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How to write an IELTS thesis statement.

Ielts essay introductions and thesis statements..

updated: July 27th 2022. When writing the introduction of an IELTS essay there are two steps that need to be taken. Paraphrase the task question and write a Thesis Statement . If the question asks for an opinion then it must be in the thesis statement. It depends on the type of essay you are writing as they are not all the same. It is advisable to write a thesis in the introduction for every type of essay. A good thesis statement can help you get a good band score in task response in the writing section.

The thesis statement tells the examiner what the essay is going to be about and the conclusion of the essay paraphrases the thesis statement. Some teachers have other views and say that a thesis statement is not needed. There are different approaches to writing an IELTS essay. If you have 10 IELTS teachers in a room there will most likely be 10 different opinions on the matter.

In my opinion, a thesis statement is logical and shows the reader what to expect in the rest of the essay. However, do not confuse Thesis statements with memorised outline sentences. See this link here about that.

What exactly is a thesis statement?

‘A thesis statement tells the reader what your essay is going to be about in one or two sentences. It usually includes your opinion or states your position’

• Don’t use rhetorical questions in the thesis. The thesis statement is not a question.
• Make it clear what you are going to write about briefly (1 or 2 sentences)
• If it’s an opinion essay, give 2 reasons for your opinion in the thesis statement.
• The thesis statement comes after paraphrasing the question.
• Do not write an outline sentence, these look like a cliche and memorised. Examiners are trained to spot memorised phrases, for instance: ‘ This essay would like to explore reasons for this in more detail’
• Don’t confuse thesis statements with the above outline sentence. Outline sentences are for very long academic essays. See this lesson here on phrases to avoid.

For each essay type this is what should be in the Thesis statement:

1. Opinion essays: write 2 reasons for your opinion. 2. Advantage disadvantage essays:  state the advantage and the disadvantage, 3. Problem solution essays:   briefly state 1 or 2 problems and possible solutions. 4 . Discussion essays: after paraphrasing both sides of the argument, give your opinion with a reason why you hold that view. 5. Two part question essays: answer the 1st question then answer the 2nd question briefly.

First you have to identify what kind of essay it is.

The first step before you begin to write is to make sure you understand the question, then identify what kind of essay this will be. There are 5 variations on an IELTS discursive essay click here to see a lesson on this .

Before you write the thesis statement you will need to paraphrase the question , click here for a lesson on this. Click here to see how to write a good introduction to a Problem Solution essay.

1. Discussion essay.

This is the Paraphrased introduction with a Thesis statement.

A number of people believe serious crimes need to have a set punishment, whereas others argue that the situation of the crime must be considered. I agree that the circumstances of the crime itself should be taken into account because every case is different.

Thesis Statement: ‘ I agree that the circumstances of the crime itself should be taken into account because every case is different’

It is important to give a brief reason for your view, the body paragraphs should expand on this. The examiner can clearly see your position in the introduction. In this essay, my position is that every case is different and a prison sentence would not be appropriate.

Note: For a more academic feel, rather than using a personal pronoun to state your opinion, you could state your position like this below:

This essay agrees that the circumstances of the crime itself should be taken into account because every case is different.

2. Opinon essay.

Again you need to paraphrase the question and then clearly agree or disagree , remember to choose just one side.. the words: ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree’ means how much do you agree/disagree, or how far do you agree/disagree. You should mention the other side of the argument but stick to your own opinion. Balanced essays do not necessarily get a higher band score.

Give 2 reasons for your view in the thesis statement here. This is the Paraphrased introduction with a Thesis statement:

It is argued that society would be better off if every type of advertising was prohibited. I disagree that all advertising should be disallowed as this policy would not benefit society and would negatively impact the economy.

Thesis statement: ‘ I disagree that all advertising should be disallowed as this policy would not benefit societ y and would negatively impact the economy.’

In this thesis statement I have clearly stated why I hold the opinion that advertising should not be banned with 2 reasons (no benefit to society and bad for the economy)  Remember to keep the introduction to under 55 words or it will be too long.

As mentioned before, you can use a more academic way to state your view, such as:

This essay disagrees that all advertising should be disallowed because this policy would not benefit society and would have a negative impact on the economy.

3. Advantages disadvantages essay.

This is the Paraphrased introduction with a Thesis statement:

In recent times, people can reside wherever they want in the world because of the progress that has made in technology and transport. The main advantage is the career opportunities that a person can get outside their own country, while a possible downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.

Thesis statement: ‘ The main advantage is the career opportunities that a person can get outside their own country, while a possible downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.’

Try keeping the whole introduction under 55 words as you don’t want it to look like a body paragraph. You can write about 2 advantages and 2 disadvantages, but you need to keep the introduction concise.

Another method is to just refer to the advantage and state the disadvantage, such as:

In recent times, people can reside wherever they want in the world because of the progress that has made in technology and transport. Although there are advantages, the downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.’

This allows you to keep the thesis statement concise especially if you want to cover two advantages (or disadvantages)

4. Advantages disadvantages outweigh essay (this needs your opinion).

This type of advantage disadvantage essay is special because it asks ‘ Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?’. This means you have to write about what side you think is stronger and reflect that in the essay and also in the thesis statement. You need to state an opinion here.

Some experts argue that children should study a new language at primary school as opposed to secondary school. This essay agrees that the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages because youngsters pick up and master new languages much easier than at a high school age.

Thesis statement: ‘This essay agrees that the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages because youngsters pick up and master new languages much easier than at a high school age .’

I have underlined the reason for my opinion here. Giving a reason for your opinion is important in a thesis statement. The introduction is 44 words long so that will be fine. Remember to also address the other side of the issue in the main body paragraphs, the side you think is weaker.

Another method here is to use this style which is very concise at 32 words but it does not contain a reason for my view.

Some experts argue that youngsters should study a new language at primary school as opposed to secondary school. In my view, the advantages of younger children learning new languages outweigh the disadvantages.

5. Problem solution / causes solution essay.

People living in large cities have to deal with many issues in their day to day lives. The main problems people face are high rental costs and overcrowding. Some possible solutions would be to build more affordable housing and more green spaces.

Thesis statement: ‘ The main problems people face are high rental costs and overcrowding. Some possible solutions would be to build more affordable housing and more green spaces.’

I have listed 2 problems high rents, overcrowding and 2 solutions affordable housing, green spaces . You can choose just one problem and one solution and that would be fine.

6. Two part question (direct question essay).

The world wide web is a huge source of knowledge which has created opportunities for people worldwide to study. However, not all information on the internet can be trusted, so the government needs to put measures in place to protect people from false information.

Thesis statement: ‘ However, not all information on the internet can be trusted, so the government needs to put measures in place to protect people from false information.’

Two part question essays are sometimes called ‘Direct question’ essays. They consist of 2 direct questions in the task question. Sometimes they will ask for your opinion such as: Do you think….?  or   What do you think…?

If the question asks for the opinion then you must state it. You should briefly answer the 2 questions in the thesis statement then give more detail in the body paragraphs.

Check out the blog posts about how to identify the 5 essay types and also how to paraphrase the question . These are key stages before writing your thesis statement. Make sure your whole introduction is under 55 words or it will be too long.

Take a look here at how to write a good introduction in writing task 2. Now you can try.

Here is a Discussion essay question where you have to give your opinion. Can you write a Thesis statement for it?

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution.  Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Task question again:

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Paraphrased introduction: Some people argue that prohibiting private cars from city centres is the best way to tackle traffic congestion, whereas others say that this is unrealistic.

Thesis statement: I agree that private vehicles should be banned from city centres and more investment needs to be put into public transportation to alleviate traffic jams.

Full introduction with thesis statement:

Some people argue that prohibiting private cars from city centres is the best way to tackle traffic congestion, whereas others say that this is unrealistic. I agree that private vehicles should be banned from city centres and more investment needs to be put into public transportation to alleviate traffic jams.

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Writing a Thesis Statement in IELTS

The thesis statement is an essential part of an essay introduction, and it is very important that you know where to put it and how to write it.

Getting it wrong could very likely reduce your IELTS score as it could affect the coherency of your essay and if it's an opinion essay, it may mean that your opinion is not clear. 

They are a crucial part of  writing an introduction .

If you prefer you can also watch this video lesson about thesis statements for IELTS:

Undertanding Thesis Statements

What is a thesis statement.

Very basically, it tells the person reading your essay  what will be in it . It may also  give your opinion  if the question asks you for this.

It is the last sentence of your introduction.

Don't get it mixed up with the  topic of your essay  - this is usually at the beginning of your introduction.

How do I write a thesis statement?

In order to make it effective, you must have first identified the task of the essay. If you are unsure about this, check out this lesson on  identifying the task .

The task is  what you have to do , and is usually at the  end of the rubric . For example, look at this IELTS essay question:

As global trade increases, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are produced in other countries and transported long distances.

Do the benefits of this trend *outweigh the drawbacks?

What you have to do (the task) is explain whether you think, overall, an increase in the production of goods in other countries and their subsequent transportation over long distances is more advantageous or disadvantageous .

So your essay is obviously going to be discussing the advantages and disadvantages of this issue, and this is what needs to be made clear in your thesis statement.

It is also an opinion essay as it is asking you to make a decision on whether you think there are more advantages or disadvantages. So you need to make this clear as well.

Here is an example introduction, with the thesis in bold:

Due to the increase in global trade, many of the goods that we consume every day are made in a different country and then transported over a long distance in order to reach us.  In my opinion, this trend has more disadvantages than advantages .

You would then go on to write about the advantages and disadvantages of global trade ( focusing more on the disadvantages as you think there are more of these).

*Just a quick note on the word ' outweigh '. This word often confuses students and they end up writing a thesis statement opinion that contradicts what they write in the essay.

The simple answer - don't use the word! It is just asking you if there are more advantages than disadvantages. So just state what you think in the thesis without using the word, as in the example.

Thesis Statements for Different Essay Types

We will now look at how thesis statements can vary with different question types. However, you should not try to learn set phrases or sentences to fit certain essays.

There are some broad types of essay question that are common to see, but they can all vary slightly.

The golden rule is to always read the question very carefully ( never rush this as you may not fully answer the question ) and work out what you have to do.

Your thesis statement will then follow on from this, depending on what you have decided you need to write about in order to answer the question.

So below are some suggestions of what you could do for certain common kinds of essay question, but this is not to say these are right and other ways are wrong. There are numerous ways to write good thesis statements and these are just possibilities.

Writing about Two Opinions

Some questions ask you specifically to discuss two opinions and to give your opinion .

Some people think that young children should be allowed to do paid work, while others think that this should be illegal.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

There are various ways you could choose to write an introduction and thesis for this.

You could begin by paraphrasing the two opinions, then stating in the thesis what you will do:

Some people believe that it is acceptable for young children to undertake jobs that they are paid for, whereas others believe that this is wrong and should be illegal.  This essay will discuss both sides of the issue.

This is quite simplistic but it makes it very clear what you are going to do.

You will obviously need to give your opinion as well in the essay, but stating this in the thesis ("This essay will discuss both sides of the issue and then give my opinion") sounds awkward so it is better without it.

Another possible way to do it is by having a sentence to introduce the topic first, and then paraphrasing the two opinions to make them your thesis:

At present, more and more young children are becoming involved in paid work.  Whilst some people are of the opinion that this is an entirely acceptable practice, others believe that this is completely wrong and should be made illegal.

This is fine as your thesis will match with your essay - you go on to discuss the first opinion and then the second one.

Or of course you could modify this slightly to include your opinion:

At present, more and more young children are becoming involved in paid work.  Whilst some people are of the opinion that this is an entirely acceptable practice,  I believe  that this is completely wrong and should be made illegal.

