pursue a major in data science…but that option isn’t available at your current college. Alternatively, perhaps you’ve discovered that you’d like to attend a university with a more robust and supportive undergraduate research environment. Finally, after you explain how your past experience has brought you to this moment, make sure that you are crystal clear about your vision for the great things that lie ahead.

It’s important to note that Common App transfer essay requirements vary significantly depending on the school. Some schools will only require a version of the above essay prompt; others will ask students to also write a traditional personal statement and/or answer supplemental essay questions on topics that range from “Why Us?” to community-focused or extracurricular activity essays. Therefore, it’s essential to look at the various prompts you’ll need to write before getting started in order to figure out the balance of information across the application. Moreover, if you’re reapplying to a school that you applied to as a freshman, it should go without saying that you’ll need to write new essays.

What are my chances of getting accepted?

Of course, the answer to this question depends on whether you are applying to Columbia University (11% transfer acceptance rate) or the University of Missouri-Columbia (68% transfer acceptance rate). Last year, schools such as Bowdoin, Bates, Pomona, and Amherst all accepted fewer than 10% of applicants. Meanwhile, other stellar schools like George Mason, the University of Georgia, Indiana University, Elon, Clemson, and the University at Buffalo accepted the majority of those who applied.

Note: All of the previously mentioned schools are featured in College Transitions’ book— Colleges Worth Your Money: What America’s Top Schools Can Do for You  (Rowman & Littlefield, 2023).

It is also important to understand that transfer rates can be extremely volatile from year to year. Figures can be swayed by institutional needs and the number of open slots. For example, Dartmouth’s transfer acceptance rate has hovered between 0.5% and 10% in recent years.

Common App Transfer Guide – Final Thoughts

As a transfer applicant, you’ll be required to do things that you were not asked to do as a freshman applicant. For example, you may be required to complete a  mid-term report or  college report , and provide transcripts from both your high school and current college. You also need to approach your essays differently and may need to line up recommendation letters. Although navigating the transfer application process takes a solid amount of time and energy, you’ll be successful as long you stay highly organized, motivated, and focused on your future goals.

Andrew Belasco

A licensed counselor and published researcher, Andrew's experience in the field of college admissions and transition spans two decades. He has previously served as a high school counselor, consultant and author for Kaplan Test Prep, and advisor to U.S. Congress, reporting on issues related to college admissions and financial aid.

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Guide to Writing a Stellar Common App Transfer Essay

Padya Paramita

December 1, 2020

If you’re having a hard time adjusting to your college, or you’ve realized that the school you attend isn’t the right institution for you, it may be wise to search for transferring options. As you work on preparing a strong transfer application , it’s important to note that the schools you’re applying to will want to know your reason for transferring and what you would bring to your new campus. This is where a well-written Common App transfer essay comes in handy.

In the 2020-2021 application cycle, the Common App for transfer students is allowing candidates to answer the Common App personal statement prompts. Most schools also have taken the option of including the Common App transfer essay with their applications in order to understand students’ interests and motivations better. To help you put together an application that will impress admissions officers, I’ve outlined the personal essay prompts, detailed how to write a strong response to the Common App transfer essay prompt, and added final tips that can help you stand out as a compelling candidate.

The Common App Personal Statement Prompts

2020-2021 is the first application cycle during which the Common App has allowed transfer students to answer the personal statement prompts. This year, it is up to colleges whether they wish to include the Common App transfer essay among their questions as well. If you’re applying to transfer, it’s important to be aware of the personal statement prompts. These are:

• Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, please share your story. (650 words)
• The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience? (650 words)
• Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome? (650 words)
• Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma — anything of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution. (650 words)
• Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others. (650 words)
• Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more? (650 words)
• Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design. (650 words)

Whichever prompt you choose, what’s important is that you tell a story that is unique to you. Writing about yourself can seem like an easy task at first glance, but when you sit down to actually brainstorm, you might reach a dead end. Where do you even begin? What experience is captivating enough to share with admissions officers? How do you narrow down your entire life story into 650 words? There’s a lot of pressure to find the right topic that will help you stand out. You can read more in detail about how to answer these in our Common App personal statement prompts 2020-2021 blog .

The Common App Transfer Essay Prompt

Now we come to the question for the actual Common App transfer essay . The prompt states:

Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve. (250-600 words)

If you choose to write this essay, remember that admissions officers don’t want a three-page complaint outlining why you are dissatisfied with your current college. Your application should be geared towards what your unique interests are, why you’ve chosen to transfer, and how the college of your choice can help you achieve your goals. Since you have up to 600 words in your arsenal, you can divide your essay into two or three segments so that all of your content is organized and easy to understand. Remember that you’re no longer a high school student. Since you’ve already experienced at least one semester of college by the time you’re applying, you can elaborate on how you’ve grown in the past year as well.

Regardless of whether your reason for transfer is in search of a stronger program in your chosen field or because you wish to attend college in a warmer location, it’s important to highlight how you can uniquely contribute to the campus want to attend. The prompt clearly asks “what you hope to achieve.” This indicates that admissions officers are looking to understand what their resources can provide you with that your current school can’t. So, make sure you spend time browsing the school website, understanding the different courses and major offerings, taking note of any relevant clubs and turning this knowledge into specific examples and anecdotes as you write your essay.

Further Tips for Writing the Common App Transfer Essay

• Dedicate Significant Time to Brainstorming: Since there’s only one prompt for the Common App transfer essay , a lot of students might take it lightly. However, you must stand out and write a unique response. Don’t just come up with an anecdote on a whim. Choose examples in your writing that allow you to be as specific as possible. Ensuring that your essay topic has a cohesive connection to the rest of your application can go a long way toward convincing admissions officers that you’re a strong candidate who can succeed in their institution
• Let Your Personality Shine: The purpose of the Common App transfer essay is to get to know you . You can’t be a memorable candidate if admissions officers are unable to gauge who you are, sense what you’re passionate about, and identify your goals. Don’t just repeat your personal statement. Instead, exemplify each point as concretely as possible. Whether reading about your favorite subject or how you’ve led a particular organization, the reader must be able to get a clear picture and learn new information from every essay. 

You spend some of your most significant years in college. It’s important to ensure that you attend a school that allows you to thrive and work towards your goals. If you aren’t happy at your present college and are working on your transfer application, a stellar Common App transfer essay can go a long way in helping admissions officers get a sense of who you are and what you can bring to the college. Happy writing!

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Common App Essays | 7 Strong Examples with Commentary

Published on November 19, 2021 by Kirsten Courault . Revised on May 31, 2023.

If you’re applying for college via the Common App , you’ll have to write an essay in response to one of seven prompts.

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What is the common application essay, prompt 1: background, identity, interest, or talent, prompt 2: overcoming challenges, prompt 3: questioning a belief or idea, prompt 4: appreciating an influential person, prompt 5: transformative event, prompt 6: interest or hobby that inspires learning, prompt 7: free topic, other interesting articles, frequently asked questions about college application essays.

The Common Application, or Common App , is a college application portal that is accepted by more than 900 schools.

Within the Common App is your main essay, a primary writing sample that all your prospective schools will read to evaluate your critical thinking skills and value as a student. Since this essay is read by many colleges, avoid mentioning any college names or programs. Instead, save tailored answers for the supplementary school-specific essays within the Common App.

Regardless of your prompt choice, admissions officers will look for an ability to clearly and creatively communicate your ideas based on the selected prompt.

We’ve provided seven essay examples, one for each of the Common App prompts. After each essay, we’ve provided a table with commentary on the essay’s narrative, writing style and tone, demonstrated traits, and self-reflection.

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This essay explores the student’s emotional journey toward overcoming her father’s neglect through gymnastics discipline.

Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

When “The Devil Went Down to Georgia” began to play, it was my signal to lay out a winning floor routine. Round off. Back handspring. Double back layout. Stick!

Instead, I jolted off the floor, landing out of bounds. Over the past week, I hadn’t landed that pass once, and regionals were only seven days away. I heaved a heavy sigh and stomped over to the bench.

Coach Farkas saw my consternation. “Mona, get out of your head. You’re way too preoccupied with your tumbling passes. You could do them in your sleep!”

That was the problem. I was dreaming of tumbling and missing my landings, waking up in a cold sweat. The stress felt overwhelming.

“Stretch out. You’re done for tonight.”

I walked home from the gym that had been my second home since fourth grade. Yet my anxiety was increasing every time I practiced.

I startled my mom. “You’re home early! Wait! You walked? Mona, what’s going on?!”

I slumped down at the kitchen table. “Don’t know.”

She sat down across from me. “Does it have anything to do with your father texting you a couple of weeks ago about coming to see you at regionals?”

“So what?! Why does it matter anymore?” He walked out when I was 10 and never looked back. Still, dear ol’ Dad always had a way of resurfacing when I least expected him.

“It still matters because when you hear from him, you tend to crumble. Or have you not noticed?” She offered a knowing wink and a compassionate smile.

I started gymnastics right after Dad left. The coaches said I was a natural: short, muscular, and flexible. All I knew was that the more I improved, the more confident I felt. Gymnastics made me feel powerful, so I gave it my full energy and dedication.

The floor routine became my specialty, and my performances were soon elevating our team score. The mat, solid and stable, became a place to explore and express my internal struggles. Over the years, no matter how angry I felt, the floor mat was there to absorb my frustration.

The bars, beam, and vault were less forgiving because I knew I could fall. My performances in those events were respectable. But, the floor? Sometimes, I had wildly creative and beautiful routines, while other times were disastrous. Sadly, my floor routine had never been consistent.

That Saturday afternoon, I slipped into the empty gym and walked over to the mat. I sat down and touched its carpeted surface. After a few minutes, my cheeks were wet with the bitter disappointment of a dad who only showed up when it was convenient for him. I ruminated on the years of practices and meets where I had channeled my resentment into acrobatics and dance moves, resolved to rise higher than his indifference.

I saw then that my deepest wounds were inextricably entangled with my greatest passion. They needed to be permanently separated. While my anger had first served to launch me into gymnastics, before long, I had started serving my anger.

Anger is a cruel master. It corrupts everything it touches, even something as beautiful as a well-choreographed floor routine.

I changed my music days before regionals. “The Devil” no longer had a place in my routine. Instead, I chose an energetic cyberpunk soundtrack that inspired me to perform with passion and laser focus. Dad made an obligatory appearance at regionals, but he left before I could talk to him.

It didn’t matter this time. I stuck every landing in my routine. Anger no longer controlled me. I was finally free.

Word count: 601

This essay shows how the challenges the student faced in caring for her sister with autism resulted in an unexpected path forward in her education.

The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?

I never had a choice.

My baby sister was born severely autistic, which meant that every detail of our home life was repeatedly adjusted to manage her condition. I couldn’t go to bed without fearing that Mindy would wake up screaming with that hoarse little voice of hers. I couldn’t have friends over on weekends because we never knew if our entire family would need to shift into crisis mode to help Mindy regain control.

We couldn’t take a family vacation because Mindy would start hitting us during a long car ride when she didn’t want to sit there anymore. We couldn’t even celebrate Christmas like a normal family because Mindy would shriek and run away when we tried to give her presents.

I was five years old when Mindy was born. For the first ten years, I did everything I could to help my mom with Mindy. But Mom was depressed and would often stare out the window, as if transfixed by the view. Dad was no help either. He used his job as an excuse to be away from home. So, I tried to make up for both of them and rescue Mindy however I could whenever she needed it.

However, one day, when I was slowly driving Mindy around with the windows down, trying to lull her into a calmer state, we passed two of my former classmates from middle school. They heard Mindy growling her disapproval as the ride was getting long for her. One of them turned to the other and announced, “Oh my God! Marabeth brought her pet monster out for a drive!” They laughed hysterically and ran down the street.

After that day, I defied my parents at every turn. I also ignored Mindy. I even stopped doing homework. I purposely “got in with the wrong crowd” and did whatever they did.

My high school counselor Ms. Martinez saw through it all. She knew my family’s situation well. It didn’t take her long to guess what had probably happened.

“Marabeth, I get it. My brother has Down syndrome. It was really hard growing up with him as a brother. The other kids were pretty mean about it, especially in high school.”

I doubted she understood. “Yeah. So?”

“I’m guessing something happened that hurt or embarrassed you.”

“I’m so sorry. I can only imagine how you must have felt.”

It must have been the way she said it because I suddenly found myself sobbing into my trembling, cupped hands.

Ms. Martinez and I met every Friday after that for the rest of the year. Her stories of how she struggled to embrace living with and loving her brother created a bridge to my pain and then my healing. She explained that her challenges led her to pursue a degree in counseling so that she could offer other people what no one had given her.

I thought that Mindy was the end of my life, but, because of Ms. Martinez’s example and kindness, I can now see that Mindy is a gift, pointing me toward my future.

Now, I’m applying to study psychology so that I can go on to earn my master’s degree in counseling. I’m learning to forgive my parents for their mistakes, and I’m back in Mindy’s life again, but this time as a sister, not a savior. My choice.

Word Count: 553

This essay illustrates a student’s courage in challenging his culture’s constructs of manhood and changing his course while positively affecting his father in the process.

Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?

“No son of mine is gonna march around a football field wearing tail feathers while all the real men are playing football!”

I took a step backward and tried not to appear as off-balance as I felt. In my excitement, I had blurted out more information than my father could handle:

“Dad! I made the marching band as a freshman! Nobody does that—I mean nobody!”