As long as you go on to discuss both sides of the argument, this is fine.

Agreeing or Disagreeing

Another type of question is when you are asked to agree or disagree with one opinion.

Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For this type of question, you need to state what your opinion is in the thesis statement.

Although you could feasibly do this in the conclusion, I think it is better to do it first so it is clear to someone reading the essay what your opinion is upfront. It is not wrong though to put it in the conclusion - this is your choice.

Your thesis statement here will depend on whether you agree, disagree, or partly agree. Here are some examples of each:

A thesis statement that agrees with the opinion :

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world.  However, I strongly believe that this form of medicine does not work and is possibly a danger to those using it.

A thesis statement that disagrees with the opinion :

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world.  I am unconvinced that it is dangerous, and feel that both alternative and conventional medicine can be useful.

A thesis statement that partly agrees with the opinion :

Alternative medicine is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional medicine and it is still used by many people all over the world.  I agree that for certain conditions this type of medicine is ineffective and could even be dangerous, but for some illnesses it is a good alternative choice.

These examples illustrate why it is important to ananlyze the question carefully and brainstorm your ideas first so you have a clear idea of what you will be writing and what your opinion is.

Other Essays

Some other essays may not ask you for your opinion specifically, but may ask you to discuss, for example, problems and solutions , causes and effects , advantages and disadvantages .

If you are asked to do this, then you should just clearly state that you will be discussing these two things in your essay. Here are some examples:

Problems and solutions:

Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.

Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

Sample thesis in bold:

Many countries of the world are currently experiencing problems caused by rapidly growing populations in urban areas. It  is critical to understand what these issues are and how both governments and individuals can overcome them.

Causes and Effects:

The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.

Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

Over the last ten years, Western societies have seen close to a 20% rise in the number of children who are overweight.  It is important to understand not only why this is happening but also the consequences of this worrying trend.

Advantages and Disadvantages

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Traffic congestion in many cities around the world is severe. One possible solution to this problem is to impose heavy taxes on car drivers and use this money to make public transport better.   These measures would have both benefits and drawbacks.

This lesson has provided you with some broad guidance on writing a thesis statement for different types of essay.

It is important to stress again though that questions can vary so you must always analyze if carefully and identify exactly what you need to do and what should therefore be in your thesis statement.

Remember, a thesis statement is just telling the reader what the focus of your essay is and giving your opinion if necessary.

Follow this link to see some examples of IELTS essay questions .

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Writing a strong thesis statement for your IELTS essays is a valuable skill. It can improve your writing and increase your overall score.

Your thesis statement acts as a roadmap for your reader. It guides them through your essay, clarifying your main argument and the direction of your writing.

This article will teach you how to create a clear and impactful thesis statement for your IELTS essays. It will provide you with the necessary tools to excel in this critical part of your writing.

Understanding the Importance of a Strong Thesis Statement

Key components of a thesis statement for ielts essays.

A strong thesis statement for IELTS essays should clearly state the writer’s opinion. It should introduce the main points of the essay. The thesis should mention the topic, the writer’s stance, and a brief overview of the arguments in the body paragraphs.

Action words like “discuss,” “argue,” or “analyze” can improve clarity. For instance, in an essay about computers in education, the thesis could be “This essay will explore the advantages of integrating computers in education, such as increased access to information and interactive learning. It will also consider potential disadvantages like distractions and reduced emphasis on traditional forms of education.”

Using specific language and relevant keywords enhances the thesis. A well-crafted thesis sets the foundation for a comprehensive essay structure. This leads to a higher band score in IELTS writing.

Process of Writing Thesis Statement for IELTS Essays

When writing a thesis statement for an IELTS essay, it’s important to clearly state your opinion on the topic. The thesis statement should be in the introduction. It should outline the main points to be discussed.

For example, when discussing the advantages and disadvantages of computers in education:

Thesis statement: “While computers offer career opportunities for students, they also present false information challenges.”

Crafting a strong thesis statement is crucial for a high band score in IELTS writing tasks. It helps examiners and teachers understand the main focus of your essay.

Analyzing the Essay Question

Analyzing the essay question for IELTS writing task 2 should start with identifying the main topic. Determine if the question asks for an opinion, advantages, and disadvantages, or a discussion. Use key language like “advantages,” “disadvantages,” “climate change,” “traffic congestion,” and “education” in the thesis statement to show understanding. Avoid pitfalls such as missing aspects of the question, providing false information, and lacking coherence.

Include action words addressing main points, both sides of an argument, and a realistic solution for a strong thesis statement that meets the task requirements. This approach demonstrates understanding to the examiner.

Identifying the Main Topic of the Essay

To identify the main topic of an IELTS essay, follow these steps:

• Analyze the essay question carefully.
• Break down the question into specific components.
• Identify keywords in the question.
• Determine the type of essay question (problem-solution, advantage-disadvantage, discussion, two-part question, etc.).

Pay attention to action words in the question. Understand the statement being made and identify the main points to address in the thesis statement.

Use specific language and keywords related to the topic, such as climate change, traffic congestion, education, career opportunities, and investment, to guide the thesis statement.

Avoid vague or general statements. Ensure the thesis statement is focused and addresses specific arguments or opinions for the body paragraphs.

By clearly stating the main topic in the thesis statement, maintain coherence and cohesion in the essay. This will lead to a stronger argument and a higher band score from the examiner.

Crafting a Clear and Concise Thesis Statement

Crafting a clear and concise thesis statement for IELTS essays involves using specific language and keywords related to the topic at hand. For example, “advantages,” “computers,” “climate change,” and “education.”

By incorporating action words and clearly stating the writer’s opinion or argument, the thesis statement becomes focused and precise. Avoiding vague or general statements is essential to address the specific question type, whether it’s a two-part question, problem-solution essay, or discussion essay.

Identifying the main topic of the essay is crucial as it helps determine the direction of the argument in the thesis statement. For instance, when discussing the impact of traffic congestion in city centers on CO2 emissions, the thesis statement should highlight both the advantages and disadvantages of investing in public transportation as a realistic solution.

This approach demonstrates coherence and cohesion within the essay structure and showcases a deeper understanding of the topic to the examiner.

Utilizing Specific Language and Keywords

Crafting a strong thesis statement for IELTS essays requires using specific language and keywords. Action words and directly addressing the question type make the statement clear and effective.

For example, in an IELTS Writing Task 2 about traffic congestion in city centers, the thesis statement can discuss the advantages and disadvantages of public transportation and privately owned vehicles in reducing CO2 emissions. This specific language guides the argument and sets the essay’s tone.

On the other hand, vague statements in a thesis can lead to a lack of coherence and make it hard for the examiner to follow the main points.

For instance, saying “society should invest in education for career opportunities” without specifying realistic solutions or the roles of parents and teachers may lack clarity.

Avoiding Vague or General Statements

When writing a thesis statement for IELTS essays, it’s important to be specific and avoid vague statements.

A clear thesis statement establishes the direction of the essay and should present a clear opinion or argument.

For instance, instead of saying “Computers have advantages and disadvantages,” a more specific thesis could be “While computers create job opportunities, their use in urban areas contributes to CO2 emissions.”

This specificity guides the discussion in the body paragraphs.

In IELTS Writing Task 2, which includes question types like two-part questions and problem-solution prompts, using action words and precise language enhances coherence and cohesion.

By addressing both sides of an issue and proposing a practical solution, writers can steer clear of vagueness and structure their essays effectively.

Teachers and examiners appreciate the clarity of a strong thesis statement, which can result in a higher band score.

The writing section of the IELTS test accounts for  33%  of the overall band score. british council

Tips for Writing a Band 7 Thesis Statement in IELTS Essays

Utilize pronouns for coherence and cohesion.

Pronouns are important for connecting ideas and maintaining a consistent flow in essays. When writing a thesis statement for IELTS essays, pronouns help convey the writer’s opinion and introduce the main points.

Effective use of pronouns ensures clarity and conciseness in the thesis statement, guiding the rest of the essay. For instance, when discussing computer benefits in education, pronouns can connect back to the introduction points smoothly.

Additionally, pronouns assist in addressing different sides of an argument, like the advantages and disadvantages of car use in city centers concerning CO2 emissions and traffic.

Using appropriate pronouns enhances overall essay coherence, potentially leading to higher scores from examiners and teachers.

Organize Ideas and Arguments Effectively

Crafting a strong thesis statement for an IELTS essay requires effective organization of ideas and arguments. Here are some key strategies to keep in mind:

• Clearly state your opinion in the introduction using action words.
• Structure the body paragraphs to address both sides of the argument.
• Example : Discussing advantages and disadvantages of city centers, like traffic congestion and CO2 emissions.
• Offer realistic solutions, such as addressing traffic jams.
• In the conclusion, reiterate the thesis statement and address wider implications.
• For instance, consider the impact of car use on society due to increased CO2 emissions contributing to global warming.

These strategies not only enhance coherence but also boost your band score in the IELTS writing task 2.

Incorporate Strategies to Support Your Thesis

When writing an IELTS essay, it’s important to use strategies that support the thesis statement to get a high band score.

One effective approach is using specific language and action words in the statement. This helps to clearly present the writer’s opinion and main points.

For example, when discussing car use in city centers to reduce CO2 emissions, terms like “investments in public transportation” and “traffic congestion” can strengthen the argument.

Recognizing different essay types, like problem-solution or discussion essays, allows for a more coherent structure. This leads to a cohesive argument supporting the thesis statement.

By analyzing both sides of a topic, such as the impact of heavy traffic due to privately owned vehicles, writers can provide a realistic solution without including false information.

Comparing Advantages and Disadvantages

Crafting a strong thesis statement for IELTS essays is important. It should clearly state the writer’s opinion and main points. This acts as a roadmap for the reader and helps the examiner or teacher understand the argument.

When comparing different viewpoints, it’s best to provide a balanced perspective. For example, discussing the advantages of public transportation in reducing traffic congestion while also mentioning the disadvantages of increased investment in transportation infrastructure can lead to a more cohesive essay structure.

To avoid vague statements, use action words that indicate the type of essay. For instance, stating that the essay will discuss solutions to reduce CO2 emissions from privately owned vehicles offers a more realistic approach than a general statement about traffic congestion. Be specific and concise in the thesis statement to effectively convey the main points and potentially achieve a higher band score in the IELTS writing task 2.

Identifying Different Types of Essays

Types of essays vary in structure and purpose. Some examples include:

• Narrative essays, which tell a story.
• Expository essays, which provide information.
• Persuasive essays, aim to convince the reader of the author’s opinion.
• Descriptive essays, focus on creating a vivid picture through sensory details.
• Compare and contrast essays, highlighting similarities and differences between two subjects.
• Cause and effect essays, explaining the relationship between events.

Having a clear thesis statement in the introduction, outlining the main points for discussion in the body paragraphs, is essential.

For IELTS writing task 2, understanding the question type is crucial for achieving a high band score.

Coherence and cohesion in essay structure are vital, whether it’s discussing traffic congestion or addressing CO2 emissions.

Analyzing key action words in the task question can help develop a strong thesis statement addressing both sides of the argument.

Using specific examples, like the impact of car use on climate change, can strengthen the argument and provide realistic solutions to global issues.

Strategies for Writing Band 8.5 Thesis Statements in IELTS Essays

Learn from christopher pell’s essay writing techniques.

Christopher Pell believes that having a strong thesis statement is crucial in IELTS essays. The statement should clearly show the writer’s opinion and guide the essay’s content. Using action words and specific language helps create a clear and focused thesis statement.

In two-part questions or problem-solution essays, including keywords related to the topic improves the statement’s clarity. Structuring the introduction with the main argument points and the stance taken sets the tone for the essay. Pell also suggests considering both sides of an argument in the thesis to demonstrate a balanced approach.

This not only adds depth but also shows the writer’s ability to analyze the topic critically. Following Pell’s techniques can help writers enhance their thesis statements and achieve higher band scores in IELTS writing tasks.

Enhance Writing Coherence through Brainstorming and Planning

Brainstorming and planning are important for writing tasks like IELTS essays.

By brainstorming ideas first, you can structure them logically to create a clear thesis statement.

This helps set the stage for the main points in the body paragraphs.

For example, when discussing the pros and cons of car use in city centers to reduce CO2 emissions, a solid thesis statement can guide the argument.

Brainstorming also helps identify key action words in the task question, indicating the type of essay.

This strategic planning helps achieve coherence and cohesion in your essay structure, meeting language requirements for a higher band score.

Careful planning and offering realistic solutions to issues like traffic congestion and global warming can showcase your knowledge effectively.

Implementing Techniques to Achieve Band 8 Thesis Statements

Crafting a thesis statement for IELTS essays requires using action words and specific language. This helps express the main points and opinions clearly. Incorporating keywords like “CO2 emissions” or “traffic congestion” makes the thesis statement more focused.

Avoid vague or general statements. Provide clear examples or arguments to strengthen relevance and coherence. For example, when discussing car use in city centers, specify the impact on traffic congestion and pollution levels. This enhances the clarity of the thesis statement.

Structure the statement to address “both sides” of the argument in a problem-solution or discussion essay. This allows for a balanced approach that engages the reader. By following these strategies and including relevant language requirements, IELTS writers can achieve a higher band score. This is done by presenting a well-organized and articulate thesis statement that sets the tone for the entire essay.

Examples of Strong Thesis Statements for Your IELTS Essays

A strong thesis statement for IELTS essays should present the writer’s opinion on the topic. It should also outline the main points that will be discussed in the essay.

For example, in an argument essay about the advantages and disadvantages of computers in education, a strong thesis statement could be: “While computers offer career opportunities and access to information, their overuse by students can lead to distractions and false information.”

By including action words and specific keywords like “career opportunities” and “false information,” the thesis statement becomes more impactful and relevant to the reader.

To ensure clarity and conciseness, the thesis statement should address the specific question type in the IELTS writing task 2. It should be supported by coherent body paragraphs that elaborate on both sides of the argument.

In the conclusion, the thesis statement should be reiterated to provide a cohesive structure to the essay. By using appropriate language and addressing the main points of the topic, a well-crafted thesis statement can lead to a higher band score and effectively communicate the writer’s stance to the examiner.

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Crafting a strong thesis statement for your IELTS essays is important.

By breaking paragraphs into shorter sentences and including facts and data, you can make your thesis statement more impactful and convincing.

This will help you present your argument and demonstrate your understanding of the topic.

A well-crafted thesis statement sets the tone for your essay and guides the reader on what to expect.

It is a crucial part of your essay that highlights your main idea and the direction of your argument.

Remember to keep it concise and focused to make a strong impression on the reader.

A thesis statement is a concise summary of the main point or claim of an essay. It is important in IELTS essays because it guides the reader and helps the writer maintain focus. Example: “The legalization of marijuana has both positive and negative impacts on society.”

To craft a strong thesis statement for your IELTS essay, clearly state your position and outline your main points. For example, “This essay will argue that government funding for education is crucial for societal development.”

An effective thesis statement in IELTS essays includes a clear topic, a concise argument, and a preview of supporting points. For example, “The government should prioritize renewable energy sources to combat climate change” is a strong thesis statement because it states a clear position and previews supporting arguments.

Here are some examples of effective thesis statements for IELTS essays: “In conclusion, strict regulations on fast food advertising are necessary to combat rising rates of obesity among children.”. “Overall, implementing renewable energy sources is crucial in reducing carbon emissions and combating climate change.”.

To ensure your thesis statement is relevant and clear, make sure it directly addresses the essay question and provides a roadmap for your argument. For example, if the question is about the impact of technology on education, a clear thesis statement could be “Technology has greatly enhanced learning opportunities in the classroom by increasing access to information and promoting interactive methods of instruction.”

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How to Write a Thesis Statement for IELTS Writing Task 2 ?

The IELTS Writing Task 2 is a challenging task that requires you to write an essay on a given topic in 40 minutes. One of the most important parts of your essay is the thesis statement. The thesis statement is the main argument or idea that you will be discussing in your essay. It sets the tone for your essay and guides the reader on what to expect. In this blog, we will discuss how to write a thesis statement for IELTS Writing Task 2.

What is a Thesis Statement?

A thesis statement is a sentence or two that summarizes the main point of an essay or research paper. It is usually placed in the introductory paragraph and provides a roadmap for the rest of the essay. The thesis statement should be specific, clear, and concise. It should also be arguable, meaning that there should be different opinions or perspectives on the topic.

Why is a Thesis Statement Important in IELTS Writing Task 2?

The thesis statement is an essential part of your  essay in IELTS Writing Task 2 . It tells the reader what to expect from your essay and sets the tone for the rest of the essay. A well-crafted thesis statement can help you to score higher in the exam. It shows that you have a clear understanding of the topic and have the ability to organize your ideas coherently.

Tips on Writing a Thesis Statement for IELTS Writing Task 2

1. understand the prompt.

The first step in writing a thesis statement for  IELTS Writing Task 2  is to understand the prompt. The prompt will provide you with a topic, and you need to ensure that you understand the topic before you start writing. Analyze the prompt and try to identify the keywords or phrases that can help you to develop your thesis statement.

2. Brainstorm Ideas

Once you have understood the prompt, the next step is to brainstorm ideas. Jot down all the ideas that come to your mind and try to connect them to the topic. Think about the main points that you want to make in your essay and how they relate to the topic. This will help you to develop a thesis statement that is specific and clear.

3. Make a Claim

The thesis statement should make a claim that is arguable. You should take a stance on the topic and provide a clear argument for your position. This will make your essay more interesting to read and help you to score higher in the exam. Avoid making a statement that is too general or vague, as it will not help you to develop a strong thesis statement.

4. Use Strong Language

Your thesis statement should use strong language that clearly states your position. Use phrases such as “I strongly believe that” or “It is clear that” to indicate your stance on the topic. Avoid using phrases such as “In my opinion” or “I think that,” as they make your thesis statement weak.

5. Keep it Concise

Your thesis statement should be concise and to the point. It should not be too long or complicated. Aim to write a thesis statement that is one or two sentences long and clearly conveys your main argument.

Examples of Thesis Statements for IELTS Writing Task 2

1. Prompt: Some people believe that social media has a negative impact on society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media and give your opinion.

Thesis Statement: While social media has its advantages, such as connecting people from different parts of the world, it also has its disadvantages, such as the spread of fake news and cyberbullying. In my opinion, the negative impact of social media on society outweighs the positive impact.

2. Prompt: Some people believe that children should be allowed to use mobile phones in school. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Thesis Statement: Although mobile phones can be useful for educational purposes, such as researching information and communicating with teachers, they can also be a distraction and hinder students’ learning. Therefore, I believe that children should not be allowed to use mobile phones in school.

3. Prompt: Some people argue that the use of renewable energy is the key to a sustainable future. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of renewable energy and give your opinion.

Thesis Statement: Renewable energy has many advantages, such as reducing carbon emissions and decreasing reliance on fossil fuels, but it also has its disadvantages, such as high initial costs and intermittency. In my opinion, the benefits of renewable energy outweigh the drawbacks, and it is crucial for a sustainable future.

4. Prompt: Some people think that parents should be responsible for teaching their children how to manage money. Others believe that schools should be responsible for this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Thesis Statement: While parents play a crucial role in teaching their children about money management, schools can also contribute to this by providing financial education and practical skills. Therefore, both parents and schools should share the responsibility of teaching children how to manage money.

In conclusion, writing a strong thesis statement is crucial for success in IELTS Writing Task 2. The thesis statement sets the tone for your essay and guides the reader on what to expect. To write a strong thesis statement, you need to understand the prompt, brainstorm ideas, make a claim, use strong language, and keep it concise. By following these tips, you can develop a thesis statement that is specific, clear, and arguable. Don’t forget to provide supporting evidence and examples in your essay to strengthen your argument. With practice, you can master the art of writing a strong thesis statement and achieve success in IELTS Writing Task 2.

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• October 06, 2022

Getting the exact IELTS band score you need for your dream program can be challenging, especially when it comes to the writing section. However, by learning effective writing skills, you will be sure to improve and get the score that you need.

For writing task 2, one of the most important skills for a high band score is thesis statement writing.

Read the post to learn more about thesis statements or skip to the section that most interests you.

Why do I need to write a thesis statement?

According to the British Council, the rubric for IELTS Writing Task 2 is made of four sections: Task Response,        Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resources, and Grammatical Range and Accuracy.

The second section, Coherence and Cohesion, is all about how effectively you can arrange information and connect your ideas. In short, this part assesses your essay structure.

If you want to show your teacher or test grader that you have great essay structure, learn to write a clear and strong thesis statement.

When an instructor or grader sees a good thesis statement, it signals that the essay writer knows what they are doing. It shows that the essay will be constructed of thoughtful points that are carefully connected, hopefully with transition phrases and other tools that create cohesion and readability.

In other words, a good thesis creates a good first impression.

What is a thesis statement?

An entire book could be written about the thesis statement, but it can be summarized as follows: one or two sentences that summarize the main points of the essay.

One way to think of a thesis statement is as a kind of preview or summary. Consider the last time you discovered a new show on Netflix or another streaming service.

There is probably a good chance that you picked that show for a few reasons: the cover image looked cool, the trailer seemed interesting, and the summary paragraph made the show sound enticing.

A thesis statement is like that preview paragraph on Netflix. Just like Netflix tells us what a show is about, the thesis statement tells us what an essay is about.

How do I write a thesis statement?

Before we discuss thesis statement writing, let’s quickly review the basic structure of IELTS essays.

As mentioned in our last post about IELTS Writing Task 2 , IELTS essays generally have four paragraphs:

• One introduction paragraph.
• Two body paragraphs.
• One conclusion paragraph.

The body paragraphs should each focus on one main point or idea. The thesis, which should be part of the intro paragraph, combines these two main points into a single sentence.

For example, if your essay is about reasons why Toronto is a great place to live, then your thesis will summarize the two main reasons like this:

Toronto is a great place to live because of job availability and endless options for leisure activities.

For the above topic, the first body paragraph will focus on job availability, and the second body paragraph will focus on leisure activities.

How can I write a thesis if I don’t know what my main points are?

The answer is that you don’t.

Contrary to popular belief, you should not write your introduction first . Instead, start with the body paragraphs, then go back and write your introduction. This allows you to figure out what your main points are before combining them into a thesis statement.

If you write your thesis statement first, then you might have to change it later if you get a better idea when you’re writing your body paragraphs.

This technique is much easier to use if you are doing a computer-based test, but if you are doing a paper-based test, you can simply leave the top 1/3 rd of the page empty so that you can add your intro later.

Another option is to create a basic outline of your essay before you start writing. This way, you will have an idea of what your main points are before you start writing, and you can focus on using correct language, rather than worrying about your ideas.

Whatever technique you choose, remember that you have only 40 minutes (sometimes less if you spent a lot of time on Writing Task 1), so you better work quickly!

Can you show me an example?

Review the sample below. The highlights show how the thesis statement summarizes the main ideas from the two body paragraphs. Green shows the main idea of Body Paragraph 1, and yellow shows the main idea of Body Paragraph 2.

Question: Many people feel that cars contribute to global warming. Do you think this is true?