As soon as I had said it, I wished I could recall those words. How could I forget that 26 years earlier, he had been the starting wide receiver for the state-champion Tigers on the same field?!

Still, when I opened the email on that scorching hot August afternoon, I was thrilled that five months of practicing every possible major and harmonic minor scale—two octaves up and two octaves down—had made the difference. I had busted reed after reed, trying not to puff my cheeks while moving my fingers in a precise cadence.

I knew he had heard me continually practicing in my room, yet he seemed to ignore all the parts of me that were incongruous with his vision of manhood:

Ford F-150 4x4s. Pheasant hunting. The Nebraska Cornhuskers.

I never had to wonder what he valued. For years, I genuinely shared his interests. But, in the fall of eighth grade, I heard Kyle Wheeling play a saxophone solo during the homecoming marching band halftime show. My dad took me to every football game to teach me the plays, but that night, all I could think about was Kyle’s bluesy improv at halftime.

During Thanksgiving break, I got my mom to drive me into Omaha to rent my instrument at Dietze Music, and, soon after, I started private lessons with Mr. Ken. Before long, I was spending hours in my room, exploring each nuance of my shiny Yamaha alto sax, anticipating my audition for the Marching Tigers at the end of the spring semester.

During those months of practice, I realized that I couldn’t hide my newfound interest forever, especially not from the football players who were going to endlessly taunt me. But not all the guys played football. Some were in choir and theater. Quite a few guys were in the marching band. In fact, the Marching Tigers had won the grand prize in their division at last year’s state showdown in Lincoln.

I was excited! They were the champions, and I was about to become a part of their legacy.

Yet, that afternoon, a sense of anxiety brewed in my belly. I knew I had to talk to him.

He was sweeping the grass clippings off of the sidewalk. He nodded.

“I need to tell you something.”

He looked up.

“I know that you know about my sax because you hear me practicing. I like it a lot, and I’m becoming pretty good at it. I still care about what you like, but I’m starting to like some other things more. I hope you’ll be proud of me whatever I choose.”

He studied the cracks in the driveway. “I am proud of you. I just figured you’d play football.”

We never talked about it again, but that fall, he was in the stands when our marching band won the state championship in Lincoln for the second time. In fact, for the next four years, he never left the stands during halftime until the marching band had performed. He was even in the audience for every performance of “Our Town” at the end of my junior year. I played the Stage Manager who reveals the show’s theme: everything changes gradually.

I know it’s true. Things do change over time, even out here in central Nebraska. I know because I’ve changed, and my dad has changed, too. I just needed the courage to go first.

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The student demonstrates how his teacher giving him an unexpected bad grade was the catalyst for his becoming a better writer.

Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?

I stared in disbelief at the big red letter at the top of my paper: D. 

Never in my entire high school career had I seen that letter at the top of any paper, unless it was at the beginning of my first name. 

I had a 4.796 GPA. I had taken every pre-AP and AP course offered. My teachers had praised my writing skills! However, Mr. Trimble didn’t think so, and he let me know it:

“Darwin, in the future, I believe you can do better if you fully apply yourself.” 

I furiously scanned the paper for corrections. Not even one! Grammar and syntax? Perfect. Spelling? Impeccable. Sentence and paragraph structure? Precise and indisputable, as always. 

Was he trying to ruin my GPA? Cooper was clearly his favorite, and we were neck and neck for valedictorian, which was only one year away. Maybe they were conspiring to take me down. 

Thankfully, AP Composition was my last class. I fled the room and ran to my car. Defiant tears stained my cheeks as I screeched my tires and roared out of the parking lot. When I got home, I shoved in my AirPods, flopped on my bed, and buried my head under the pillow. 

I awoke to my sister, Daria, gently shaking my arm. “I know what happened, D. Trimble stopped me in the hall after school.”

“I’m sure he did. He’s trying to ruin my life.”

“That’s not what he told me. You should talk to him, D.”

The next day, although I tried to avoid Mr. Trimble at all costs, I almost tripped over him as I was coming out of the bathroom.

“Darwin, can we talk?” 

He walked me down the hall to his room. “Do you know that you’re one of the best writers I’ve ever had in AP Comp?” 

“Then why’d you do it?” 

“Because you’re better than you know, Darwin. You impress with your perfect presentations, and your teachers reward you with A’s and praise. I do frequent the teacher’s lounge, you know.” 

“So I know you’re not trying.”

I locked eyes with him and glared. 

“You’ve never had to try because you have a gift. And, in the midst of the acclaim, you’ve never pushed yourself to discover your true capabilities.”

“So you give me a D?!”

“It got your attention.”

“You’re not going to leave it, are you?”

“Oh, the D stands. You didn’t apply yourself. You’ll have to earn your way out with your other papers.” 

I gained a new understanding of the meaning of ambivalence. Part of me was furious at the injustice of the situation, but I also felt strangely challenged and intrigued. I joined a local writer’s co-op and studied K. M. Weiland’s artistic writing techniques. 

Multiple drafts, track changes, and constructive criticism became my new world. I stopped taking Mr. Trimble’s criticism personally and began to see it as a precious tool to bolster me, not break me down. 

Last week, the New York Public Library notified me that I was named one of five finalists for the Young Lions Fiction Award. They described my collection of short stories as “fresh, imaginative, and captivating.” 

I never thought I could be grateful for a D, but Mr. Trimble’s insightful courage was the catalyst that transformed my writing and my character. Just because other people applaud you for being the best doesn’t mean you’re doing your best . 

AP Composition is now recorded as an A on my high school transcript, and Cooper and I are still locked in a tight race for the finish line. But, thanks to Mr. Trimble, I have developed a different paradigm for evaluation: my best. And the more I apply myself, the better my best becomes. 

Word Count: 627

This student narrates how she initially went to church for a boy but instead ended up confronting her selfishness by helping others.

Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.

Originally, I went to church not because I was searching for Jesus but because I liked a boy.

Isaac Ono wasn’t the most athletic boy in our class, nor was he the cutest. But I was amazed by his unusual kindness toward everyone. If someone was alone or left out, he’d walk up to them and say hello or invite them to hang out with him and his friends.

I started waking up at 7:30 a.m. every Sunday morning to attend Grace Hills Presbyterian, where Isaac’s father was the pastor. I would strategically sit in a pew not too close but close enough to Isaac that when the entire congregation was instructed to say “Peace be with you,” I could “happen” to shake Isaac’s hand and make small talk.

One service, as I was staring at the back of Isaac’s head, pondering what to say to him, my hearing suddenly tuned in to his father’s sermon.

“There’s no such thing as a good or bad person.”

My eyes snapped onto Pastor Marcus.

“I used to think I was a good person who came from a respectable family and did nice things. But people aren’t inherently good or bad. They just make good or bad choices.”

My mind raced through a mental checklist of whether my past actions fell mostly into the former or latter category.

“As it says in Deuteronomy 30:15, ‘I have set before you today life and good, death and evil.’ Follow in the footsteps of Jesus and do good.”

I glanced to my left and saw Margaret, underlining passages in her study Bible and taking copious notes.

Months earlier, I had befriended Margaret. We had fourth-period Spanish together but hadn’t interacted much. She was friends with Isaac, so I started hanging out with her to get closer to him. But eventually, the two of us were spending hours in the Starbucks parking lot having intense discussions about religion, boys, and our futures until we had to return home before curfew.

After hearing the pastor’s sermon, I realized that what I had admired about Isaac was also present in Margaret and other people at church: a welcoming spirit. I’m pretty sure Margaret knew of my ulterior motives for befriending her, but she never called me out on it.

After that day, I started paying more attention to Pastor Marcus’s sermons and less attention to Isaac. One year, our youth group served Christmas Eve dinner to the homeless and ate with them. I sat across from a woman named Lila who told me how child services had taken away her four-year-old daughter because of her financial and living situation.

A few days later, as I sat curled up reading the book of James, my heart suddenly felt heavy.

“If a brother or sister is poorly clothed and lacking in daily food, and one of you says to them, ‘Go in peace, be warmed and filled,’ without giving them the things needed for the body, what good is that?”

I thought back to Pastor Marcus’s sermon on good and bad actions, Lila and her daughter, and the times I had passed people in need without even saying hello.

I decided to put my faith into action. The next week, I started volunteering at the front desk of a women’s shelter, helping women fill out forms or watching their kids while they talked with social workers.

From working for the past year at the women’s shelter, I now know I want to major in social work, caring for others instead of focusing on myself. I may not be a good person (or a bad one), but I can make good choices, helping others with every opportunity God gives me.

Word count: 622

This essay shows how a student’s natural affinity for solving a Rubik’s cube developed her self-understanding, academic achievement, and inspiration for her future career.

Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?

The worst part about writing is putting down my Rubik’s cube so that I can use my hands to type. That’s usually the worst part of tackling my to-do list: setting aside my Rubik’s cube. My parents call it an obsession. But, for me, solving a Rubik’s cube challenges my brain as nothing else can.

It started on my ninth birthday. I invited three friends for a sleepover party, and I waited to open my presents right before bed. Wrapping paper, ribbons, and bows flew through the air as I oohed and aahed over each delightful gift! However, it was the last gift—a 3 x 3 x 3 cube of little squares covered in red, green, blue, yellow, white, and orange—that intrigued me.

I was horrified when Bekka ripped it out of my hands and messed it all up! I had no idea how to make all the sides match again. I waited until my friends were fast asleep. Then, I grabbed that cube and studied it under my blanket with a flashlight, determined to figure out how to restore it to its former pristine state.

Within a few weeks, I had discovered the secret. To practice, I’d take my cube with me to recess and let the other kids time me while I solved it in front of them. The better I became, the more they gathered around. But I soon realized that their attention didn’t matter all that much. I loved solving cubes for hours wherever I was: at lunch, riding in the car, or alone in my room.

Cross. White corners. Middle-layer edges. Yellow cross. Sune and anitsune. 

The sequential algorithms became second nature, and with the assistance of a little black digital timer, I strove to solve the cube faster , each time attempting to beat my previous record. I watched speed solvers on YouTube, like Australia’s Feliks Zemdegs and Max Park from Massachusetts, but I wasn’t motivated to compete as they did. I watched their videos to learn how to improve my time. I liked finding new, more efficient ways of mastering the essential 78 separate cube-solving algorithms.

Now, I understand why my passion for my Rubik’s cube has never waned. Learning and applying the various algorithms soothes my brain and centers my emotions, especially when I feel overwhelmed from being around other people. Don’t get me wrong: I like other people—just in doses.

While some people get recharged by spending time with others, I can finally breathe when I’m alone with my cube. Our psychology teacher says the difference between an extrovert and an introvert is the situations that trigger their brains to produce dopamine. For me, it’s time away, alone, flipping through cube patterns to set a new personal best.

Sometimes, the world doesn’t cooperate with introverts, requiring them to interact with many people throughout the day. That’s why you’ll often find me in the stairwell or a library corner attempting to master another one of the 42 quintillion ways to solve a cube. My parents tease me that when I’ve “had enough” of anything, my fingers get a Rubik’s itch, and I suddenly disappear. I’m usually occupied for a while, but when I finally emerge, I feel centered, prepared to tackle my next task.

Secretly, I credit my cube with helping me earn top marks in AP Calculus, Chemistry, and Physics. It’s also responsible for my interest in computer engineering. It seems I just can’t get enough of those algorithms, which is why I want to study the design and implementation of cybersecurity software—all thanks to my Rubik’s cube.

Just don’t tell my parents! It would ruin all the fun!

Word count: 607

In this free topic essay, the student uses a montage structure inspired by the TV show Iron Chef America to demonstrate his best leadership moments.

Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.

Iron Chef America: College Essay Edition

The time has come to answer college’s most difficult question: Whose story shows glory?

This is … Iron Chef America: College Essay Edition!

Welcome to Kitchen Stadium! Today we have Chef Brett Lowell. Chef Brett will be put to the test to prove he has what it takes to attend university next fall.

And the secret ingredient is … leadership! He must include leadership in each of his dishes, which will later be evaluated by a panel of admissions judges.

So now, America, with a creative mind and empty paper, I say unto you in the words of my teacher: “Let’s write!”

Appetizer: My first leadership experience

A mountain of mismatched socks, wrinkled jeans, and my dad’s unironed dress shirts sat in front of me. Laundry was just one of many chores that welcomed me home once I returned from my after-school job at Baskin Robbins, a gig I had taken last year to help Dad pay the rent. A few years earlier, I wasn’t prepared to cook dinners, pay utility bills, or pick up and drop off my brothers. I thought those jobs were reserved for parents. However, when my father was working double shifts at the power plant and my mom was living in Tucson with her new husband, Bill, I stepped up and took care of the house and my two younger brothers.

Main course: My best leadership experience

Between waiting for the pasta water to boil and for the next laundry cycle to be finished, I squeezed in solving a few practice precalculus problems to prepare for the following week’s mathletics competition. I liked how the equations always had clear, clean answers, which calmed me among the mounting responsibilities of home life. After leading my team to the Minnesota State Finals for two years in a row, I was voted team captain. Although my home responsibilities often competed with my mathlete duties, I tried to be as productive as possible in my free time. On the bus ride home, I would often tackle 10 to 20 functions or budget the following week’s meals and corresponding grocery list. My junior year was rough, but both my home and my mathlete team needed me.

Dessert: My future leadership hopes 

The first thing I ever baked was a chocolate cake in middle school. This was around the time that Mom had just moved out and I was struggling with algebra. Troubles aside, one day my younger brother Simon needed a contribution for his school’s annual bake sale, and the PTA moms wouldn’t accept anything store-bought. So I carefully measured out the teaspoons and cups of various flours, powders, and oils, which resulted in a drooping, too-salty disaster.

Four years later, after a bakery’s worth of confections and many hours of study, I’ve perfected my German chocolate cake and am on my way to mastering Calculus AB. I’ve also thrown out the bitter-tasting parts of my past such as my resentment and anger toward my mom. I still miss having her at home, but whenever I have a baking question or want to update her on my mathlete team’s success, I call her or chat with her over text.

Whether in school or life, I see problems as opportunities, not obstacles, to find a better way to solve them more efficiently. I hope to continue improving my problem-solving skills next fall by majoring in mathematics and statistics.

Time’s up! 

We hope you’ve enjoyed this tasting of Chef Lowell’s leadership experiences. Next fall, tune in to see him craft new leadership adventures in college. He’s open to refining his technique and discovering new recipes.

Word count: 612

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The Common App essay is your primary writing sample within the Common Application, a college application portal accepted by more than 900 schools. All your prospective schools that accept the Common App will read this essay to understand your character, background, and value as a potential student.

Since this essay is read by many colleges, avoid mentioning any college names or programs; instead, save tailored answers for the supplementary school-specific essays within the Common App.

When writing your Common App essay , choose a prompt that sparks your interest and that you can connect to a unique personal story.

No matter which prompt you choose, admissions officers are more interested in your ability to demonstrate personal development , insight, or motivation for a certain area of study.

To decide on a good college essay topic , spend time thoughtfully answering brainstorming questions. If you still have trouble identifying topics, try the following two strategies:

• Identify your qualities → Brainstorm stories that demonstrate these qualities
• Identify memorable stories → Connect your qualities to these stories

You can also ask family, friends, or mentors to help you brainstorm topics, give feedback on your potential essay topics, or recall key stories that showcase your qualities.

A standout college essay has several key ingredients:

• A unique, personally meaningful topic
• A memorable introduction with vivid imagery or an intriguing hook
• Specific stories and language that show instead of telling
• Vulnerability that’s authentic but not aimed at soliciting sympathy
• Clear writing in an appropriate style and tone
• A conclusion that offers deep insight or a creative ending

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How to write an effective transfer student common app essay.

The path to a college degree is not as clear-cut as it has been in the past. Many students do not graduate from the same college in which they enroll their freshman year.

In fact, according to  data  collected by the National Student Clearinghouse Research Center, over one-third of college students transferred at least once over a period of six years.

If you find yourself a part of that statistic, now you know that you’re in good company.

There are a variety of reasons for transferring to a new school.

You may have decided on a major that is not offered at your current college, decided that your current college is not the right fit, or elected the increasingly popular option of starting out at a community college to acquire skills and save money.

Whatever your reason, transferring comes with the pain of having to apply for college again .

However, as a transfer student, you have the added benefit of firsthand experience on a college campus and a better idea of what you want and need out of a school.

This information is what the Common App essay for transfer students is all about.

How is the Common App Different for Transfer Students?

In case it’s been awhile, remember that the Common Application is a website which allows college applicants to fill out one application and send it to any of the 700+ schools that accept it.

Luckily, those colleges also accept applications from transfer students.

There are small variations between colleges.

For example, some schools do not require a transfer student essay , but you have the option of sending one anyway.

The Common App asks you to answer the following question in 250-650 words:

“ Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.”  

Finding Balance in Your Essay: Reasons and Objectives

It’s important when planning your essay to think about how you will answer both parts of the above question.

If you’re a student who has decided to transfer for academic reasons, you may spend more of your essay discussing your objectives and why the schools you are applying to have a program that will put you on the path to your career goals.

However, maybe you are transferring so that you can be closer to a sick relative and take care of them while still fulfilling your dream of graduating from college.

In this case, you may want to balance discussing why family obligations are important to you  as well as  how the new school can support you in your future success.

Your own personal situation will dictate the balance of your essay.

Therefore, it’s important to be self-reflective and use your word count wisely to give colleges a well-rounded perspective about why you are choosing to transfer.

Reasons for Transferring: What to Include and What to Avoid

It’s likely that your reasons for transferring and your objectives are closely tied.

If that’s the case, you can definitely write about them in conjunction rather than clearly separating them in your essay.

Think about your reasons for transferring.

• Did you plan this transfer ahead of time by starting at a two-year school?
• Does your current school not meet your academic needs?
• Does the school climate differ from what you were expecting as a freshman?

This last reason is definitely legitimate and, in the end, you have to make the right choices that will lead to your success and happiness in college.

To that end, be cautious in your approach when describing your reasoning. This is not the time or place to trash your current college.

Maintain a consistently respectful tone.

• After every paragraph, ask yourself whether your writing evokes positivity and vision. Why?
• Colleges don’t want to admit someone who is negative or gloomy — this would diminish their campus experience. 

If you find yourself turning the “reasons for transferring” into the likes of a Facebook rant, then you should consider shortening that section and focusing on your career objectives. 

Think of the future. Think of your dreams and ambitions.

Bring the Transfer Essay to Life

When discussing your reasons, be very specific.

Instead of writing that the college “didn’t offer the classes I needed to graduate,” you might write, “I decided at the end of my sophomore year that my true passion was education, and I would like to teach elementary school. However, my current college only offers master’s degrees in education, and I would not be able to obtain a license as an undergraduate.”

One strategy for uplifting your essay is to focus on what the new college has rather than to dwell on what your current one doesn’t.

Do your research.

If you’re having a tough time thinking of perks of the new college, go to their website.

Also, visit the website of the school newspaper and academic program in which you want to be a part. 

By doing this, you can select elements that appeal to you and fit in with your dreams.

• Are there professors and other faculty members you’d like to study with?
• Does the building in which the program resides have resources you’d like to utilize?
• Are there alumni whose work you’d like to draw on add to?
• Is the university in a location that provides resources for curious minds? Are there monuments, memorials, and libraries nearby? If you choose to write about this, make sure to frame these elements within your interests. Don’t simply write about what the surrounding environment has to offer.

Rather than writing that “campus life is boring and there is nothing to do,” you may say “There are limited choices for extracurricular activities at my school. Part of my reason for transferring is because I want to become more ingrained in the campus community by participating in activities such as…”

Not only does this strategy keep you from sounding gloomy, but it also demonstrates your dedication and excitement for joining a new campus. You want colleges to think that you’re going to contribute to their campus.

This strategy converts an essay with a negative tone to one that is positive and includes more information about you as a student.

• Using details to paint a portrait of your future will also exhibit your ambitions.

Colleges love ambitious students because ambitious students become successful professionals. And successful professionals become generous donors. 

How to Sell Your Objectives by Sharing Your Passion

Obtaining a college education and deciding on a major is an extremely personal and complex decision.

When you discuss the “objectives you hope to achieve,” the enthusiasm and thought behind your choices should be evident.

Colleges want to know that you are passionate and excited about your future (as well as how they factor into your dreams).

Describe your goals in college and how accomplishing those will help you achieve your long-term career/life goals.

Add detail about the reasons why you are attracted to a new school, and why you chose this particular career path.

You might also consider questions such as:

• How will you benefit the campus community?
• How do you plan to help or improve your community or the world as a member of your field?  

While writing, don’t forget your audience. Admissions officers want to read about how you’ll benefit from and give back to campus.

Be an active player in your future. Show that you’re thinking about campus life in a larger context. 

If you are sending the Common App to only one college, it’s okay to use specific detail about that college in your essay.

However, if you are using the one essay to apply to multiple colleges, be careful. You do not want to send an email describing how you have always wanted to attend College A to College B. 

Conclusion: The Finish Line, Any Last Words

As with any college application, the essay is an opportunity to discuss anything about you that may not be apparent in the rest of the application.

After you have finished writing a draft essay, carefully go through your entire application to see if you have left out any important pieces of information.

If you follow the advice above, you will surely write a Common App transfer student essay that will wow and woo the college admissions readers. Happy writing!

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The following sample essay was written by a student named David. He wrote the transfer essay below for the Common Transfer Application in response to the prompt, "Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve" (250 to 650 words). David is attempting to transfer from Amherst College to the University of Pennsylvania . As far as admissions standards go, this is a lateral move—both schools are extremely selective. His letter will need to be extremely strong for his transfer application to be successful.

Key Takeaways: A Winning Transfer Essay

• Have a clear academic reason for your transfer. Personal reasons are fine, but academics need to come first.
• Stay positive. Don't speak badly of your current school. Emphasize what you like about your target school, not what you dislike about your current school.
• Be meticulous. Grammar, punctuation, and style matter. Show that you put time and care into your writing.

David's Transfer Application Essay

During the summer after my first year of college, I spent six weeks volunteering at an archaeological excavation in Hazor, site of the largest tel (mound) in Israel. My time in Hazor was not easy—wake-up came at 4:00 a.m., and by noontime temperatures were often in the 90s. The dig was sweaty, dusty, back-breaking work. I wore out two pairs of gloves and the knees in several pairs of khakis. Nevertheless, I loved every minute of my time in Israel. I met interesting people from around the world, worked with amazing students and faculty from Hebrew University, and became fascinated with the current efforts to create a portrait of life in the Canaanite period.

Upon my return to Amherst College for my sophomore year, I soon came to realize that the school does not offer the exact major I now hope to pursue. I'm majoring in anthropology, but the program at Amherst is almost entirely contemporary and sociological in its focus. More and more my interests are becoming archaeological and historical. When I visited Penn this fall, I was impressed by the breadth of offerings in anthropology and archaeology, and I absolutely loved your Museum of Archaeology and Anthropology. Your broad approach to the field with emphases on understanding both the past and present has great appeal to me. By attending Penn, I hope to broaden and deepen my knowledge in anthropology, participate in more summer field work, volunteer at the museum, and eventually, go on to graduate school in archaeology.

My reasons for transferring are almost entirely academic. I have made many good friends at Amherst, and I have studied with some wonderful professors. However, I do have one non-academic reason for being interested in Penn. I originally applied to Amherst because it was comfortable—I come from a small town in Wisconsin, and Amherst felt like home. I'm now looking forward to pushing myself to experience places that aren't quite so familiar. The kibbutz at Kfar HaNassi was one such environment, and the urban environment of Philadelphia would be another.

As my transcript shows, I have done well at Amherst and I am convinced I can meet the academic challenges of Penn. I know I would grow at Penn, and your program in anthropology perfectly matches my academic interests and professional goals.

Before we even get to the critique of David's essay, it's important to put his transfer into context. David is attempting to transfer into an  Ivy League  school. Penn is not the most selective of the country's top universities, but the transfer acceptance rate is still around 6% (at Harvard and Stanford, that number is closer to 1%). David needs to approach this effort at transfer realistically — even with excellent grades and a stellar essay, his chances of success are far from guaranteed.

That said, he has many things going for him — he is coming from an equally demanding college where he has earned good grades, and he seems like the type of student who will certainly succeed at Penn. He will need strong  letters of recommendation  to round out his application.

Analysis of David's Transfer Essay

Now on to the essay... Let's break down the discussion of David's transfer essay into several categories.

The Reasons for Transfer

The strongest feature of David's essay is the focus. David is pleasingly specific in presenting his reasons for transferring. He knows exactly what he wants to study, and he has a clear understanding of what both Penn and Amherst have to offer him. David's description of his experience in Israel defines the focus of his essay, and he then connects that experience to his reasons for wanting to transfer. There are lots of bad reasons to transfer, but David's clear interest in studying anthropology and archaeology makes his motives seem both well thought-out and reasonable.

Many transfer applicants are trying to move to a new college because they are running away from some kind of bad experience, sometimes something academic, sometimes something more personal. David, however, clearly likes Amherst and is running towards something—an opportunity at Penn that better matches his newly discovered professional goals. This is a big positive factor for his application.

The Common Transfer Application instructions state that the essay needs to be at least 250 words. The maximum length is 650 words. David's essay comes in at around 380 words. It is tight and concise. He doesn't waste time talking about his disappointments with Amherst, nor does he put much effort into explaining the things that other parts of his application will cover such as grades and extracurricular involvement. He does have a lot more space left to elaborate, but in this case the letter gets the job done well with few words.

David gets the tone perfect, something that is difficult to do in a transfer essay. Let's face it—if you are transferring it is because there is something about your current school that you don't like. It's easy to be negative and critical of your classes, your professors, your college environment, and so on. It's also easy to come across as a whiner or an ungenerous and angry person who doesn't have the inner resources to make the most of one's circumstances. David avoids these pitfalls. His representation of Amherst is extremely positive. He praises the school while noting that the curricular offerings do not match his professional goals.

The Personality

Partly because of the tone discussed above, David comes across as a pleasant person, someone who the admissions folks are likely to want to have as part of their campus community. Moreover, David presents himself as someone who likes to push himself to grow. He is honest in his reasons for going to Amherst—the school seemed like a good "fit" given his small-town upbringing. It is, therefore, impressive to see him so actively working to expand his experiences beyond his provincial roots. David has clearly grown at Amherst, and he is looking forward to growing more at Penn.