Introduction: Driving a car is a normal part of the day-to-day life of most people. However, in the last several years, many are considering alternative transportation options due to fears that driving contributes to global warming. It is true that using cars is a contributing factor due to CO 2 emissions and overreliance on vehicles.

Body Paragraph 1: CO 2 emissions have an obvious impact on climate change. It has been proven that CO 2 and other greenhouse gases have a warming effect on the earth’s atmosphere. What’s more, about 80% of all greenhouse gas emissions are from CO 2 , meaning that any reduction in CO 2 emissions would be good for the environment.

Body Paragraph 2: Most people use vehicles more often than they need them. It is okay to use vehicles for long trips or to transport large amounts of heavy equipment or goods, but it does not make sense to drive a car to the corner store when you can work there instead. To reduce CO 2 emissions, the population must use alternative means of transportation, such as bicycles and public transit.

Should my thesis statement be different for every essay type?

As discussed in our previous IELTS Writing Post , Writing Task 2 has five types of essays. Even though there are five types of essays, the method for writing a thesis statement is always the same. The thesis statement must always summarize the main points of the essay, no matter the type of essay.

Look at the chart below to notice the similarities between the thesis statements of different types of essays.

How do I practice?

One way to practice thesis statement writing is to find a list of IELTS Writing Task 2 questions, such as those on IELTS Liz . After you have a good list of questions, follow these four steps:

• Look at the first question on the list.
• Time yourself for two minutes.
• Write a thesis statement as fast as you can.
• After two minutes, move to the next question and repeat the process, even if you are not done.

If you follow these steps, eventually, you will become comfortable with writing thesis statements quickly, which is required for a real IELTS test.

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IELTS Writing Task 2: How to Craft a Clear Thesis Statement?

A thesis statement is the most crucial sentence in your IELTS writing task 2!

So, hop on and let’s learn how to perfectly craft one!💯

A thesis statement is your main idea of the whole question. 

In simple words, it is the way you feel about the prompt in 1 sentence!

The 1st act is to recognize the question type and the action words. 

So what are Action Words, first?🤔

The Action Words in IELTS Writing 1. Opinion Question (Do you agree or Disagree) 2. Discussion Question (Discuss both points of view) 3. Advantages and Disadvantages 4. Problem and Solution.

Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough. Do you agree or disagree?

Here, the action words are ‘do you agree or disagree?’

This was just a sample trick to write a perfect thesis statement! 

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IELTS Writing Task 2: ✍️ Everything You Need to Know

When helping students prepare for the IELTS test, one of the biggest fears is how to do well in IELTS Writing Task 2. 

IELTS Writing Task 2 is the second part of the writing test, where you are presented with a point of view, argument or problem and asked to write an essay in response. Your essay should be in a formal style, at least 250 words in length and you should aim to complete it in under 40 minutes. 

IELTS Writing Task 2: Everything You Need to Know

In this video, I’ll outline exactly what you must do to create an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay that could score a Band 7, 8 or 9.

It doesn’t matter if you’re new to IELTS or if you’ve failed the exam before – I’ve broken everything down into a simple 3-step process that anyone can use to improve their scores! Watch the video above to find out what they are.

5 Steps to a Band 7 in IELTS Writing Task 2

1. Understand the question.

You must understand the question before you attempt to answer it. This way, you’ll know exactly what the examiner is looking for. One of the biggest mistakes students make is not answering the question fully, which stops them from getting a score higher than a Band 5.

To analyse the question , you must first identify the question type, then identify the keywords in the question and finally identify the instructions words. This will help you understand exactly what the examiner wants you to do with the question.

2. Plan your answer.

The students who get the highest marks in Writing Task 2 always plan their answers for up to 10 minutes. Planning helps you organise your ideas and structure your essay before you write it, saving you time and helping you produce a clear and coherent essay.

3. Write an introduction.

The introduction should answer the question directly. This tells the examiner that you know what you are doing straight away and helps you write your main body paragraphs.

4. Write the main body paragraphs.

This is where you give the examiner more detail . You do this by stating your main points and supporting these with explanations and relevant examples.

5. Write a conclusion.

In your conclusion , you should provide a summary of what you already said in the rest of your essay.

4 Ways to Improve your Score in IELTS Writing Task 2

Many people know they need to improve their writing skills but don’t know how to do it. Here are 4 ways you can boost your score in Writing Task 2:

1. Understand the exam.

You must first understand what IELTS Writing Task 2 is, what you are expected to do and how to give the examiners what they want. This is the first stage and one that is often overlooked.

There are many online resources, often with conflicting and poor-quality information, so finding a reliable source of information is key.

2. Identify your weak areas.

If your car breaks down, you would try and identify which part caused the problem. If you get sick, your doctor will run tests to determine the exact cause of your symptoms.

IELTS Writing Task 2 is the same. We must first identify WHY you are not getting the score you need before we can help you improve.

However, be very careful! You wouldn’t ask the average man on the street for medical advice, so make sure you find someone who knows what they are doing and has the expertise to help you with this.

3. Fix the problems.

Now that we know what the problems are, we must fix them.

If your grammar needs work, fix those issues. If your vocabulary is lacking, work on fixing this issue.

Just as a good doctor can help you fix a medical problem, a good IELTS teacher can help you fix your specific issues.

4. Practice and get feedback.

Practice alone will not help you. It is an essential part of your preparation, but you must also get feedback on your work if you are really going to improve.

You wouldn’t try to teach yourself how to drive without an instructor, would you?

Find someone who will give you accurate and helpful feedback on your work. Otherwise, you will not be able to move to the last stage.

Now that you have understood what you need to do, identified the exact areas you need to work on, improved those areas, and received feedback on your work, you are now ready to get the IELTS Writing Task 2 score you deserve.

Writing Task 2 Structures 

I want to warn you about structures because they are not a magic wand that will help you automatically get a higher score. They WILL help you, but please realise that they are just a small part of your overall score.

These structures provide a sentence-by-sentence template for all the main Task 2 question types, making your job much easier on exam day.

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Essential Writing Task 2 Skills 

No matter how good your English is, you must still learn IELTS writing skills before taking the Writing Task 2 test. These helpful guides will take you through each of these skills step-by-step:

• How to Plan an Essay

Making a good plan actually saves you time when you write your essay. This guide will show you how to plan and write a clear essay every time.

• How to Think of Relevant Ideas

This guide provides 5 different methods to help you quickly think of relevant ideas that are directly linked to the question.

• How to Write a Complex Sentence

Complex sentences help you boost your score for grammar. They are actually very simple to write and are not complex at all.

• How to Paraphrase

Paraphrasing is one of the essential IELTS skills for all parts of the IELTS test. You should paraphrase the question in the very first sentence of your essay to help boost your vocabulary score in Writing Task 2.

• How to Write a Supporting Paragraph

Supporting paragraphs are the main body paragraphs and are the meat in the sandwich. This is where you provide the detail the examiner is looking for in the form of explanations and examples.

• How to Write a Thesis Statement

A thesis statement tells the examiner your opinion. Many IELTS Writing Task 2 questions specifically ask for your opinion, and if you don’t write it clearly, you have not answered the question properly. This article shows you how, where and when to give your opinion.

How many words should I write?

Around 250 words? Exactly 250 words or over 250 words? How many words over? How do I know how many words I have? Will I lose marks if I write too many words? This article answers all those questions.

• How to Understand and Analyse Any Question

A critical part of answering any question. This article shows you how to break down any Task 2 question and identify the keywords, micro-keywords and instruction words to help you answer the question effectively.

• How to Write a Great Introduction

The introduction is the first thing the examiner reads; therefore, we must give them a good first impression. I share a very specific sentence-by-sentence structure in this article to help you write introductions quickly and effectively.

• Task 2 Marking Criteria 

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Writing Task 2 Common Topics 

Knowing the common topics can help you prepare for the test more efficiently. Here are the 10 most common topics over the last few years. Studying hard is great, but don’t forget to study smart.

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Full IELTS Writing Task 2 Practice Lessons 

Here are some lessons that I have used when teaching students about IELTS Writing Task 2. I have changed them so that you can easily learn from home. They are very long but contain all the necessary information combined with the skills above.

• Agree or Disagree (Opinion) Lesson

In this lesson, we look at how to tackle an ‘agree or disagree’ question. Many people worry about whether to take one side of the other or discuss both sides. Additionally, people also worry about how to deal with ‘To what extent’ question types. We allay all of these fears in this lesson.

• Discussion Essay Lesson

‘Discuss both views’ questions often confuse people because you are asked to do many things in one essay. As such, it is very important to remember that the question asks you to discuss BOTH views AND give YOUR opinion.

• Problem and Solution Essay Lesson

These questions are much easier than you think. You probably discuss problems and solutions in your day-to-day life all the time. Keep it simple.

• Advantages and Disadvantages Lesson 

There are a couple of different types of advantages and disadvantages questions. This lesson will show you how to answer them.

• Writing Task 2 Exercise with Video

Writing is a skill, and just like any other skill, it is important to practice to improve.

• From Band 6.5 to 8 Demo Lesson

This is my most comprehensive free lesson on IELTS Writing Task 2. We show you how we took one VIP student from Band 6.5 to an amazing 8.

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IELTS Writing Task 2 Essential Information

• You must write an essay in response to a question.
• You must write 250 words or more.
• Task 2 is worth 2/3 of your total mark on the Writing test.
• You should spend around 40 minutes on this part of the test.
• General Training and Academic are essentially the same for Task 2. However, they are different for Task 1.
• There are certain types of questions that you will be asked, for example, opinion, discussion etc. See below for more detail on these.
• Task Achievement (25%)
• Coherence and Cohesion (25%)
• Lexical Resource (25%)
• Grammatical Range and Accuracy (25%)

Grammar and Vocabulary

Grammar is one of the four things you will be marked on in the Writing Task 2 test. Finding out what your common grammar mistakes are and then fixing them is a very powerful way to boost your score in this area. Here are some common grammar mistakes I have found after making hundreds of tests.

• Top 10 Grammar Mistakes

For most IELTS students, the problem is not grammar in general. In fact, it is usually just 1-2 problem areas. Therefore, when you fix these main weaknesses, you’ll be able to improve your grammar and your writing score dramatically.

• Using Personal Pronouns

Hint- They aren’t as big of a deal as you think.

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How can i improve my writing.

You will find all the resources you need on our Writing Task 2 page. Click the link below:

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How can I get a Band 7, 8 or 9?

The answer to this question is different for every individual IELTS student, as it depends on a number of factors, including your work ethic, English skills and exam strategy. You'll find a guide to answering this question in this article

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Do you have any sample answers?

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Will using 'high level' or 'academic' words help me improve my score?

Probably not.

Read my recent article about IELTS vocabulary here:

5 Things You Need to Know about IELTS Vocabulary

Can I use idioms?

No, you should not write idioms for Task 2.

Can I use personal pronouns?

You should avoid using personal pronouns, but it is fine to use them when giving your personal opinion.

Do you write a conclusion for Task 2?

Yes, it is very difficult to get a good score in Task 2 if you haven't finished your essay with a conclusion. You will find an in-depth lesson on conclusions here:

How to Write an Effective Task 2 Conclusion

How many paragraphs should I write?

Most IELTS task 2 essays follow the same basic four paragraph structure:

• Introduction
• Supporting Paragraph 1
• Supporting Paragraph 2

However, you can find more comprehensive help with structuring your Task 2 essays here:

5 Day Challenge

Do I need to plan my essay?

I would highly recommend planning your essay. A good plan acts like a map that guides you through the essay, ensuring that you give the examiner exactly what they need to award you the score you need. You can find help with planning your essays here: How to Plan an IELTS Essay

You must write at least 250 words in Writing Task 2.