The Writing

When applying to a place like Penn, the technical aspects of the writing need to be flawless. David's prose is clear, engaging and free of errors. If you struggle on this front, be sure to check out these  tips for improving your essay's style . And if grammar isn't your greatest strength, be sure to work through your essay with someone who does have strong grammar skills.

A Final Word on David's Transfer Essay

David's college transfer essay does exactly what an essay needs to do, and he includes the features of a strong transfer essay . He clearly articulates his reasons for transferring, and he does so in a positive and specific way. David presents himself as a serious student with clear academic and professional goals. We have little doubt that he has the skills and intellectual curiosity to succeed at Penn, and he has made a strong argument about why this particular transfer makes a lot of sense.

Odds are still against David's success given the competitive nature of Ivy League transfers, but he has strengthened his application with his essay.

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Looking to transfer colleges? The Common App is making it easier than ever with the new Common App for Transfer Students. All required materials are now in one place, so you don’t have to worry about staying on top of multiple applications and websites during an already stressful time in your life.

In this article, you’ll find tips and step-by-step instructions on how to fill out your transfer application and feel great about what you submit.

The Common Application, or Common App, is a platform used by many schools for the college application process. Since schools typically ask for the same data when it comes to personal information and a general essay, the Common App provides a singular place where applicants can enter their information. The platform then allows your selected schools access to your application. Some colleges may have individual supplemental essays that you’ll need to write, but your personal information and Common App essay are only entered once.

In the past, transfer students would have to fill out applications through each school’s transfer applications. However, the Common App now has a program available for students who are looking to transfer, making the application process that much easier.

Step 1: Creating and Logging into your account

When you go to the Common App website and click “Create an Account,” it will ask you whether you are a first-year or transfer student.

Choose “Transfer Student.” You will be asked to provide personal information to create your account.

Step 2: Navigating the Dashboard

Once you’ve created your account, a page will appear where you can add programs that you would like to apply to, arranged in alphabetical order.

You can either add directly from this list by clicking on the plus sign or search for a school using the search bar at the top of the page. Once you choose programs, you will be given the chance to review your choices and proceed to your application dashboard. If you click “Skip for Now,” you will be taken directly to your application dashboard. 

Step 3: Filling out the Common App for Transfers

Personal information.

Clicking on “Personal Information” will open this menu. 

To fill out each section, just click on the individual headers. You will need to provide communication preferences, demographics, and contact information for yourself and your parents/guardians. The Common App also offers options for financial support through the “Common App Fee Waiver” section.

Academic History

In this section, you will need to fill out your past academic information. This includes any high schools and colleges you attended; coursework you completed at your past colleges; your GPA(s); standardized test scores such as the SAT Subject Test, AP or IB tests, College Level Examination Program exams, or Senior Secondary Leaving Examinations; and Continuing Education Courses you’ve taken.

Supporting Information

This section is where you can take the opportunity to include anything that is specific to you that will help you stand out during the application process.

Things to list under “Experiences” include community engagement, extracurricular activities, family responsibilities, hobbies, volunteering, work, internships, research, and other meaningful experiences. “Achievements” can be both academic and professional. For “Documents,” this will differ based on the school. Typically, you can upload a resume, military transcript, or visa documentation if needed, and schools will list on their website whether they require any additional documents. Finally, the “Affirmation Statements” section is simply a list of statements affirming that the information you have provided is your own and that you will take responsibility for your own application process.

Program Materials

In this section, you will be provided with information about any individual application requirements for each college you are applying to.

Clicking on the button for a college will take you to its page in the Common App. “Home” houses contact information for the school, while “Questions” is a list of demographic questions compiled by the college itself. You will have to fill these out in addition to the “Personal Information” section of the Common App, as these questions are specific to each school. “Documents” is where you can upload any documentation, while “Recommendations” is where you can include any academic, personal, or professional letters of recommendation.

Step 4: Submitting the Common App for Transfer Students

While there are less sections for transfer students than for first-year applicants, the typical requirements are the same. In addition to personal information, students are still asked to provide essays, letters of recommendation, and information about extracurricular activities. Ensure that you leave time to thoroughly review your application. The Common App notifies you about any unfinished sections, but it’s best to look over everything yourself as well.

Registration for the 2021-2022 Common App for transfer students closes on July 29 at 5pm ET, so you must create your account before then. Deadlines for individual school applications differ, so be sure to consider deadlines that may have already passed when looking at schools.

After you’ve reviewed your application and have made sure you are ready to submit, go to “Submit Application.” 

Your progress bar should be completely filled. When you reach this point, click the “Submit” button. The following steps will only become visible to you once you’ve completed your application; if anything is missing, the button will be grayed out, like in the screenshot above.

Once you click “Submit,” you will be able to review your application for the last time, so take the time to thoroughly go over each section. After that, you will be directed to the payment portal for the college to which you are applying. If you have requested a Common App fee waiver, you will not be required to make a payment at this point.

Once your application fee is submitted, sign and date your application and click “Submit” on your Common App. 

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Common App essay examples that got applicants into top colleges

Composing essays for your college application is a challenging task. It is not enough to prepare a ‘good’ essay. College admissions committees review thousands upon thousands of college essays annually, making it crucial that your Common App essays stand out.

The good news is there are plenty of Common App essay examples available to get you started on your writing and provide you some much needed inspiration. Read on to learn about common application essays and check out the examples. 

The “Why us?” App Essay

The “diversity” app essay, the “challenges” app essay, the “community” app essay, the “extra-curricular activities” app essay, the “personal statement” app essay.

The purpose of a “why did you choose this college” essay is to help you persuade admissions committees that you are a good match. The essay is a chance for you to introduce yourself and talk about your passions. It is also important to exhibit genuine enthusiasm for the institution.

Sample answer from Essays That Worked: “The only reason I fear going for lunch in a hotel is probably because I wouldn’t choose between fried chicken and roasted meat and so is my dilemma over my college major. The multifaceted whole brain approach at McCormick, however, grants me the perfect opportunity to pursue my interest in Computer Science whilst acquiring the appropriate skills in entrepreneurship to a one day startup as an innovator.

As a NU computer scientist, I particularly look forward to Software Development EECS 473 – NUvention: Web, through which I would not only learn intricacies of Software development, but have related studies in real time software development in relation to market requirements in CS+X that would form a base for a startup. That would also provide a bridge for me to join Prof Todd Warren at Farley Center for Entrepreneurship and Innovation where I would specifically join the NUvention; Web + Media. Through this unparalleled program I would have the intimacy of working in a team with fellow wild cats towards an innovative business project. The results of which will be an introduction to the Northwestern Innovation and New Ventures Office (INVO) through which I look forward to gaining practical exposure in launching businesses to the general public.

Outside McCormick, I would be excited to pursue the Managerial analytics Certificate program at Kellogg to acquire intelligent business management skills, let off steam at SPARK exploring hacks while fostering entrepreneurial habits, and eventually joining preparations for the Benedictine Eagle Invite at the Henry Crown Sports Pavilion (SPAC) with the NU track club. I may not be the best of singers, but I do have intense phases of music obsessions and where better to let it off than taking non major classes at Bienen and joining one of the numerous Acapella groups as I await Armadillo day!”

Why does this essay work? 

The essay refers to specific programs and events that are unique to the school. The author also connects his personal interests with the type of activities he would like to engage in. The focus is on a handful of initiatives the author would be most interested in.

A diversity essay highlights the applicant’s unique background, identity, culture, beliefs, or connections to a particular community. It underlines what sets the applicant apart. These essays are used by colleges to promote diversity on campus, enhance the learning environment, and identify candidates eligible for scholarships aimed at underrepresented groups.

Sample Answer from Boston College : “I’m angry and I’m tired of pretending otherwise. There have been too many riots, too many marches, too many people shouting into uncaring ears when Black people get treated the way we do. How many dead fathers, sons, mothers, and daughters have to move from the front page of the news to the bottom of the social media feed before we get recognized and listened to. I just want to be heard. I have given up on the idea of waking up in a world where I am not afraid, angry, and weary. Maybe that world is for my grandkids, or my great-grandkids, but not me.

My mother and my father, my aunts and uncles, they were all very active in the protests – often at the front of the line – and they did not come through unscathed. They had bruises and blood spilt, they had broken bones. I know they will return to that battlefield, to protest peacefully until they cannot maintain that rank any longer. From these noble people I received my sense of righteous anger. But I also got good advice on how to use it well.

They know that protests are one thing, but action is another, and my mind has been geared toward law school for some time now, because I wanted to bring about the major changes that are needed for our society to move on. So, in addition to protests, I have been taking pre-law courses, and I have acquired a part-time job in the law firm where my uncle works, and while it is a small, office job, I get to spend a lot of time with my uncle learning about how to bring positive change by fighting big and little battles. Of course, he is also showing me how to fight those battles.

Anger alone isn’t going to settle anything, which is why I believe in making a better world with my actions and rhetoric. But I am still frustrated and furious, and while I am trying to find a hopeful place to get to, I’ll repeat that I don’t think we’ll see the better world I want. Maybe our grandkids, but not us. Hold on to that, get angry, and join me in pushing forward for them.”

The applicant talks about their personal experience beyond a general push for diversity. This authenticity makes the essay stand out, as it provides a genuine insight into the applicant’s life and character.The essay clearly articulates the applicant’s motivation for pursuing law school as a means to enact social change. It shows a thoughtful progression from anger and frustration to actionable goals and aspirations, which is exactly what admissions committees look for — students who are motivated by their experiences to make a positive impact.

This type of essay requires you to choose an obstacle you have encountered, explain how it impacted you, and outline the steps you took to overcome it. Life during college and beyond can be unpredictable. Through this essay, the admissions committee wants to see that you are adaptable, resilient, and able to think critically to solve problems. 

Sample Answer from CollegeVine: “You ruined my life!” After months of quiet anger, my brother finally confronted me. To my shame, I had been appallingly ignorant of his pain.

Despite being twins, Max and I are profoundly different. Having intellectual interests from a young age that, well, interested very few of my peers, I often felt out of step in comparison with my highly-social brother. Everything appeared to come effortlessly for Max and, while we share an extremely tight bond, his frequent time away with friends left me feeling more and more alone as we grew older.

When my parents learned about The Green Academy, we hoped it would be an opportunity for me to find not only an academically challenging environment, but also – perhaps more importantly – a community. This meant transferring the family from Drumfield to Kingston. And while there was concern about Max, we all believed that given his sociable nature, moving would be far less impactful on him than staying put might be on me.

As it turned out, Green Academy was everything I’d hoped for. I was ecstatic to discover a group of students with whom I shared interests and could truly engage. Preoccupied with new friends and a rigorous course load, I failed to notice that the tables had turned. Max, lost in the fray and grappling with how to make connections in his enormous new high school, had become withdrawn and lonely. It took me until Christmas time – and a massive argument – to recognize how difficult the transition had been for my brother, let alone that he blamed me for it.

Through my own journey of searching for academic peers, in addition to coming out as gay when I was 12, I had developed deep empathy for those who had trouble fitting in. It was a pain I knew well and could easily relate to. Yet after Max’s outburst, my first response was to protest that our parents – not I – had chosen to move us here. In my heart, though, I knew that regardless of who had made the decision, we ended up in Kingston for my benefit. I was ashamed that, while I saw myself as genuinely compassionate, I had been oblivious to the heartache of the person closest to me. I could no longer ignore it – and I didn’t want to.

We stayed up half the night talking, and the conversation took an unexpected turn. Max opened up and shared that it wasn’t just about the move. He told me how challenging school had always been for him, due to his dyslexia, and that the ever-present comparison to me had only deepened his pain.

We had been in parallel battles the whole time and, yet, I only saw that Max was in distress once he experienced problems with which I directly identified. I’d long thought Max had it so easy – all because he had friends. The truth was, he didn’t need to experience my personal brand of sorrow in order for me to relate – he had felt plenty of his own.

My failure to recognize Max’s suffering brought home for me the profound universality and diversity of personal struggle; everyone has insecurities, everyone has woes, and everyone – most certainly – has pain. I am acutely grateful for the conversations he and I shared around all of this, because I believe our relationship has been fundamentally strengthened by a deeper understanding of one another. Further, this experience has reinforced the value of constantly striving for deeper sensitivity to the hidden struggles of those around me. I won’t make the mistake again of assuming that the surface of someone’s life reflects their underlying story.”

For a ‘challenge’ essay, admissions committees look for evidence of resilience, problem-solving, and the ability to learn from difficult situations. This essay effectively addresses these criteria, presenting the writer as someone who has faced interpersonal challenges, reflected on their actions, and emerged more aware and compassionate.

The “Community” essay will prompt students to talk about a community to which they belong and what role they have played in that community. You can start by discussing a community you have previously been involved with and then outline how you intend to sustain your engagement with a similar community in college to give the admissions office an idea of what on-campus activities you would like to participate in. 

Sample answer from Baylor University : “Since getting involved in helping the homeless, I learned that for a time one of my relatives was homeless. When you have a house it’s easy to take it for granted, but all it takes is some bad luck for you to lose it. This is why I feel it’s so important that we all try to help those who have no home to go to.

As hard as it was to motivate others to volunteer and help out with our fundraiser, it was worth it in the end. We raised over $1,000 for the hurricane victims. Now when we see news coverage of that terrible disaster at least we know that we have done our small part to help. 

The reward for being a coach has nothing to do with winning games. The reward is seeing everyone working as a team and enjoying the game. Win or lose, as a coach you’re always proud after each game.”

Overall, this essay works because it skillfully combines personal motivation with community action, challenges faced during these endeavors, and reflections on what truly constitutes a reward. It not only showcases the applicant’s commitment to addressing community issues but also highlights valuable character traits such as empathy, leadership, and resilience. 

The essay about your extracurricular activities aims to provide admissions officers with insight into your involvement in extracurriculars and how that has influenced and inspired you. Rather than listing the activities mentioned in your resume, you should delve into how the extracurricular activities have impacted and shaped you.  

Sample answer from Admit Report : “As an impressionable six-year-old, I watched Meryl Streep-portrayed Miranda Priestly shape fashion history with a single word of disgust. I longed for my words to have such an impact.

Now, as an editor-in-chief myself, I oversee daily operations of The Hallway, my high school’s newspaper. Instead of shaping global fashion trends, I impact my community by ensuring everyone stays informed.

My place as editor-in-chief was solidified when, in March of last year, we published a breaking story. After a tip to our newspaper email address, a fellow reporter and I uncovered an academic dishonesty scandal. We conducted interviews, dug into school files, and reviewed old test keys to discover the cheating. My reporter wrote the story, and I edited it and put it on the front page. Our story became so big that it was republished in our city’s local newspaper.

Leading my team through this investigation taught me just how important journalism is. Even when people might be upset with what you write, what’s most important is the truth. People can’t make decisions if they’re uninformed about the facts. And reporters can’t investigate and write those stories without the support of a leader who’s willing to put in the work, too.

I doubt I’ll ever predict what we’ll be wearing next spring. But I know that my words will continue to have a deep impact on my community, and I can’t wait to find the next big story at The Catalyst.”

The applicant reflects on what they learned through their experience, especially the value of truth and the role of leadership in journalism.The essay concludes with a forward-looking statement, expressing eagerness to continue making an impact through journalism. This not only highlights the applicant’s passion for their extracurricular activity but also their intention to pursue this interest further, suggesting potential for future growth and contributions.

Through this essay, you can get the opportunity to show the college admissions committee who you are and why you deserve to be admitted to their school. The essay demonstrates the type of individual you are beyond  your academic grades and test scores. It is a chance for you to stand out as an individual. 

Sample answer from College Advisor : “Gymnastics has always been a part of my life and has shaped who I am today. Without gymnastics I would not have the same determined mindset, competitive nature, and appreciation of a team. If I were to neglect sharing this aspect of my life, my application would truly be incomplete.

When I was two years old, my parents enrolled me in the Parent-and-Me program at Countryside Gymnastics. At six, I became part of the pre-team program, Dynamos, and was placed in the compulsory team at age seven.  As a compulsory, I struggled to be as good as my teammates. This struggle caused frustration which evolved into determination and a competitive nature. Throughout the rest of my compulsory years, I gradually improved but still felt as though I were stuck. I knew I had to “up my game.”

The optional levels, 7 and up, brought a new factor—fear. Even though this fear did hold me back at times, I did not let it keep me from achieving my goals. Gymnastics is also extremely tough on the body. Once I entered the optional level of gymnastics, I trained at least 20 hours a week and endured the aches and pains that came along with it. However, I did not let these pains defeat me. When I reached level 9, I began to experience severe back pain, which a spine specialist diagnosed as a subcutaneous lipoma. Although the physician highly recommended I stop training to avoid complications later in life, I was too committed to stop the sport.  I let my desire push me through the pain, and I had a successful competition season, qualifying for the Region 8 Regional Competition in Jackson, Mississippi. 

During summer training in 2013, I worked as hard as possible to reach level 10, with the back pain progressively worsening. Once my pain peaked, my coach told me it may be time to “hang it up.” I could either quit or repeat level 9 with minimal training. Ultimately, the choice was mine. To prove I was capable of reaching level 10 and to support my team, I continued to train on a vigorous schedule. At level 10, I am the highest level gymnast at Countryside Gymnastics and am determined to have an exceptional competition season.

This determination and competitiveness that pushes me to accomplish my goals in gymnastics also exists in my current scholastics—the health sciences, which will ultimately prepare me for my future in pediatric medicine. Without the desire to be the best I can be, I might not have achieved success throughout my high school years.”

This personal statement application essay effectively showcases the applicant’s character, resilience, and the transferability of skills learned through sports to academic and personal pursuits.It is also well-structured, with a clear narrative arc that engages the reader from the beginning to the end.

These essays are a vital component of the college application. It’s an opportunity for applicants to showcase their personality, experiences, and values in a way that grades and test scores cannot. The example essays can give you ideas on themes, topics, or approaches you might want to consider and help you understand what makes an essay effective in terms of structure, tone, and content.

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How to Write a Great Transfer Essay

Here is the most common prompt for transfer students applying through the Common App :  

“Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.” (250-600 words)

The three key steps to mastering the transfer essay are as follows:

Step One: Establish why you want to transfer.

Tell admissions why you want to transfer, and do so without speaking negatively about your current institution. Are you looking for a bigger school? Do you want to attend a university in a tech-centric city? Did you just discover your passion for a major that your current institution doesn’t offer? Transferring is a big decision, so it’s important to show that your intentions are clear. Whatever the reason, refrain from speaking ill of your current school. You want to come off as optimistic and forward thinking to admissions.  

Step Two: Demonstrate your interest.

Why are you applying to this school in particular? You’ve been through the admissions cycle before and you are wiser than you were a year or two ago. Admissions officers will expect that you’ve done your research and are making a calculated, thoughtful decision to transfer. Your interest in transferring to one school should be directly related to your reason for leaving your current school: What gaps or unmet needs will your prospective institution address? Do you want to transfer for the school’s humongous alumni network, award-winning journalism program, or non-profit affiliations? Have you always dreamed of living in the city in which the school is located? Make sure admissions knows that you aren’t applying because “it’s gotta be better than my current school” but because this school is where you feel you truly belong. Illustrate your drive and maybe you’ll be hitting the ground running come the fall. (Hint: the best way to get the information you need is by setting aside a chunk of time to pore over the school website. Sorry, there’s no shortcut, even the second time around.)

Step Three: Establish the highlights of your collegiate career so far.

You have an edge that most freshman don’t: You’ve already been to college, so you know a bit more about the experience as well as your own academic and career goals. Being able to say that you know you will succeed at your school of choice because you flourish in small classrooms, lead in group projects, excel in the math and sciences or whatever your reasoning may be is crucial. Talk about what you have enjoyed about college thus far (again, be positive!) and how you hope to build on your experience at your (hopefully) new school!

Once you complete these three steps, you will have all the ingredients for a fantastic transfer essay! But before you hit submit, a final word of warning: some schools require transfer applicants to submit supplemental essays (remember those?). Do yourself a favor and compile a list of these in advance to ensure that every essay you write reveals something new and special to admissions. But first, give yourself a pat on the back. By reading this post, you’ve already given yourself a leg up (at least we think so). Go you!  

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Essays That Work: How to Write a Strong Common App Personal Statement

As a writer myself, I have always loved the art of storytelling. When executed well, stories have not just the power of capturing a reader’s attention and imparting knowledge, but they often also leave a lasting impression on their readers – which, when you think of a college application, is exactly what you want to do. As a former admissions counselor and admissions reader, I have personally read thousands of college admissions essays, and yet in those roles – only a few have stood out as truly memorable. Perhaps this is why essays are my favorite part of the college application process in my work with students, but working with my students to uncover their voice, to tell their own personal stories in unique and creative ways is both a privilege and an absolute joy. To help you get started in uncovering your own personal narrative, I am going to walk you through what constitutes a strong admissions essay – focusing on the main essay that most students write: The Common Application Personal Statement . 

What is the Common Application?

The Common App is the most popular online system used by colleges and universities to help students apply to their college. Hundreds of colleges and universities accept the Common App , though it’s important to note that some schools do not participate (i.e. the UC schools are one example). As its name implies, the Common App is one centralized application that you can send to all participating colleges and universities who accept it (talk about a time-saver). While each school has the option to ask additional questions (and additional, custom to their school, supplement essays) – the main part of the application, and thus, the main essay – the personal statement, will be sent to almost every school that you apply to.

The Common App Personal Statement

The Common App essay, known as your Personal Statement, has a 650-word maximum word count, and as a writer, you have 7 prompts to pick from. While I will list the prompts for the 2023-2024 application cycle below, I strongly encourage you to write your essay first, and then choose the prompt to match it later – I’ll explain why below. 

Below is the full set of Common App Personal Statement prompts for 2023-2024.

• Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
• The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
• Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
• Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?
• Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
• Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
• Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.

So often when we read prompts like these, we can be tempted to respond to the question quite literally. “ An accomplishment that sparked a period of personal growth for me was when …”, sound familiar? In reading those prompts, you might have even started to brainstorm your own responses with that exact sort of sentence structure. Imagine how many others also brainstormed in that sort of way, and then began their essay responses in this fashion. This is exactly the reason why I recommend figuring out what prompt your essays responds to, after you have written your essay. Do not trap yourself in such a literal box. Admissions teams are curious to see how you will approach your essays – approaching your writing in the same way as the large majority of applicants, does not set you apart, nor does it do much to show your creativity of thought.

So Then, How Do I Start?

First: know what your reader is looking for.

When I introduce my students to writing college essays, I always try to remind them that their application consists of various pieces of evidence that are all working together to hopefully make a strong case for them to be admitted at the respective schools to which they are applying. Supporting documentation like transcripts, recommendation letters, test scores, etc. all play a role in the review of a file – but how a student represents themselves, in the form of their writing pieces especially, can set the overall tone and narrative of who an applicant really is. 

When evaluating applicants in a sea of strong applications, admissions counselors are looking for top students who also present strong narratives. What exactly does this mean? If a student’s resume has a bunch of different activities that show off several sides of them, and then their essay shows off yet another completely different side of them and doesn’t compliment the rest of their file – the application can feel somewhat disjointed. In these instances, it’s hard to really get a pulse of who this student is, what their actual passions and interests are, nor is it easy to see how the student will contribute to the respective college or university community.  On the contrary, a student with a strong narrative – each piece of the application file works harmoniously together, to paint the scene of who this student is, what this student aims to achieve, and how this student will make a difference in a campus community. When there is this sort of cohesion present, a strong narrative results. Strong narratives allow your admissions reader to truly understand you, which ultimately, is what they need to be able to do, to effectively lobby for you in admissions committee. 

Brainstorming Your Essay Idea

I would encourage you to look at your resume and life story and look at the themes that present. What is your overarching narrative? From that, I would encourage you to think of 3-5 storylines from your life, that best tell how your narrative came to be what it is. Why is it that you are excited about the major you are indicating? How did you get here? Usually, I recommend fleshing out at least 2-3 of these ideas in outline form and see which of the possibilities best represent you as an applicant. I have students talk about everything from feeling helpless as a tourist on vacation but not being a tourist in their own life/community, to the loss of a sibling and how it inspired them in their future endeavors, to the beauty of deer grazing in the backyard. I think that as you are thinking of your idea, it’s important to remember that the goal of this essay is for the admissions team at each of your respective institutions to feel like they know you better at the end of this essay. Pick a storyline that best represents you at your core. They want to see how your passions developed, what motivates/drives you, and they want to get a sense for where you are going.

Note: This is Not a Resume Dump

The personal statement is diving into one storyline – it is not the place to brag about all of the things you have accomplished in life thus far. A common misperception is that you have to use your essay to highlight each of your most impressive accomplishments. This is what the activities and honors list sections of the Common App are for. Your personal statement needs to be a window into your life – it’s not your full autobiography. 

Writing Your Essay

I would encourage you to devote a good portion of time to essay writing and development. This is not something you can wait to do until the last minute – it requires intention and a great deal of effort to really nail this kind of writing. The majority of my students spend 4-6 weeks on writing this essay – if you write yours in a day and call it quits thereafter, it will likely show in your application results. Additionally, this essay is 650-words in length, maximum. I strongly encourage that your essay be between 600-650 words, in its final iteration. It is easier to start with more and then trim down to 650, so don’t limit your writing at first – see how it flows and once you have your essay’s first draft, you can work on trimming it down. I recommend you write and edit in either a Word document or in google docs – do not write and edit your essay within the Common App itself. Once your essay is ready to be added to your Common App – you can add it then but do all work on it outside of the Common App itself.

Recommended Outline for a Personal Statement

A 650-word essay like this is usually about 5 paragraphs in length. As this is a descriptive essay, you want to open your essay in descriptive text. A great idea here is to incorporate the senses – whether that be sights, sounds, tastes, or smells, paint the scene of your story in your opening. Take your reader alongside you in this opening, we want to feel like we are there, experiencing as you are.

In your second, third, and fourth paragraphs – you should zoom out more and introduce us to what your storyline actually is. In the meat of your essay, we should see how you got to where you are in your journey and have a good read on where you plan to go from here. Utilizing details on how you plan to explore this further in college (though remember: this essay goes to all colleges, so don’t put any specific college or university names or information in this essay), allows the admissions team to see how you will quickly assimilate at their school and the impact you will likely have.

Your final paragraph is your summary, and it should always tie back to your opening. Whatever story you kicked your essay off with, you need to refer back to it here. I like to tell my students that this is where you leave the reader with an impact of some kind. A realization or lesson, or some knowledge that could have only resulted thanks to the story you just told, is great. 