I would suggest that you aim to write around 270-280 words in total. Aiming for 20-30 words more than the required amount makes you more likely to reach the word limit without setting an unrealistic goal.

Will I lose marks if I don't write enough words?

Yes, if you don't write the required number of words, you will lose marks in 'Task Achievement' for not answering the question fully. Read more here .

Can I use contractions?

No, should not use contractions when you are writing an academic essay.

Thesis Statement In IELTS Writing

• Post author By Simple IELTS Solutions
• Post date May 6, 2022
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When writing an introduction to an IELTS Task 2 essay you want to include 3 things:

• Paraphrase the question
• Thesis statement
• Outline statement

This post is for anyone who is unsure of what a thesis statement is or how they should write one. By the end of this post, you will know exactly why a thesis statement is important and how to make sure you are writing them correctly. On top of that, you will be able to write a brilliant introductory paragraph every time.

Let us look at an example question.

This is an opinion essay question:

Some people think that governments must insist on preserving the traditional appearance of old buildings undergoing renovation or redevelopment.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I will write the introduction paragraph by doing 3 things; paraphrasing the question, writing a thesis statement and writing an outline statement.

Paraphrasing the question

You paraphrase the question by saying a similar thing but using different words and phrases. This is a good way to start your essay and ensure that you are talking about the correct topic.

It is only the first part of the question that we paraphrase. If I were to paraphrase the above question, I may say something like this.

This is the original question:

But I don’t want to use the same words as the questions so I use synonyms instead.

Many people believe that governments should ensure that historic buildings maintain their original aesthetic appearance.

This sentence says the same thing as the first part of the question but it is going to impress the reader (examiner) because it uses different language.

What is a thesis statement?

The thesis statement tells the reader (or IELTS examiner) what the essay will be about and introduce the main ideas. Also, if the question is asking your opinion this is where it should first be included. It is typically just 1 or 2 sentences and is going to act a little like a topic sentence for the whole essay.

If you don’t know about topic sentences, follow this link.

How to write a thesis sentence

The thesis statement introduces what the essay will be about but it may be slightly different depending on the different types of essay questions.

This is a summary of things that you may want to include in the topic sentence for each essay type:

Opinion Essay – Write 1 or 2 reasons for your opinion (you don’t need to explain further at this stage)

Advantages & Disadvantages – Write and advantage and disadvantage

Problem & Solution Essay – Give 1 or 2 problems and a solution

Discussion Essay – Talk about both sides of the argument and give your opinion (if asked).

Double Question Essay – Answer both questions but only briefly.

Let us have a look at an example question, I’ll paraphrase the question and write a thesis statement for it.

My thesis for the question that we talked about may look something like this:

I absolutely agree that preserving historic buildings is a vital part of protecting a country’s historical culture for future generations.

The above is the thesis statement, it tells the reader what I think.

The outline statement

Finally, you must outline the things that you will talk about in the rest of the essay. This gives the reader (examiner) an idea of what will be covered in the essay and helps keep you focused on your writing.

An outline statement for our example question in the introduction paragraph may be something like this:

This essay will explore the reasons why protecting old buildings is so important, the main reason being to safeguard an area’s history.

Now let us see this all together. Firstly, let us look at the question again.

This is my introduction paragraph including the thesis statement and outline statement.

Many people believe that governments should ensure that historic buildings maintain their original aesthetic appearance. I absolutely agree that preserving historic buildings is a vital part of protecting a country’s historical culture for future generations. This essay will explore the reasons why protecting old buildings is so important, the main reason being to safeguard an area’s history.

The thesis statement is in bold.

This is a discussion essay question, write the introduction paragraph by paraphrasing the question and adding the thesis statement.

Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Tell me your thesis statement in the comments below.

Next time you are writing an IELTS writing task 2 essay (or any essay) make sure to include a thesis statement to help the reader to know exactly what your answer will be about.

To find out how I would plan an IELTS Task 2 essay, follow this link.

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IELTS Essay Writing: The Argument-led and Thesis-led Approaches

by Manjusha Nambiar · April 6, 2013

You can approach your IELTS essay task in two different ways. For example, you may opt for an argument-led approach or a thesis-led approach.

Consider the essay questions given below.

1. Nowadays more and more teenagers get involved in criminal activities. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done to prevent this?

2. Nowadays more and more teenagers get involved in criminal activities. What can be done to prevent this?

The first essay topic includes two questions whereas the second one includes just one topic. When your essay topic asks you to answer more than one question, the argument-led approach is more suitable because it allows you to discuss and compare different views and analyse problems. The thesis-led approach is more useful when you have to answer only one question and when you have a clear opinion on that.

The argument led approach

This approach is helpful while discussing different views or comparing advantages and disadvantages.

Read the essay topic given below.

A large number of unmarried youngsters now live on their own in cities away from their hometowns. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

This essay asks you to compare the advantages and disadvantages of a particular trend. Before you start writing brain storm ideas for both sides of the argument; that is, both for and against the issue.

In your introduction, paraphrase the question showing the topic clearly. Do not repeat the exact same words or phrases given in the question. Of course, this is not always possible and sometimes you will have to repeat some of the words. However, avoid the repetition of the entire question at all costs. You may express your opinion in the introduction itself.

Here is a sample introduction statement.

The number of unmarried men and women who live on their own are definitely on the rise. This trend has both positive and negative aspects. For one thing, when people live on their own, they learn to become self-reliant. On the other hand, too much freedom can sometimes lead them astray.

Develop the body of your response

Now that you have clearly stated that this trend has both positive and negative sides, you have to develop your body paragraphs accordingly.

You may write about the positive sides in the first body paragraph. Make sure you support your arguments with valid examples from your own experience. Do not write anything about the negative sides in this paragraph. Discuss only one main point in each paragraph. In the next body paragraph, you can write about the negative sides. Conclude your essay by summarizing the main points.

The Thesis-led approach

Read the essay question given below.

A large number of unmarried youngsters now live on their own in cities away from their hometowns. Is this a positive or negative trend?

As you can see, this essay topic clearly asks for your opinion. The argument-led approach is not suitable in this case. Instead, you have to opt for the thesis-led approach . This approach is suitable when you have or when you are required to take a clear opinion on a particular topic.

If you believe that something is good or right, the whole of your essay – your introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion – should support that view. Do not write about the negative aspects after you have clearly stated that something is good. Now in case, you believe that something is bad, do not write one paragraph explaining why it is bad and another paragraph analyzing the positive aspects of the situation.

Here is a sample introduction statement for the essay topic given above.

More and more unmarried young men and women now live on their own in large cities. This is clearly a positive development. When people live on their own, they learn many skills necessary for success in life. For example, they learn to be responsible for their actions. They also learn to become self-reliant.

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Practising Background Statements for IELTS Introductions

Below are four essay questions that appeared this month (December 2018) in IELTS writing task 2. Under each essay question are model background statements. You will see the different ways you can paraphrase the essay question.

All IELTS writing task 2 essay introduction paragraphs contain:

• Background statement = a paraphrase of the essay question
• Thesis statement = your position or main points

This lesson will give you practice at paraphrasing essay questions to make a background statement. Below you will find 4 essays with model background statements and a list of tips to help you.

IELTS Background Statement Practice

Paraphrase the essay questions below to create one background statement. The first one has been done for you as an example with three possible options. I would like you to write a background statement for questions 2-4.

Essay Question 1

Science will soon result in people living to an average of 100 years or more. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Model Background Statement for IELTS:

• People’s lifespan is increasing due to developments in science and it is thought that people will soon have an average life expectancy of 100 years or longer.
• Due to the development of science, people’s lifespans might be extended to 100 years or even longer.
• People may one day live to be 100 years old or more owing to the development of science.

Essay Question 2

Some people prefer online classes, while others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Model Background Statements:

• While there are people who prefer to take part in online courses, others believe that traditional classroom teaching is by far superior.
• Online course are very popular with some people, however others still consider teacher led classrooms as the most effective way to learn.
• Although online courses are preferred by some people, there are others who firmly believe that learning should take place in a classroom face to face with a teacher.

Essay Question 3

Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?

• It is a common problem that people struggle to find a healthy balance between their work and other areas of their life.
• Finding a balance between work and other areas of life can be a challenge that some people struggle with.
• While many people wish for a healthy work-life balance, few are able to realise this.

Essay Question 4

There has been an increase in the number of children and youngsters committing crime. What are the reasons for this and punishments should they receive?

• The number of crimes involving children and adolescents has risen over recent years.
• Children and teenagers appear to be involved in an increasing number of crimes.
• It has been observed that juvenile crime is on the rise.

Tips for IELTS Background Statements

• Don’t write a very long background statement. It doesn’t help your score to do that and wastes valuable time.
• Try to write your background statement as one complex sentence. to do that, use a clause and correct linking.
• Don’t paraphrase unless you are 100% sure your word is perfect. Not all words can be changed in English. Be selective when you paraphrase. Paraphrasing is a skill about when to change something and also when NOT to change something.
• Don’t aim to impress – aim for accuracy instead.
• You don’t always need to start your background with “some people..”. See all the options above.
• You should not start your essay with overused expressions that are popular with low level English users, such as “In the modern era,” or “With the advent of modern technology..”
• Avoid learning expressions which you think will impress the examiner “A hot debate..” / “a burning question..” “a highly controversial issue..”. The examiner is trained to spot these learned expressions. They don’t help your score and show a lack of individuality in your language. You need to write each sentence in your own words, unique to yourself.

I hope you found this lesson useful 🙂

All the best

Hi Liz, Thanks a lot for your straight forward answers

You’re welcome 🙂

1. Due to the development in science, it is expected of human being to have an averagely 100 years and above life expectancy 2. Most individuals have preference to virtual classes, however some think teacher to student classroom method is more better 3. Most individuals aim at maintaining a balance between work and other areas of life but only few people are able to realize this target 4. It has been discovered that teenagers and adolescent crimes has increased in recent years

Question 1 Humans are projected to soon be able to live to an average of 100 years and over due to advancements in science.

Question 2 Teaching these days takes two major forms-online classes and in a traditional classroom and some people prefer online classes to being in a traditional classroom and vice versa.

Question 3 It is such a daunting task these days that one finds a balance between work and other aspects of life. Few people find success.

Questions 4 Current statistics show that children and youngsters are increasingly indulging in criminal activities.

While some people prefer to take part in online classes, however, many believe that having classes in the classroom is by far superior for learning.

thank you Liz 😊😊

Thanks so much Liz. I have found this so helpful

I’m glad it’s useful 🙂

Great work Liz

1. The people’s life expectancy will be increasing to an average of 100 years old or longer due to the advancement of science. 2. While certain individuals prefer learning in the online classroom, others opine that it is more effective to study in the usual classroom face to face with the tutor. 3. Some people try to seek the equality between their occupation and other businesses, while few of them unbelievably earn that. 4. The plenty of young ages that involve to the crime has been increasing in our society.

1. People are expected to have a longer life span due to advancement in science 2. While some persons favoured distant learning, others are of the opinion that face to face learning with a teacher is best. 3. Although most people have made an attempt to strike a balance between their work and other areas of their life, only a handful of them eventually becomes successful. 4. Recently children are becoming more involve in criminal offences. Pls Liz evaluate for me. Thanks for your teaching.am grateful. Expecting your reply

Vitual learning is on the increase in recent years, however, some people still prefer the face to face with teachers

1) The life expectancy of people will be an average of 100 years or longer in according to scientific reports. 2)Online classes which are popular nowadays are found as a better way to learn by some people, whereas some people believe that the old methods which contain face to face learning are more effective. 3) Although a lot of people want to have a balanced life between their work and out of work activities, only a few succeed in this. 4) More and more children and teenagers have been committing a crime recent years.