Essays That Worked

There are several colleges that share “Essays That Worked” yearly, to serve as an example of what other students have done for their essays. What I particularly like about these is that the college admissions team will also usually give notes on what “worked” about the essays they chose to share. My favorite Essays That Worked pages to explore yearly are:

Johns Hopkins University Essays That Worked

Hamilton College Essays That Worked

Connecticut College Essays That Worked

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How to Write Your Transfer Essay for the Common App

by j9robinson | Dec 31, 2013

I thought it would be a good opportunity to share my approach to writing the main Transfer Essay required by schools that use The Common Application.

My son, though with great reluctance, agreed to be my guinea pig.

I wanted to walk through the steps and chronicled the brainstorming/planning process:

We started by reviewing the prompt for the Common App transfer essayt:   “Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.” (250-650 words)

There are two main questions they want students to answer:

1. What are your reasons for transferring ?

2. What objectives (goals) do you hope to achieve?

We agreed that the first part would take up most of the essay, about three-quarters.

Unlike the regular Common App prompt for incoming freshman, this prompt was less open-ended, and wasn’t looking for a classic “personal statement” essay.

It’s a direct question: Why do you want to change schools and attend a new school?

Not a: “Who are you?” question.

The transfer essay should try to answer the questions as directly as possible, and back up the main points with specific examples.

Still, I believe students should use this essay as an opportunity to reveal their personality and individuality as much as possible.

Students don’t need to use a narrative style, but I believe a story-telling format makes the best essays.

In a way, you are telling the “story” of your educational journey, and explaining a shift in your path.

You describe where you started and why, how it went so far (current school) and what you learned there, what changed and why, what you intend to study (your major) at your next school, and what what you hope to accomplish there and in the future with that degree.  

Unlike most incoming freshman, transfer students need to have a clear idea of what they want to study.

Most are required to select a major at this juncture. That in itself gives these essays a strong focus.

I thought it would be a good idea to start the session with my son by fleshing out some of his core or defining qualities that he thinks would make him effective in his chosen major : chemical engineering.

Even if he didn’t include any of these ideas in his transfer essay, I believe it’s helpful for students to have a sense of who they are and articulate those before starting to write.

My son told me things, such as, “I find that I can get my head around complex ideas relatively quickly,” and “I like to see how things work, but also want to know more, how they can be used in other ways.”

I wrote down some of his statements, which he could refer back to later when he started writing.

( Find Your Voice shows why you could benefit by having another person question you to help you capture your unique language for your essay, the same way I did for my son.)

With the “why transfer” question, you need to talk about what inspired your interest in your field , and how that evolved and developed over the years, and what eventually led you to seeking a new school .

So I asked my son to think about some specific touch points in his life that sparked his interest in sciences, and specifically chemistry and engineering.

You don’t need to include all of these, but it helps to compile a short list.

If your essay traces this progression, it will have a natural order that makes it simple to write: chronologically!

My son remembered different experiments he did with various teachers over the years in both high school and college.

I also thought it was important to highlight the positive experiences he had at his current school, and then use those as a springboard to explain why he wanted more of those at his future school. Or maybe he wanted something different.

The last thing you want to do is diss your current school . Keep it upbeat. List about 3-5 features of your current school. Then list a similar number of features that the new school will have.

Coming up with the positive parts of his current school was easy.

The second part took a little more work: What objectives do you hope to achieve?

Because your one main Common App essay will go to all your schools, you need to keep the answer general enough so it works for all the schools.

So you should answer what objectives you hope to achieve at your next college or university, whichever it happens to be.

I would start by talking about the major you want to pursue there, and how you plan to join and support their academic and social community.

It is very difficult to avoid broad, generic answers here, but do your best to be specific about what you want to do there related to your major and goal, how you will participate in various activities and opportunities there, and how you envision using your degree after graduation and in the workplace.

To start my son’s main transfer essay, we fished around for an anecdote (mini-story or real-life example).

RELATED: My Video Tutorial on  How to Write an Anecdote: Part One

The idea was to find an incident, moment or experience that would SHOW the reader a key quality about my son, which he would then go onto explain how that drove his path toward his major and new school.

His main theme turned out to be how he was the type of student who loved to learn new concepts, but was also eager to find “innovative” ways to use them.

This is just one way to approach this transfer essay. It might not work for everyone.

My son was unique in that he knew he would transfer when he started at his current school (where he did what is called a 3/2 program). But I think the approach of explaining the inspiration for your path–whether it’s art or business or biology-could work the same way.

Even if you are making a radical shift, just explain why and go from there.

As in all these essays, the admissions officers mainly want to hear how you think, what you value and that you have a plan.

Here’s What a Sample Outline Might Look Like for a College Application Transfer Essay

1. Introduction: An anecdote (mini-story/real-life example) showing what inspired your interest in your subject–what fired it up, or if it changed, what caused that shift.

2. Background: Take the reader back to some of your earlier experiences with your subject. Use specific examples.

3. Talk about your current school and what you got out of it. Give specific examples: focus on academics, but you could also mention other interests, social skills, etc.

4. Transition into the main reason you are ready to move on and into the new school. Maybe you liked certain things at your old school, but it had limitations and you wanted more. Maybe you changed, your interests changed, and the new school can serve those better than the first one. Back up your points with specific examples.

5. Objectives: Talk about what you want in your new school, or what you expect it will have to help you succeed. Focus your “objectives” around your intended major or field of study. Discuss  what you hope to do both at the new school and after.

What do you want to learn? What do you see yourself doing with your degree? Possible jobs/specialty fields? Additional schooling/training? (You don’t have to know; just mention a couple possibilities.)

6. Conclusion. (This might just be combined with number 5.)

It never hurts to end with a sentence or two that projects your goals into the future.

What do you believe a degree in your major will allow you to do to follow your largest dreams–not just for yourself, but for the world?

 More help for transfer students and their college application essays: 

Don’t miss my Help for College Transfer Students that has links to resources, advice and inspiration for transfer students and their transfer essays!

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22 Comments

Wow, this is amazing! Thank you for all the helpful advice and guidance you have provided throughout this article. I am confident in my essay thanks to this piece.

Thank you thank you! This was soo helpful

Nice article! I will definitely refer to this as I write my essay.

This was really helpful. Thankyou so much. 🙂

This is amazing. Thankyou so much. 🙂

My son is transferring from a community college, where he will receive an AA. The “Why” seems fairly obvious: “So I can complete my BA” — duhh! How does one fill up 250 words in such a case? Thanks in advance!

What about people who don’t have one certain school? What if someone is looking at two different schools how would the essay be structured differently?

What if someone is deciding between two different schools? How would the essay regarding one specific school be structured differently?

This is an excellent question. In general, most students write one essay for the Common App to use for all their target schools. My understanding, however, is that you are allowed to write different essays for different schools. (Please confirm that on your own by reading The Common Application instructions. I would so hate to steer you wrong.) Most admissions professional I have talked to say to just write one essay to send to all your schools because it is so much extra work, and that you can get more specific with each school’s supplemental requirements. Most supplemental essays for transfer students will ask about things like why you want to study at their school and/or to describe your major or field of choice. This is where you can talk about specific programs, course, professors, facilities, etc., about that target school. In your main Common App essay for transferring you can still talk about your field of choice, but will need to keep the details generic. I hope this helps and answers your questions. Best, Janine Robinson

I believe I answered this question already. Let me know if you have others. Best, Janine Robinson

Thanks , was a blessing

Thank you so much for helping and sharing this information. Applying to schools can be such a stressful time and the fact you shared a great outline was incredibly helpful.

You are so welcome! Best of luck to you! JR

You are a life saver, thank you for writing this.

jesus christ! THANK YOU! This just helped me and gave me the confidence to write a killer essay as im in the process of transffering schools. Im so glad i found this. I was headed in the wrong direction with my essay until i came across this article. Thank You So Much!

so we should not mention the specific name of the university we are transferring to in the second part of the essay ?

Is this essay supposed not to be school-specific? I knew students who transfered rewrite this essay in Common Writing a couple times to make it school-specific. Would this work?

Thank you so much! Your post was extremely helpful (and your son was very lucky to have you as his personal mentor 🙂

Thanks Chris!! JR

Applying to Cornell University and Northwestern University, and this just saved my life. Thank you so very much.

Sorry to respond to late, but you are so very welcome! Best of luck and I know you will land in a great place! JR

I am applying to only one school on the common app. I was thinking of making my essay school specific for this reason. This article helped a lot thank you so much!

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Absolutely, there is a specific essay for transfer students on the Common Application. The transfer application provides a single essay prompt that asks you to explain your reasons for transferring and to describe the goals you hope to achieve: 'The personal statement helps colleges get to know you better as a person and a student. Please provide a statement discussing your educational path. How does continuing your education at a new institution help you achieve your future goals?'

Keep in mind that the word limit for the transfer essay is typically 650 words, the same as the first-year essay. This is your platform to convey your unique story and show how your experiences have led you to this point. It's a crucial part of your application, so be sure to reflect deeply on your reasons for transferring and how it ties in with your future goals. Drafting several versions and seeking feedback can help refine your essay into a compelling narrative.

If you feel that the transfer essay doesn't effectively tell your story, you also have the option of responding to the first-year essay prompts. The Common App has instructions for how to do this here: https://membersupport.commonapp.org/s/article/Common-App-for-transfer-personal-statement-changes

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The Common App for Transfer Students Guide

Common App for Transfer Students Guide

If you’re looking to transfer colleges, odds are you’ve probably already used the Common App . Since the Common App makes applying to multiple schools easy, you’ll be pleased to hear that there’s a just as useful Common App transfer application. As long as schools accept the Common App transfer application, you can use one handy tool for all of your schools. 

When considering how to transfer colleges, you may feel overwhelmed by the process. However, there are ways to stay organized and prepared in order to streamline your transfer. The Common App transfer option is an excellent way to stay on top of all of your required materials, essays, and deadlines. 

In this Common App transfer guide, we’ll cover the following topics: 

• Understanding the Common App as a transfer student
• Required materials and how to complete them
• Planning your transfer application and meeting academic requirements
• Obtaining your Common App transfer forms: transcripts, recommendation letters, etc.
• Writing the best Common App transfer essay
• Avoiding common mistakes as a Common App transfer applicant
• Tracking your application status after meeting the Common App transfer application deadline

Before discussing how to transfer colleges using the Common App college application, let’s start with the basics: understanding the Common Application. 

What is the Common Application?

The Common Application offers a streamlined process for students in their college application journeys. Before the creation of the Common App 40 years ago, students had to fill out individual applications for each school. The Common Application revolutionized the application process by allowing students to use one platform to apply to multiple schools.

Now with the Common App, students can compile standard application information and a Common App essay to send anywhere. Of course, schools often have their own supplemental essay requirements. Today, more than 1,000 higher education institutions make up the network of Common App colleges.

Common App for Transfers

When looking to transfer colleges, the Common App works in the same way as when applying for the first time. Over 600 institutions allow students to complete their transfer application via the Common App . Whether you’re a community college or 4-year institution transfer applicant, the Common App can work for you! You’ll find plenty of Common App colleges to apply to in one place. 

Applicants will be able to organize their Common App transfer forms after creating their Common App transfer login. The process is simple, but you need to gather some important materials prior to creating your Common App transfer login. From there, you can search Common App colleges based on program, transfer application deadline, start date, and more. 

Moreover, this platform offers a comprehensive way to stay organized throughout the application process. You can stay on track with your Common App transfer forms, Common App transfer essay, and transfer application deadlines.

If you’re still curious about the difference between the Common App transfer and first-year Common App processes, then check out this page . You might also want to check out this article from U.S. News that covers the Common App in general. Up next, we’ll turn our attention to the all-important Common App transfer essays.

Is there a Common App Essay for Transfers?

Logically, you might be asking yourself if there is a Common App essay for transferring. In fact, you may be surprised to learn that there is no general Common App transfer essay. However, this doesn’t mean that as a transfer student, you’re off the hook with essays.

Instead of a general Common App transfer essay, students will respond to school-specific essay prompts accessed via the Common App. In this way, Common App transfer essays are more similar to supplemental essays than a personal statement . However, some schools may ask students for a personal essay as their Common App transfer essay. If this is the case, students will respond to the personal essay prompts found in the Common App. 

Ultimately, the essay requirements will vary based on your schools of interest. You will likely highlight your academic experiences in college rather than high school when applying as a transfer. In addition to your essays, you will need to submit Common App transfer forms. You’ll need to submit a transcript from your current college or university, alongside other materials. We’ll learn more about Common App transfer forms in later sections.

How does the Common App Transfer process work?

Once you have your Common App transfer login, applying to Common App colleges is simple. In fact, the Common App transfer application makes it relatively easy to complete all the necessary application steps. However, it’s certainly important to pay close attention when applying to ensure you don’t miss anything. Let’s look at the Common App transfer process broken down into 5 steps: 

5-Step Common App Transfer Process

1. gather materials.

The materials you’ll likely need to include as a transfer applicant are not too different from first-year requirements. In general, you’ll need your transcripts and educational coursework, standardized test scores, employment experience, extracurriculars, and other achievements to complete your application. Of course, required Common App transfer forms may vary depending on the school. 

2. Create an account

You won’t be able to do much without first creating your Common App transfer login. After gathering the Common App transfer forms above, create your Common App transfer login. Once you’ve done so, you’ll be able to take advantage of the app and start the application process. 

3. Add programs

Now you can search for schools and programs that suit your needs and preferences. Once you enter using your Common App transfer login, simply go to the “Add programs” tab to get started. You can search based on several criteria: program availability, state, college, start term, deadline, application fee, and country. Once you’ve filtered programs based on your criteria, you can add the schools that interest you to your “selected programs.” 

4. Request letters of recommendation

Similar to a Common App transfer essay, letters of recommendation play an important role in the admissions process. You can use the Common App transfer to request these letters of recommendation. All you need is the recommender’s name, email, and due date for the recommendation. To get strong recommendation letters , however, you should personally reach out to your recommender to request their support. 

5. Transcript collection

Again, the requirements for your transcripts will depend on your program of interest. Some may request official transcripts, others unofficial, and some may require none at all. You can request Common App transfer forms like official transcripts within the Common App.

These are the general steps you’ll need to follow as you begin the application process. Now, let’s take a closer look at the application itself.

The Common App Transfer Application

The Common App transfer application has four sections:

• Personal information
• Academic history
• Supporting information
• Program materials (including school-specific transfer essays or questions)

While this may seem like a lot of information, once you create your Common App transfer login, the process is quite simple. Upon entering your Common Application login details, you’ll be taken to your dashboard. The Common App dashboard has plenty of useful information to help you with your Common App transfer applications.

Past the Common Application login screen, you’ll have access to various college application reference materials and resources . These include a transfer application guide, an application dictionary, and even a library of FAQs and video tutorials. Furthermore, Santa Monica College has provided a useful and informative presentation on the Common App transfer process.

So, if you’re wondering “Should I transfer colleges?”, don’t let the process of transferring be the deciding factor. Simply create your Common App transfer login and start exploring! There are plenty of resources out there to teach you how to transfer colleges seamlessly. 

How much does the Common App Transfer cost?

When asking yourself “Should I transfer colleges?”, money may be on your mind. Applying to many schools can be costly, even as a Common App transfer applicant. In fact, the costs are usually the same for transfers as first-time applicants. That being said, application costs and fees vary by school.

Typically, costs are $70-80 per application. However, some schools may have application costs as low as $15 while others as high as $125. Alternatively, some transfer applications are free or have fee waiver options. An advantage of having a Common App transfer login is the ability to see the application fee when searching for programs.

If paying application costs presents a barrier for you, then look into a fee waiver. To counteract recent trends of lower diversity among Common App transfer students, fee waivers are on the rise. There is a Common App fee waiver for qualifying students, so be sure to check the requirements to see if you qualify. Remember, if you’re wondering “Should I transfer colleges?” and are concerned about application fees, don’t let that stop you. There are options out there to make it more affordable.

Determining If the Common App Is Right for Your Transfer

Maybe you’re no longer asking yourself, “Should I transfer colleges?”, but are now asking yourself if you should use the Common App. Well, while the Common App partners with over 600 transfer colleges, not every school uses the Common App. Other schools may use a different application platform or have their own transfer application. Therefore, the schools you’re interested in will play the largest role in which applications you’ll use. 

Common vs Coalition Application

Alongside the Common App, the Coalition App is another application platform transfer students can use. However, it is uncommon for a school to accept only the Coalition App and not the Common App; typically, both are accepted. For example, Harvard University accepts either the Coalition Application or the Common Application. In this case, you may choose to use Coalition on Scoir, especially if you did so as a first-year applicant. Of course, similar to the Common App transfer forms, the Coalition App will have different requirements for transfer applications. 

School-specific transfer applications

Alternatively, some schools may have their own platform for transfer students. In that case, you won’t be making a Common App transfer login but one for that individual school. For example, the University of California schools have their own application platform for first-years and transfers. Similarly, the University of Texas at Austin accepts applications via Apply Texas, which many Texas universities use. MIT is another school that has its own application portal for transfer students. 

Why Common App?

Some students may find that they are leading hectic lives. Transfer students are often in school or may even be working part- or full-time with families to support. Therefore, if you are in a similar position and wondering, “Should I transfer colleges?”, then the Common App transfer can certainly streamline the process.

Among the resources that the Common App offers, the Common App map is an important one. Students can look at a map of American schools that accept the Common Application. As such, you won’t have to create a myriad of logins to complete your application, you’ll simply use the Common Application login. It makes the process quicker and often less stressful. 

Preparing Your Documents

If asking how to transfer colleges, then obtaining the required materials is a large part of the answer. Once you create a Common Application login, you’ll see the list of Common App transfer forms and other required materials. Remember that you can also see transfer application deadlines for all Common App colleges. So, when organizing your transfer application timeline, keep those important dates in mind. 

Here are some of the materials you’ll need to prepare for your application:

Materials for Transfer Application

Transcripts.

Transcripts are important because they show your courses and grades. Schools may ask for an official or unofficial transcript. You can request an official transcript from your school through the Common App platform. Note that you likely won’t need to submit a high school transcript unless you have fewer than 12 college credits. If you’re unsure how many credits you have, your college registrar’s office can probably help. 

College reports

An official at your current institution of learning must fill out your college report. It will contain your GPA and information on your current academic standing. 

Mid-term reports

Some schools may also ask for a mid-year report. It will have your grades from the previous semester, the ones you were completing while also doing your applications. Note that while this is a common requirement, not all schools ask for it.

A CV or resume will include not only prominent academic achievements, but also extracurriculars, volunteer experiences, hobbies, and any other accolades. As a transfer student, you may also have ample work and leadership experience. You should include it here. Most college career services offices provide resume writing support, so don’t be afraid to ask for help.

Additionally, if you’re a foreign resident in the U.S., you will need proper documentation to continue further education in the country. As a transfer student, this means providing proof of your valid green card or student visa.

Recommendations

One of the Common App transfer forms that ranks similarly in importance to the Common App transfer essay is the recommendations. Choose your recommenders carefully, as these letters provide admissions officers with a deeper insight into you as a person and student. And of course, give your recommenders plenty of time to meet the deadline and a hearty thank you! 

Once you have a Common App login, however, requesting and submitting these documents to your transfer colleges is quite simple. Now, let’s turn our attention back to your transfer essays.

Crafting a Compelling Common App Transfer Essay

Remember, there is technically no general Common App transfer essay like the Common App personal statement. Rather, each school will likely have their own supplemental essays for transfer students. However, you may be asked to write a Common App personal essay as a transfer student.

Essays are extremely important whether a first-year or transfer applicant. A compelling Common App transfer essay will make a case for your acceptance as a transfer student. Here are some questions that a successful Common App transfer essay will answer: 

Questions to Answer in Common App Transfer Essay

“why do you want to leave your current institution”.

Address what your previous institution was lacking. Why wasn’t it a good fit? Be careful not to be overly negative or critical of your school in this essay. Focus on yourself and why you want to seek greener pastures.

“Why do you want to transfer to a new institution?”

Articulate why you want to attend this particular school. What attracts you to it? Why is it a better fit? Be specific in writing about the new school and how transferring will help you achieve your goals.

“What makes you a strong candidate?”

Think about what makes you unique. What are your goals, strengths, and interests? How will you contribute to your new community? Use strong, concrete examples, preferably of achievements at your current institution.

Common App Transfer Essay Tips

The Common App transfer essay also provides the following topics for students to engage with in their essays. Here are some of the points that the Common App recommends transfer students touch on in their Common App personal essay:

• Academic and career aspirations
• Personal experiences, overcoming obstacles, other pertinent background information
• Growth and personal development from life experiences since high school—what have you learned about yourself and how have these experiences affected your educational goals?
• Reasons for transferring or returning to college
• Major-specific interests—what type of research would you want to conduct? Are there specific problems you’d like to investigate?
• Opportunities you’re hoping to find at your new institution

The Common App transfer essay and/or school-specific essays are a vital part of your transfer application. When considering how to transfer colleges, writing impressive essays should play a role in your plan to get into your dream school . Check out our guide on the Common App transfer essay to see some examples of successful transfer essays. 

Does the Common App have supplemental essays for transfer students?

Put simply, yes, the Common App has supplemental essays. These are often different from the first-year Common App essay and will vary based on the program you’re applying to. To find these essays, use your Common Application login to enter the site. Then, go to your dashboard, then navigate to Program Materials. Select your school and then look at the Questions section. Here, you will find the school-specific essay prompts you’ll need to complete. 

As a transfer student, you will need to complete either the Common App essay or school-specific supplemental essays. Every school is different, so your essay requirements will depend on the schools you plan to apply to. For example, Case Western Reserve asks students to submit a personal statement essay, choosing from the Common App essay prompts. However, Claremont McKenna asks applicants to submit three supplemental essays, responding to school-specific prompts. 

Highlighting Your College Experience in the Common App

While the application process as a transfer student appears quite similar to a first-year applicant, there are subtle differences. Namely, the main difference between a transfer and a first-year college application is that transfer applicants need to highlight college experiences. Admissions will want to see that you’ve made the most of your education at your current institution. And, if for some reason you haven’t, they’ll want to know the circumstances behind that. 

So, when considering how to transfer colleges, you’ll want to think about highlighting important experiences within your application. Here are some different areas within the application that will give you an opportunity to show off what you’ve done: 

Sections to Highlight Your Experience

Academic history section.

In this section, you’ll mention the colleges you’ve attended as well as your college coursework. This will show admissions if you’ve completed the required courses and if you’re up for taking challenging courses later on. It may also be important when applying to certain majors. For example, as a biology major, admissions would want to see you’ve taken the basic requisites. 

Supporting Information section

Now is the time to add all the information that admissions can’t see by simply looking at your academics. You’ll add your experiences and achievements, like extracurricular activities, leadership positions, and awards. You can also attach a CV or resume where you can show off your work, life, academic, and personal experiences. 

Without a doubt, your essays are your best opportunity to discuss your college experience in your own words. You might discuss highs and lows, both in and out of the classroom. It’s also an opportunity to expand on your future goals and why you need to transfer in order to achieve them. Well-written transfer essays will touch on the past as well as the future. And, of course, they need to be personal and school-specific. 

Now that we’ve covered the basics of the Common App transfer application and the Common App essay, let’s discuss your transcripts. Later on, we’ll do a deep dive into your letters of recommendation.

High School Transcripts and Transfer Applications

Transcripts are a critical part of the admissions review process at most every college. Typically, traditional first-year applicants are required to submit their high school transcripts. Similarly, Common App transfer applicants are required to submit their college transcripts. However, in some instances, schools may want to see both.

Transcript requirements

Typically, students with less than 12-semester college credits will need to submit a high school transcript. This is because a low number of college credits doesn’t provide sufficient academic context to the admissions committee. In this case, a college’s admissions requirement will likely include your high school transcript and maybe even your standardized test scores, like the SAT or the ACT.

However, certain colleges require all transfer applicants, regardless of completed college credits, to submit both their high school and college transcripts. Common App transfer requirements can vary by college and even by major. So, it is important to research which transcripts are required to complete your application based on your individual circumstances.

For instance, if you are a transfer student who has attended more than one college, you will be required to submit all transcripts when completing your Common App transfer application. Failure to submit all required transcripts may lead to your application being rendered incomplete. Using your Common App transfer login to continuously check your requirements can help you stay organized and informed.

Recommendation Letters: Tips for Transfer Students

Alongside your Common App transfer essay, your recommendation letters are one of the most valuable components of your transfer application. Common App transfer recommendations must be submitted directly by recommenders via a portal called Liaison Letters .

The Liaison Letters portal is separate from your Common App transfer login information. In fact, only your recommenders will be able to access Liaison Letters. However, students will need to request recommendations via the Program Materials section of their college application for each school they are applying to.

Who to ask for recommendation letters

The art of a successful Common App transfer recommendation is knowing who to ask for a recommendation. You should start by making a list of multiple people that you have a real relationship with or who showed a real interest in you. This can include professors, administrators, advisors of a club or organization, coaches, or supervisors.

Ultimately, you’ll want to choose someone who knows you in an academic, professional, or extracurricular capacity. While personal recommendations from family and friends can often speak to your character, these recommendations are not particularly helpful for an admissions committee evaluating Common App transfer applications. It is also important that you focus on college recommenders and not those from high school.

Depending on how long you have been at your current institution, you may find that you have fewer long-standing relationships with your instructors compared to what you had in high school. Some transfer students at larger schools may even feel like they have no one who knows them well enough to write a recommendation letter. If this sounds like you, do your best to forge meaningful relationships with faculty, even if it’s only your first year in college. You can do this organically by visiting professors during office hours and participating in clubs and organizations.  

When to ask for recommendation letters 

Like when you applied as a first-year applicant, applying as a transfer student takes a great deal of organization and deadline management. It can often be difficult to manage deadlines for yourself. However, it’s important to remember that you are also managing deadlines for the professors who will ultimately write your letters of recommendation.

To give your recommenders ample time, it is important to request recommendations no later than six weeks prior to your application date. This will give your recommenders plenty of time to consider your request, write the recommendation, and submit the recommendation letter through the preferred platform.

How to submit recommendation letters 

Common App transfer applicants should instruct their professors to submit recommendation letters through Liaison Letters. Once you’ve requested them in your Common App portal, your recommender will receive an email invitation that grants them personalized access to the platform.