Hello! Thanks for the great tips and extended list of examples 🙂 I believe there’s a typo in point 7, lack if instead of lack of. Thanks and cheers!

Brilliant! Thanks. It’s really helpful when people spot my typos 🙂

Thanks God , eventually I found a plenty of valuable advices and ideas .

Thank you so much ma’am 😊

Thank You most sincerely for all that you do. You are a blessing and I look forward to taking my exam tomorrow because of you. God bless!

After coronavirus I think no one prefers online classes 😄

It’s been a tough year for everyone. Hopefully 2021 will be better 🙂

1) Development in science is considered to shortly reach a level enough to be able to increase the life expectancy of people to an average of about 100 years. 2)Some people consider online classes preferable while at the same time others believe traditional physical classrooms to be more efficient. 3)Although many people attempt for finding an appropriate balance between their jobs and rather informal sides of their life, only few successfully achieve this. 4)An increase in the number of children and adolescents to commit a crime and break the law has been listed evident.

2. Virtual education is preferred by few individuals, while others are considering ancient classroom learning system as the best method.

3. It is not uncommon that persons grapple to search an equilibrium point between their work and other factors of their life.

4. It is not deniable that the rate of performing offences by children and youth has surged.

It is widely believed that the advancements in science would consequently increase the average life expectancy upto more than a century in future.

2. Online courses are best suited with some people.However, others still prefer to attend the courses in the usual lecture hall for the effective learning. 3.Finding a well-balanced path among work-life and personal life is more challenging to understand. 4.There is a huge rise in the crime rate which involved by the children and young people

2. Preference given to online classes for study purpose by many young people .However, others like to learn in common classroom with other students.

3.It is a difficult problem for many people to maintain sustainable balance between their Professional and personal life.However, few of them able to achieve it.

4 .Crime activities among toddlers and adolescent are increasing at fast pace,who are the policymakers of nation.

Childrens are not toddlers!! Toddlers are only 1-3 years old

These days, work life integration is a challenge for peoples,and some of them can fulfill it.

Maintaining a work-life balance is becoming a common problem for most of the people. However some overcome and attain success in it.

Learning being an integral part of every individual, some people prefer to take online coaching whereas others choose the conventional teaching methods.

Development of science is not debatable. As an outcome of scientific development, humans breathing will quickly come to normal of 100 years or longer. In my opinion, this development is damaging signs for humans and also to other species in the earth.

I really like that lesson

Q2= With the advancement in technology, most of the universities have launched their online courses and a section of people agree with this idea, however, others still believe old way of teaching in a classrooms is by far superior.

Q3= Undoubtedly, for every working professional maintaining a work-life balance is vital for their health and family relations. While many people are fighting to achieve this, but only a few of them are successful.

Q4= The sudden increase in the crime rate is a cause of concern for any society, and if the participation of pupils and young generation is rising in committing the crime, then it is a dangerous sign for any nation.

Q4: The number of criminal cases is specifically increasing in children and youngsters.

Q2 As technology is progressing through time more and more people are getting acquainted with digital forms of technology i.e online classes. However, some people still prefer and believe that traditional classrooms is the ideal one.

2.While there are persons who choose to take part in online courses, others believe that traditional classrooms are by far superior.

3.There is a considerable number of persons who are working hard to create harmony between work and their personal life, although, few are able to realise this.

4.The number of preteen and young adults responsible for crime has growth recently.

Many people spend their time and effort in discovering the ways to achieve a work-life balanced lifestyle. But the count of people who achieved the milestone is minimal till date.

It has been seen that lifespan of the people is on an increase and it is assumed that the life expectancy of humans will approach 100 years or more because of the near developments in science.

Comments please.

Although is it very common for people to study through digital mode of learning but few people believe that conventional approach of study outweighs other modes of study.

Guys trying first time please respond or try to correct.

Despite the great availability of the digital mode of study, the belief that the conventional approach of study is the best also exists.

Although it is very rare than one lives above the age of 80 years but with upcoming developments in science it is being assumed that people will have a life expectancy of about 100 years.

Q2= online class have become a preferable mode of learning by some people however some people still believe learning in a classroom is better. Q2= finding a balance between work and other aspect of your life has become common although only some people are able to achieve this. Q4 crimes involving children and teenagers are on the increase.

Good attempt but there are number of grammar mistakes in your statements. You can do better by avoiding these minor inaccuracies.

Q2= Although online class ha gained popularity among people but classroom learning is still preferred by some people. Q2= A balance between job and other aspects of life has become a challenge to find which is achievable by only a few people. Q4= Crimes are increasing among the children and teenagers.

1. It is a common problem that people struggle to maintain a balance between work and other social activities. Although people try to solve it, little is getting progressed in their endeavor. 2. While a lot of individuals choose online education, there are still many people who hold the opinion that traditional face to face learning method is more superior than online learning. 3. The number of crime committed by children and teenagers has increased in recent years.

2. Although online courses are preferred by many, others consider that classroom-based learning and teaching is the most effective way to gain knowledge.

3. Finding a balance between work and other areas of life can be difficult to some which only a few have succeeded.

4. The number of crimes committed by children and teenagers has increased significantly over the years.

Essay 2 Use of traditional classes and online classes is still debatable among people because of different views in advantages and disadvantages towards both learning techniques.

Essay 3 People find it difficult to archieve an equilibrium between work and other social life activities.

Essay 4 A high rate of Crime has been recorded due to children and youngsters being involved in criminal activities at a tender age.

Essay 2 : People have different preferences for attending classes. Owing to the benefits of learning in different ways, some are inclined towards online classes and few are towards traditional classrooms.

Essay 3: Some of many who struggle to maintain balance between their work life and other sides including family and friends, succeed in their purpose while rest of them do not.

Essay 4: A high rise in the crime rate of childern and teenagers is recorded.

1.Most of the students would rather like traditional classes than online classes to gain knowledge 2.Large number of individuals really can maintain the equilibrium either side of their jobs and other side of life ,while others find it difficult to do so . 3.Due to several reasons,the rate of committing crime has been increased among juvenile and adolescents .

1.Most of the students would rather like traditional classes than online classes to gain knowledge 2.Large number of individuals really can maintain the equlibrium eitherside of their jobs and other side of life ,while others find it difficult to do so . 3.Due to several reasons,the rate of committing crime has been increased among juvenile and adolecents .

1. With the advancement in technology and due to a comparatively busy life, people consider online coaching as one of the best option to gain knowledge. 2. Work and life balance is a mandatory requirement in the present scenario where people must allocate their time wisely. 3. Crimes among teens and children are increasing day by day due to their exposure to such environmental views through media.

Essay 2: Online classes are being favored by a few people, though, some are of the opinion that classroom based is still better.

Essay 3 : Many people have been trying to find equilibrium between career and other facets of their life, though, a small number successfully attain this.

Essay 4: The number of youths perpetrating crime is on the rise./ The number of youths and adolescents doing unlawful acts is on the rise.

Essay 2 – Preferences of the people are diverting towards opt for online classes due to advancement in information technology plus saving time in comparison to be present in normal routine classes. on the contrary, others believe to learn better and productive in physical classroom.

Essay 3 – Life of the many people has been tended to be hectic and exhausted, many of them are struggling to get equality or parallel between their work and rest of their life in terms of family, friends, and social activities.

Essay 4 – Population has been rising tremendously, causing more demand for daily consumption and basic requirements of life with limited resources. This may lead to increase in crime ratio for teens & youngsters.

1) Answer: – Certain people follow online education system due to advance technology .Whereas others are still in favor of learning in physical classrooms. – It is because traditional education system have greater sense of responsibility and high interaction, however it lacks some modern facilities while compared to ancient education such as less flexibility and fewer choices. This essay will discuss both view and give the opinion.

2)Answer: -Some people attempt to focus on multiple chores such as job and other activities like education.While, certain people are able to accomplish this success because of their ability. – There are some solution to keep focus on both work and they are hard works and proper time management .

3)Answer: – The felony done by the adolescent are raising day by day. – The reason behind this problem is due to poverty and illiteracy .In my opinion, I think the punishment should be given by looking the background of their family.

1. Online classes are getting popular these days, still there are people who think that traditional classes are better for learning.

2. Most of the people struggle to maintain a balance in their work and personal life, however there are some who know the art of how to achieve that balance in life.

3. In recent years there has been a rise in the number of crime committed by youngsters in our society, which is a matter of great concern for all of us.

#Although online classes are liked by many however, some people still like to study in traditional classes. ## Mostly people like to maintain balance between life at workplace and at home but only few of them succeed. ### It has been noticed that Juvenile crime rate is excelling.

Hump Q1. A number of people like online lectures while some feel it is quite advantageous to have conventional lecture halls. Q2. Many people strive to achieve a balance between their job and private activities. Q3. There is rise in juvenile delinquency.

2.It is true that tuitions over the internet are more liked by some whereas traditional classrooms are still preferred by many . 3. Although most of the people struggle to maintain a balanced life, in terms of job and other aspects, only few are able to experience it in their lives Many try hard to have a balanced life, despite the fact that just a few could actually achieve it 4.Adolescents breaking the law is on the rise than ever before. Poverty and media are two causes for this.

Q2 (a)Online classes are gaining popularity with some people compared to the ancient classrooms which are still the favourite to some though. (b) while some people opt for the online classes, there are some who still consider the olden classrooms as the best. Q3 Finding a balance between work and other social life issues is a challenge with some people. Q4 It has been discovered that crimes committed by juveniles are on the increase

1.There is a fierce debate among individuals that whether the online classes are better or tradirional classroom. I,however,believe that traditional teaching contribute to the overall development of a student . 2.In present scenairo, work-balance life is,undoubtedly ,a dream for many people and usually they fail to achieve this.The best way to maintain it is effective time management. 3.The crime ,nowadays,is more commited by children and youngsters.The reason behind this is more liberty and pocket money they have ,undoubtedly ,punishment is highly required so thet afraid from commiting crime again.

Essay question:1 Online classes are preferred by a few people whereas a group of people believes that it is a good way to learn and teach in the traditional classroom. Essay question:2 The majority of people efforts to seek a balance among their daily activity and other aspects of their life.Although, some individual can be gained with a good plan, focus, time management. Essay question:3 Nowadays, the number of attempting crime has been growing by children and youngsters.

Essay 2. In recent years, online classes have lured a lot of people among the student community than the conventional classroom studies. Since our classrooms are brought to the living room, it provides a great opportunity to everyone who wish to pursue their studies at their own pace and at anypoint of time in their life.

Pamela says, Qst 2. Technology has expanded such that few individuals believe that internet classes is preferable, however, on the other hand, others opine that the orthodox way of learning is better. Qst 3. The burning question of the day is whether or not there should be an equilibrium between work and life, although it seems that only some faculty could achieve this. Qts.4. In recent times, there has been a tremendous increase in crime rate. Unfortunately, little ones and teenagers are said to be perpetrators.

1) With the advent of modern technology in to education sector, some people prefer to attend the online classes while others still believe in traditional classroom system

2) Most of the people are struggling to find balance between their work and personal life, while only few achieve this

3) Recently there has been a huge exponential growth in children and youngsters committing crime

Comparing online classes with traditional ones has divided people in 2 groups

1. Certain individuals appreciate electronically connected classes, whereas others are of the opinion that to be present in a conservative classroom is preferable. Pls reply. 2. Numerous people attempt to fathom a balance between their occupation/job and and other departments of their life. Notwithstanding, not too many attain this. Pls reply.

3. There has been an increasing number of adolescent/juvenile and young adults perpetrating unlawful act. Pls reply.

Essay Question 2: Even though many people prefer to enjoy old- style schoolrooms, virtual courses are becoming rife among some individuals.