However, as part of your request for a letter of recommendation, you should also make sure that your recommenders have access to the platform and any other necessary Common App transfer forms. That means checking in with them and ensuring you have the correct name, email address, and any other contact information needed to request your recommendations.

At any time, you can use your Common Application login to check the status of your recommendation letters. The status area of the webpage will show exactly where your recommendations are in the process.

If your Common App transfer recommendation has not moved past the requested, you should follow up with your recommender immediately to prompt them to complete the Common App transfer forms. This may be a sign that your Common App transfer recommendation invitation did not reach your recommender. The status of your Common App transfer recommendations should complete all three steps:

Requested→Accepted→Complete

Once your Common App transfer recommendation letter reaches the Complete step, your recommendation has been successfully completed.

The Transfer Academic Evaluation

Now that we’ve discussed the required Common App transfer forms, let’s discuss how your academic performance is evaluated.

Minimum GPA requirements

It is common for schools to have a minimum GPA requirement for transfer applicants. After all, your future institution is looking for evidence that you will be successful on their campus should you transfer colleges. Consequently, your academic transcript is one of the most important documents in determining whether you will be an academic fit for the institution.

However, don’t mistake meeting the minimum GPA requirement for guaranteed admissions. While Common App transfer schools often publish their minimum GPA requirements, you may find that accepted transfer students tend to have even higher GPAs than the published averages. If you want to see how your GPA compares, reach out to your admissions counselor or look online to learn more about the admitted student profile for transfer students.

Academic success

Transfer colleges are looking for students who have done well in their college coursework. This demonstrates dedication to studies and readiness to tackle the rigorous challenges of college-level courses. However, the academic evaluation for transfer students will vary from school to school. The selectivity of a school or your specific major of interest can both influence how transcripts are reviewed.

For one, you may be asking yourself, “Should I transfer colleges?” because you’re doing so well in your courses and you need more of a challenge. In this case, your grades will positively reflect your academic success! However, not getting As in your most challenging courses shouldn’t deter you from submitting a transfer application to more selective universities. If you’re applying yourself, and provide context in a stellar Common App essay, you can definitely still demonstrate your academic achievements.

Ultimately, understanding what your future college expects academically can help you determine if they are the right fit for you.

Exploring the Common App Schools: Finding the Right Fit

Finding the right fit college is one of the most important parts of the college search process. Whether you are seeking to transfer due to dissatisfaction with your first institution or as part of a strategic plan to enroll in your dream school, your future institution should suit your preferences, needs, and goals.  

Consider the “why” 

Many students find themselves asking “should I transfer colleges?” The next question to ask before submitting a Common App transfer application is “ why should I transfer colleges?”. Being clear on the reasons you want to transfer is a great way to find transfer colleges that are a good fit. You may consider features like research opportunities, student life, student-to-faculty ratio, and available majors.

Common App transfer colleges will also ask you why you are interested in transferring as part of your Common App transfer essays. Developing a list of reasons you want to transfer will also help you in this process.

Do your research

Finding a school that’s the right fit requires you to reflect on campus size, region, institutional type, academic major, and student life. In your research, do not limit yourself to only considering the Common App colleges that you have heard of. There are hundreds of Common App colleges in the U.S. that could be a good fit for you. A great way to learn of all the possible options is to browse Common App’s list of transfer schools, taking note of details like location , student life, and majors and programs.

Furthermore, a college’s website is the best place to get the most up-to-date information on their transfer application deadlines, academic programs, and policies. In addition to doing a thorough website review, there may be an opportunity to participate in a virtual tour or virtual information. A virtual visit option is great for students who live far away from the transfer colleges they are considering.

Transfer logistics

It is also important to know the starting term (Fall vs Spring, etc.) and how that fits into your overall transfer plan. Additionally, your academic major and program can also influence whether a school is a good fit for you.

Many transfer institutions have additional rules around transferring into certain majors. Remember, transfer admissions are often based on availability. So, if your major is popular, it is possible that the department is not taking additional students. It’s always a good plan to inquire specifically about transferring into your intended major.

Once you have a preliminary list of schools, you should plan to use your Common Application login to double-check deadlines, requirements, application costs, and entry terms. That way, you can plan a more seamless Common App transfer application. The next section will discuss more about getting and staying organized during the application process.

Planning Your Transfer Application

Completing a transfer application for Common App colleges takes time. To stay organized, you may want to create a college application calendar that has a list of To-Do’s. This might include when you want to have each step completed, as well as your final application deadlines.

Keeping your Common App transfer login information and any other Common Application login credentials handy will also allow you to check your portal frequently. Required Common App transfer forms may vary depending on the institution. Staying organized will help ensure that your Common App transfer essay and any other Common App transfer forms are given the time and attention they deserve.

In general, be sure to give yourself ample time to refine your Common App transfer essay and other Common App transfer forms. That way, you can stay on top of all of your transfer application deadlines.

Common App Transfer Deadlines

Your Common App transfer colleges will either have one set deadline or participate in rolling admissions. Deadlines for Fall admission can be as early as March and for some schools as late as August. You should pay close attention to each of the deadlines for the Common App colleges on your list.

Rolling admissions means there are no official transfer application deadlines or notification dates. Instead, Common App transfer applications are reviewed as they are received. Acceptance under rolling admission is highly dependent on availability on campus. If there is a Common App transfer college that has rolling admissions on your college list, be sure to submit your college application as soon as possible. The admissions team is often working to fill individual seats, and once those seats are filled, they may not be accepting any additional college applications.  

Students should always confirm the transfer application deadline of their specific school and the desired start term. For transfer students, this process typically includes bypassing registration for the upcoming term at your current institution. If deadlines and start terms are overlooked, you may have to stay enrolled at your current institution longer than you originally planned.

Learning how to transfer colleges can be a confusing process. Next, we’ll discuss some common mistakes to avoid when completing your Common App transfer college application.

Common Mistakes to Avoid in Your Transfer Application

Like the first-year college application process, there are many common mistakes you can make when it comes to your Common App transfer forms and overall application.

Managing communications 

One mistake that students might make is using an email address that they do not check regularly. In addition to your Common App transfer login, your email is a critical way for you to stay up to date on your application. Learning how to transfer colleges requires a great deal of organization and attention to email communications.

Students should become very comfortable with the Common App platform and required Common App transfer forms. This means keeping track of your Common App transfer login and the status of each of your materials. Because the recommendation process requires an email invitation, you should be sure that you are communicating properly with each of your recommenders.

To avoid missing important communications, you might consider creating a dedicated email to use for your Common Application login and any other portals associated with your Common App transfer login.

Polishing your essays

Writing effective Common App transfer essays is another part of the application process that many students struggle with. Your Common App essay should be free of typos and grammatical errors. You also want to be sure that your Common App transfer essay does not speak too negatively about your current intuition. In the Common App transfer essay, students must be able to articulate why they are looking to transfer without harping on why their current school is subpar.

To submit a strong Common App transfer essay, you should proofread your Common App essay multiple times, even reading it out loud to catch any grammar mistakes. We also recommend sending your Common App essay to at least one other person for them to review it.

Overall, being organized and planning ahead will help you avoid careless mistakes, like missing a deadline or neglecting to pay your application fee. Your Common App transfer login will also help you track your application and avoid some of these mistakes.  

Tracking your application after submission

The Common App transfer portal makes it easy to track your application status at all of your Common App colleges. All you need to check your status is your Common App transfer login. You can view the progress of your Common App transfer application by visiting the application dashboard and clicking ‘view my notifications’.

Remember, submitting your Common App transfer application is just the first step. You may have to submit additional Common App transfer forms for your transfer application to be considered complete. 

The Common App transfer status portal divides your transfer application into three areas: application, transcript, and recommendation letters. Here are some of the different types of statuses you should be aware of:

Important application statuses

• Application: The application portion of the Common App status portal is divided into four status updates: In Progress, Received, Complete, and Undelivered. Your application will be considered complete once you’ve submitted your application, and your recommenders have submitted their recommendations. and your application fee payment has been processed.
• Transcript: You can submit your transcripts electronically or by mail. Regardless, students can track the progress of their transcripts based on three status updates: Not Required, Not Arrived, and Arrived. In general, it can take five business days for your transcripts to be posted to your application once they have been received by Common App. So, be sure to check for any unexpected delays.
• Recommendations: The recommendation portion of the Common App transfer portal helps you assess the progress of your recommendations. As you may recall, Common App Transfer recommendations are directly tied to a personal email invitation. While you won’t be able to access your recommendations, you are still responsible for ensuring they are completed. The status stages for Common App transfer recommendations include Requested, Accepted Completed, Declined, and Expired.

It is critical that you stay up to date on each of these Common App transfer materials so that you are prepared to meet all of your transfer application deadlines.

Five Takeaways for Common App Transfer

At this point, we’ve covered a lot about the Common App transfer process and how to transfer colleges. Before we wrap up, let’s review five important takeaways:

Common App Transfer Takeaways

• The Common App transfer application makes it easy for students to apply as a transfer student to multiple colleges. The application itself is split into four sections: Personal Information, Academic History, Supporting Information, and Program Materials.
• You can browse and add programs that best fit your needs. Schools are listed with details such as start terms, deadlines, and application fees. Once selected, you can then view the individual requirements of each school. Before you apply, be sure to ask yourself “Why should I transfer colleges?” This will be helpful when you begin the school selection process.
• The Common App transfer application is generally not free. While select schools accept applications at no cost, transfer application fees are typically $70-$80. However, students who qualify can apply for fee waivers at some institutions.
• One of the more significant portions of the transfer application is the writing section. You may be required to respond to the Common App Personal Statement prompts or school-specific Common App transfer essay prompts.
• You will need to submit required documents, such as transcripts and recommendations using your Common App transfer login. Carefully complete each step to ensure your documents are properly submitted before the transfer application deadline.

Still, have questions on how to transfer colleges? Don’t forget to use your Common App transfer login to visit the Common App for transfer Help Center for more helpful information.

Common App for Transfer Students – Final Thoughts

The Common App transfer application provides an organized platform for transfer students to explore and apply to transfer colleges. Before applying, students should reflect deeply on the following questions: “Should I transfer colleges?” and “Why do I want to transfer colleges?”. This self-reflection will help you compile a list of potential transfer colleges that are a good fit for you.

Submitting a Common App transfer application also involves a great deal of organization and time management. Staying organized can help you submit a strong transfer application that includes compelling letters of recommendation and a thoughtful Common App transfer essay. In addition to these requirements, be sure to use your Common Application login to make sure you are up to date on submitting any required Common App transfer forms.

We hope this guide on how to transfer colleges through Common App has been helpful. However, if you ever get stuck on the Common App transfer application, don’t hesitate to reach out for more personalized guidance! CollegeAdvisor can help you navigate the Common App transfer process, from researching alternative institutions all the way to tracking your application to completion.

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Common App announces 2024–2025 Common App essay prompts

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We are happy to announce that the Common App essay prompts will remain the same for 2024–2025.

Our decision to keep these prompts unchanged is supported by past research showing that overall satisfaction with the prompts exceeded 95% across our constituent groups - students, counselors, advisors, teachers, and member colleges. Moving forward, we want to learn more about who is choosing certain prompts to see if there are any noteworthy differences among student populations and incorporate feedback into future decisions.

While some schools are beginning discussions with juniors and transfer students about college options, it's important to clarify that this doesn't mean students need to start writing their essays right away. By releasing the prompts early, we hope to give students ample time for reflection and brainstorming. As you guide students with their planning, feel free to use our Common App Ready essay writing resource, available in both English and Spanish .

For students who wish to start exploring the application process, creating a Common App account before August 1 ensures that all their responses, including their personal essays, will be retained through account rollover .

Below is the full set of essay prompts for 2024–2025.

• Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
• The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
• Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
• Reflect on something that someone has done for you that has made you happy or thankful in a surprising way. How has this gratitude affected or motivated you?
• Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
• Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?
• Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you've already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.

We will retain the optional community disruption question within the Writing section. Over the next year, we'll consult with our member, counselor, and student advisory committees to ensure we gather diverse perspectives and make informed decisions.

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Common App for transfer personal statement changes

Jul 25, 2023 • knowledge, information.

Common App recently collected member and student feedback regarding the current personal statement in the transfer application, which is 'The personal statement helps colleges get to know you better as a person and a student. Please provide a statement discussing your educational path. How does continuing your education at a new institution help you achieve your future goals?'

Through this feedback, we heard a desire for more prompt options, as well as increased standardization in how the personal statement is asked across member institutions.

In response to this feedback, we made the decision to add the first year application personal essay prompts to the Program Materials section as the new transfer application personal statement. The current transfer application personal statement will be available as a bank question for members who wish to ask it. Note: the new essay prompts would not be available in the common portion of the transfer application.

Members have two configuration options to add the new Common App for transfer personal statement to their screen:

Option #1 , Questions Section

Key features:

• Must appear within the Writing section
• Radio button prompt selection followed by long answer essay field
• Prompts appear directly above the response box
• Choice of prompt is a deliverable data point in the export file

Option #2 , Documents Tab

• Document upload
• Prompts are linked out on a separate page to conserve Documents tab instructional text space
• Delivered as part of full application PDF
• Note that prompt selection is not available as an exportable data point

Please note : the personal statement language, prompts, and instruction text cannot be customized. If you have additional questions, please reach out to your Member Services representative or the Member Solutions Center at [email protected] .