Essay Question 3: Making a balance between one’s profession and other facets of life is considered as an optimal issue. Many people, yet, may find it challenging to attain.

Essay Question 4: It is said that the rate of delinquency among teenagers and adolescences has escalated

Q2: It is considered by some that traditional way of learning such as to sit in a classroom is the most effective way while there are others who gave preference to study through internet in online classes.

Q3: Most people are trying to spend their life by keeping a balance between their work and other routine matters but unfortunately there are few who actually manage it successfully.

Q4: The number of crimes which are committed by young kids and children are increasing day by day. This is mainly due to computer games and crimes news. Instead of punishment they need proper counselling.

Kids is an informal word, try to avoid it

1. People’s have different view about excellent methods of learning between virtual class and face to face study. While web-based learning is new technology for distance education, I completely agree with those who believe traditional method is best.

2. It is true that people are experimenting in different ways to maintain harmony in their jobs and social life. Although some achieve this, being punctual on time can be taken as to mitigate these problems.

3. The large population of teens and secondary level student are increase in criminality. The reason behind this is due to freedom given by family, however good parenting can reduce this potential problems.

1.Nowadays, the majority of people have resorted to studying online rather than attending classes.

2. It is a challenge to many people these days to maintain their work and other aspects of life at equilibrium.

3.The statistics have reported high crime rates committed by teenagers and adolescents.

Q2. Population views on preferred mode of education are divided into two subgroups, while, one section of it tend to lean towards online mode of study, the others section prefers the old classroom based approach.

Q3. Finding the optimum division of time between work and other life activities is what the majority workforce searches for perennially, but those who eventually finds are not many.

Q4. The rate of younger population namely, children and youngsters, indulging in criminal activities has been on an upward trend.

Q2. The effectiveness of studying online is debatable. Some people prefer to study online while others feel it’s better to attend lectures in school. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provides evidence as to why studying online have gain momentum over time.

Q3. Balancing work with other human activities is debatable. Most individuals find it difficult to have a balance between their work and social life. This essay will discuss why people are having imbalances and provide a solution to a stable life.

Q4. The growing number of children committing a crime is getting popular. This essay will discuss the cause of the increase in crime and proper judgement for such child

Q2 / while many human being like online sesstions. Others belive it is better in traditional classrooms.

Q3 / Alot of human being attempt to have a balance between their job and other obligations of their life. However rerely could achieve that.

2. While online classes are some people’s choice , others are comfortable with a traditional classroom.

3. Most people are not able to find an equilibrium between their work and life.

4.Children and youngsters involved in criminal activities are on the rise

2)Due to the development in technology, classes via the internet getting more preference by some people whilst others believe having classrooms in conventional style is far effective.

1. Some individual favors online education, while others would argue that old-style learning remains desirable. Although online classes cut travel time from home to school, I believe that traditional classroom provides maximum knowledge through personal interaction between teachers and student. 2. Several individuals attempt to balance work and personal life but, only limited people really accomplish this. The most viable solution is public awareness campaign warning people against the danger of overworked.

Essay Question 1: Some people prefer online classes, while others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Background statement: opinions differs among various people as some argue that internet classes are better than traditional classes, while other believe in opposite.

Essay Question 3 Many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of their life. However, few actually achieve this. What solutions can you suggest?

Background statement: Although many people tend to achieve a work-life balance, only a small proportion could, in fact, succeed in achieving it.

Essay Question 4 There has been an increase in the number of children and youngsters committing crime. What are the reasons for this and punishments should they receive?

Background statement: Number of children and youngsters, who are committing crimes, are on the rise.

Essay(2) it has been observed that e learning classes are gaining more popularitythan regular classes and highly preferred by students nowadays.However, it is argued by many that regular classes are irreplaceble and more beneficial for learners. I personally believe that traditional classes offer safe, postive and productive learning environment to students.

1-Although distance learning is preferred by a large proportion of our community , physical learning is thought to be an effective method of learning by some people.

2-The equality between employment and lifestyle seems to be a real challenge for people and not many of them overcome this test.

3-There’s no doubt that the number of juvenile criminal has increased considerably at the current time .

2. The conventional teaching method is more preferrable by number of indivuals than attending classes done online.

Nowadays many people opt for online courses than traditional method of teaching .In my opinion online education is more convenient than classroom lectures. I have explained my points in the following essay

Essay 2 People have their own preferences when it comes to , whether they want to choose online or traditional classroom classes. Essay 3 Finding a perfect balance between one’s work and other dimensions of life is aimed by many but is actually achieved by few people. Essay 3 A rise can be seen in the number of children and young folks who are getting involved in crime related activities.

2)Due to the development in technology, classes via the internet getting more preference by some people whilst others believe having classrooms in conventional style is far effective. 3)An increasing number of people tend to have balance in their official life and other perspectives of life although a few of them are able to acquire this. 4)Committing a crime by the young age group of people and children has been increased over the last few years.

3)An increasing number of people tend to have a balance between their official and other perspectives of life although a few of them are only able to acquire this.

3)Committing a crime by the people of young age and children has been increased over the last few years.

Q2: Although getting information became easy by using internet websites, According to some people, others, still prefer to learn in auditoriums. Q3: getting the time necessary to make a balanced activity through the day, be no longer controlled for many people, While, some people keep their activities scheduled. Q4: strict laws solution is one of the matters, should be taken into consideration to reduce the recklessness among young children.

1, Many people prefer to study online whilst, others believe it is better to be in a conventional classroom. This essay will discuss both views and give my opinion in the following paragraphs. 2, Most people try to find harmony between their jobs and other aspects of their being. However, only a minute of them actually successfully accomplish this. This essay will suggest some way this can be achieved. 3, In recent time, the number of children and adolescents committing a crime has increased. This essay will discuss the possible reasons and a penalty they should receive

Hi Liz, please find the below paraphrased sentences and post your comments 1) peoples life span might increase to 100 years or more due to development of science. 2) some people think traditional classrooms are better, while others prefer online classes. 3) Few people only achieve balanced between their work and other aspects of their life, inputs of many people. 4) Number of children and youngsters commiting crime has been increased.

Pamela says, 1. Technology has expanded such that few individuals believe internet classes is preferable. On the other hand, others opine that the orthodox form of learning is better. 2. The burning question of the day is whether or not there should be an equilibrium between work and life, it seems that only few people could achieve this. 3. In recent times, there has been a tremendous increase in crime rate. Unfortunately, juveniles and teenagers seems to be the perpetrators.

I have been following your work for a few months and would like to thank you for all your advice and assistance. You have helped me improve and achieve my desired score in reading and helped enhance my listening and speaking scores 🙂 It is an uphill battle with writing unfortunately.

I was wondering if there is a typo in essay question 3 as the question reads as “Many people try to find a balanced between…”.

Here are my background statement paraphrases:

Topic 1: Due to the advancement in science, it is expected that the life expectancy of a human being will be greater than 100 years.

Topic 2: Some individuals are of the view that online classes are better than traditional classrooms, while others uphold a contrary opinion.

Topic 3: Many individuals strive to achieve a healthy work-life balance. However, the success rate of achieving this is low.

Topic 4: There has been a rise in the number of crimes and offences being committed, especially among children and youngsters.

I look forward to your reply.

Well spotted 🙂

1. While a number of persons prefer virtual classes, others opine that onsite learning remains desirable.

2. While majority of people strive to strike and maintain work-life balance, only a minority have been able to achieve this fit.

3. Increasing number of children and adolescents are engaging in delinquent behaviors.

Essay 2 : It is generally accepted that people chooses online learning than the traditional learning method. I believe that both learning styles has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will examine the both learning method in detailed.

Essay2 : Work life balance is a daily challenge in most people’s life. While some people are able to split their timing between friends , family and other activities of their life , in addition to the demand of the workplace, others still find it difficult to make it. This essay will provide some possible solution to achieve it .

Essay 3 : Juvenile delinquency has been increasing over the past few years. The two main causes of this increase in crime rates are modern technologies such as internet , video games and busy lifestyles. I think that all convicted criminal should be punished based on the severity of crime commit.

2. Some persons would rather internet learning whereas some other people would prefer the conventional classroom teaching.

Many people believe in the advantages of conventional classroom training while others choose online classes.

People strive to achieve work-life balance in their daily lives but only a few can make a reality for themselves.

An increasing number of children and youths are seen indulging in misdeeds resulting in higher crime rates.

2, In some people’s opinion online classes are better, while others prefer the conventional face to face classroom teaching. 3. A lot of people attempt to strike a balance between their job and other areas of life. But only a handful accomplish this goal. 4. There is a rise in the population of children and juvenile deliquency. This essay will examine the reasons for this and necessary punishment.

People strive to achieve work-life balance in their daily lives but only a few can make it a reality for themselves.

An increasing number of children and youths are indulging in various misdeeds resulting in higher crime rates.

2 while online classes is viewed to be better by some group of person, the conventional face to face method of learning is preferred by some people. This essay will discuss both sides of the opinion

3 finding a balance between busy working schedule and private life has become a major project for most people although few people end up accomplishing this in life. This essay will elaborate on the causes of the problem and provide solutions.

4 THE involvement of children and adolescent in crime of resent, has increased at an alarming rate. I will enumerate the causes and solutions to this world wide problem.

1. Gone were the days when teaching was restricted to the traditional classroom setting as now, with the increase of technology, teachings are conducted virtually from any and every part of the world efficiently and effectively.

2. It has become increasingly impossible for a lot of people to create a work life balance as a result of the rigors associated with their work, timing, and other external factors.

Increasing the number of children’s crimes is sometime due to the treatment of parents and give children what they want at any time to the extent that rates of drugs and stealing anything became a disturbing matter. Punishment should be suitable for what children do even if a responsible person punish them to get over this problem

1. A certain portion of the population believes that education by the web technology; however, some believe in the old style, class base. 2. A number portion of the population considered to making similarity among of their occupation; besides, alternative features in their lifestyle; nevertheless, a small number of the population reached that. 3. It has shown a raise remarkable murdering by youth and minors; therefore, how can find any cause; moreover, is it better to penalizing hem?

Q2: Education sector is no exception where modern technological advancement has brought about changes in every field. However, the debate to find which is better, online education or traditional face to face education, is ongoing worldwide. Online teaching and learning, in my opinion, cannot replace the human interaction based education methods under any circumstance.

Q3: The modern life style has expanded the peoples’ responsibilities among many roles, where the work life requires most of the peoples’ time leaving them struggling to find a balance between work life and other aspects of life. Regardless of which part of the world, first world or third world, people try to find a solution but unfortunately many do not succeed. This essay will consider the potential solutions for this condition. Q4: Juvenile crime has become such a critical problem drawing attention from all over the world that many judicial systems are considering different punishments and methods of rehabilitation to correct these young offenders. People suggest various new methods and punishments to orient these youngsters in the right direction.

2. while some individuals will choose taking their classes online, others are of the opinion that learning in a conventional classroom is better. 3. Quite a significant number of individuals have tried balancing their career and other areas of their life. But unfortunately only a few have succeeded. 4. The proportion of children and young adults who commit crime has been on the increase.

Online classes have eased the learning process considering the percentage of people who have earned qualification.

4. Nowadays children and juvenile crime are rising gradually, consisting large proportion of crime rate.

2. Due to development of technology nowadays some people prefer to study online, whereas the others still believe in traditional ways of learning a subject. 3. Majority of people are willing to spend time equally and wisely between their job and personal life, but only minor number of them have achieved it.

2. Due to development of technology nowadays some people prefer to study online, whereas the others still believe in traditional ways of learning a subject.

Due to development in science, people’s lifespan will be extended to 100 years or more.

Although it is sometimes thought that traditional classrooms are better, some people prefer virtual classrooms.

Balancing work and other aspects of life are what most people try to achieve, while only a few succeed.

The rate of crime committed by children and adolescent are on the rise.

2)AS PER THE STUDENTS LEANING CHOICE, SOME ARE CHOOSING VIRTUAL CLASSROOM METHOD, AND OTHER GROUP GOING WITH FACE-TO-FACE CLASSROOM.

3)MOST OF THE PEOPLES ARE STRIVE TO MAINTAIN THEIR PERSONAL-PROFESIONAL LIFE. IN THIS ONLY FEW ACHIEVE.

4)NOWADAYS, INCREASING CRIME RATE AMONG CHILDREN AND YOUNGSTERS ARE HIGH.

1, Due to advancement in science technology, Mortals may be living more than 100 years.

2, One side of group argue that, it is good to have distance learning education while using internet. However, other side of group’s opinion is, outmoded classroom is the best teaching method.

3, world has become smaller due to changing in people’s lifestyle. people face challenges in keeping their both, work and personal lifestyle on the same page but only some can manage this.

4, it has been observed that number of children and youth have committed some serious crimes that puts justice system to think that, what consequences should they face?

essay 4 1-the increase rate of crime among children and teenagers has been continously shooting.

2-Now a days the crime rate is shooting day by day specially in early age of youngsters.

Some people think old method of classroom teaching is best whereas others prefer online education. Many people are facing challenges between their daily work and other aspects of their lifes and a compromise has to be reached. There is an increase in crime which is committed by children and youngsters

essay3 1.a true balance in people life ,is the most difficult task for which he was struggling but unfortunately not many people succeed in achieving it. 2.To have balance between the work ,family and friends is found to be so much difficult and a little people can achieve it in their life.

2. The discussion on prefrence of virtual learning as compared to classic methods has shown a divide between the two methods.

3. Although, there are less individuals that can harmonise their toil and existence, most individuals actually put in efforts to harmonise their toil and existence.

4. Figures of criminal activities amongst kids and adolescents has been on the rise.

essay3 1)a true balance in people life ,is the most difficult task for which he was struggling but unfortunately not many people succeed in achieving it. 2)To have balance between the work ,family and friends is found to be so much difficult and a little people can achieve it in their life.

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Essay 2 1)A few people consider that learning through different programs on internet is more preferable while the rest opinions are in the favour of old style educational rooms.

2)few people give preference to get classes through internet while others are in the favour of old normal class rooms

2. It is considered by some inhabitants that attending online classes is more convenient, while few other people are of the opinion that it is good to attend conventional classroom sessions. 3. A large number of people attempt to strike a good balance between professional life and personal life, while there are others who actually achieved the same. 4. Of late it has been observed that there has been an augmented participation in crime by many children and teenagers.

Q.2: Due to advanced technology, most people prefer to receive lectures through virtual classes, but others prefer one on one classes. I believed that there should be a balance while receiving classes through both means.

2. There is a debate over preference of virtual tuitions and traditional face to face interactions. 3. Whilst most people aim to strike a balance between personal and professional life, a handful of them are able to attain it . 4. Children and youngsters are involving in punitive actions in droves.

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In the today’s era, internet has become such an indispensable part of people’s life that online tutoring is preferred by a few fraction of society . However, there are myriad people who still believe that traditional teaching methods are better. In my opinion, face to face learning is vital for the overall development of a child.

I didn’t plan to comment on individual writing, but for you I will make an exception. You obviously have excellent English, but you are not writing in a natural manner. You are writing in a forced way to impress the reading. This is the wrong way to approach IELTS. 1. Don’t use “In today’s era” – this is common with low level students. Just start normally and directly “The internet has become..” 2. Don’t use “a few fraction of society” this is actually incorrect English. Just write “some people” or “a proportion of people”. 3. Don’t use “myriad people” it is both overused and incorrect. You should have written “myriad of people” (preposition of). But don’t use it anyway.

Your aim to write naturally and avoid errors. All errors or poor word choices will lower your score. Now check my model answers above and see how logically and sensibly you should approach your writing.

Question 2 While some people think that traditional or face to face teaching is the best method of learning, others prefer having their classes online. Question 3 Having a balance between work and other activities of life is what many people try to find but this is a goal only few achieve. Question 4 It’s been on record that there has been an increase in the rate of crime committed by children and young persons.

2- However, many learners trust in the online tutorials, there are others who still believe in ordinary teaching classrooms. 3- However, people do their best to organize their life and get the benefit of each item they have, many of them are not able to create an optimum life. 4 – An increment in the crimes that are carried out by teenagers and children is observed.

1 In this age of technological advancement some people select online classes while others prefer the traditional ones .In my opinion virtual classes are easily accessible , time – consuming and much efficient than the physical classrooms.

2 In this highly competitive and pressurised life most people try to equalise the professional and personal aspects of life but few succeeds.

3 Nowadays the number of children’s and youngster executing offences has highly raised. Their are many reasons for such social evils and strict laws should be enforced in order to curb these. 3

Essay question 2 Background statement Online education is preferred by small group of people while on the other hand others believe that getting education in classrooms is more beneficial.

Although a lesser number of individuals would want to study online, majority would rather opted to learn in a classroom.

1. Due to modern technological era, people choose to learn from online classes method. However, other prefer the conventional classroom teaching is better for learning. In my opinion, I prefer to interact in classroom with teacher to learn throughly. 2. People try a lot to achieve work-life balance and other perspective in life but, only some can manage while, rest fail in it. Their is two effectively solution, first to give priority to leisure time prior with family. Second, take regular break from work. 3. The number of pupils and teenager breaking the law has been raised. There are some underlying reasons for it, and I believe pushinments is not a way to resolve. But, to sent them for rehabilitation and community services will be better for them.

Dear Liz, I have been following your site for almost a month and I truly believe you are doing an amazing job. I have listened to many other online IELTS tutors’ videos but your ones are exemplary. Thank you for this.

Now I would like to send you my sample background statements for questions 1-4 and look forward to your reply/assessments.

Paraphrase to Q 1: Due to scientific research the average lifespan for people is projected to be about 100 years. Paraphrase to Q 2: It seems that online classes/lessons may be preferable for the number of people while others may still opt for traditional classroom environment. paraphrase to Q 3: Life work balance is sought by a lot of people though not all of them succeed in it/though some fail in achieving it. Paraphrase to Q 4: 1.Young people tend to commit crime fairly more often than before 2.A considerable rise in young people’s behaviour committing crime has been noticed recently. Sincerely, Maka Tetradze

2. Certain extent of people prefer online classes, while other opt to be in classroom environment. 3. In the current environment, most people strive to strike a balance between their work and other life activities. 4. In recent time, the crime rate has seen an upward trend among children and adolescents.

Vast majority of people reckon that online classes are pregmatically more efficient but the opposition hold the opposite view .I shall elaborate the benefits and shortcomings of both the categories of education below

While many people favor online tutorials, others believe in face to face interactions that are presented in the traditional classes.

Although there are some who like online learning, other believe that face to face interaction is the best approach of teaching learning method. Despite many efforts only some people are able to balance between professional and personal life Nowadays,crime among minor and adolescent is increasing at a alarming rate

2. Although online classes are preferred by some, others consider it better to be in a traditional classroom. In my opinion, I think online tuition is preferable as it saves valuable time.

3. While a great number of people try to find a balance between their work and other sides of their life, it is in fact only few who accomplish it successfully. I believe that having a part-time job, together with a monthly schedule, may help to find the golden mean.

3. The number of crimes, committed by children and adolescents, is on the rise. There may different reasons why but I think that it is due to the bad influence of violent video games and TV films. Involving young people in sports activities outdoors may solve the problem.

1. Receiving classes online is increasingly being embraced by many, whereas, others believe that the conventional classroom is more effective. 2. A large number of people are making effort with a view to striking a balance between work and other areas of their life. 3. Children and teenage crime is rapidly growing in societies, a development which can be attributed to a number of reasons that will be highlighted in this essay.

2. There is a growing debate among people on the preference of internet-based classes over physical classrooms.

3. As challenging as it has become to find a meeting point between one’s career and one’s family life, nevertheless, few people are still able to actualise this.

4. In recent times, the number of teenagers and adolescents involved in crimes is on the rise.

3 – However, many people try to reach a meeting point between their work’s requirements and personal life issues, few of them have succeeded. 4- Nowadays, a significant increase in the number of crimes perpetrated by adolescents and teenagers is observed.

Hi Liz, here are my answers. 2. Where some believe in virtual learning , others prefer to be a part of traditional classrooms. 3. Majority of human beings try to find out a balanced approach between their personal and professional life; however, only a small number of people get this. 4. An increase can be noticed in the crime rate of children and adolescents.

Here are my model answers ,please correct me if i am wrong in any of them.

2. Few people tend to like virtual classes, Whilst others feel comfortable to take a regular classes. In my opinion, online classes are really helping thousands of people by creating a private platform. However, traditional classroom is available for all courses.

3. People often experience hard to stabilize their job and personal life, while others can easily compensate both. In my view, by paying attention to priorities, we can achieve the balance between work and household activities. However, it is highly difficult to acquire this in life.

4. There is no doubt that the number of kids and teenagers are involving in illegal acts has been elevating in recent times. The reason for that problem is, they are lacking the care and protection anticipated from family, which was driving them to commit the sin. Instead of punishing them, changing their behavior is the solution.

p.s Your lectures are very helpful to me. Thank you 🙂

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#2: Internet is changing the way of learning things for various people and they prefer to learn over internet. Whereas there’s another group of people who choose classroom studies.

#3: Although work-life balance is a preferred choise for most of the people, a few of them get to attain it.

#4: The crime rate in adolescent people and young adults has been reportedly high these days.

2. Quite a few learners feel that lessons given online are better than those taught in a traditional setting and vice versa.

3. Ver few among a large number of working people who strive to strike a balance between their professional and personal lives, manage to be successful.

4. There has been a noticeable and disturbing change in recent times related to crime. Children and teenagers, or people in their early adolescence, have started participating more and more in criminal activities.

2 ) In the current competitive job market, most of the employed people are struggling to find the work-life balance in their professional life.

3) Crime among children and young teenagers is on a constant rise lately.

2. There are some number of people who have preference for online learning, but some others believe it is better to learn in a traditional classroom.

3. A number of people tend to find an equilibrium between their job and other aspects of their life. Although, only few people do this.

4.a)The rate at which children and youngsters are committing crime is on the increase.

4. b) Crimes committed by children and young adults are increasing.

Q2: while a group of people think it is useful to get their courses through distal learning way, others still prefer attending physically to their lessons like the old way. Q3: in spite of being busy with their work, a lot of people try to spend their life soundly and make a fair share between their work and leisure. Q4 Nowadays, the crime age has extended dramatically to younger ages than before and a lot of crimes have been frighteningly assigned to kids and adolescents.

Question 2 It is considered by many that studying on the internet is a better option than going to school, but others advocate otherwise. I strongly believe that traditional classes help students learn correct conduct and it creates an extensive diversity among them.

Question 3 A large number of people have been looking for solutions to stabilise both social life and work , however only small proportion has succeeded. There are a number of measures which can be put in place to balance these activities .

The growing levels of children committing crime has proved to be a major obstacle for humanity . This is mainly due to difficulties in finding employment and an increase in divorce , however harsh punishment should be given to those who re-offend while community service should applied to those who are first time offenders .

Essay 2:Some are of the view that it is be better to attend regular classes, others opt for classes that are online. Essay 3:Despite the fact that a large number of people make efforts to strike a balance between work and other aspects of their live, only a few actually succeed. Essay 4:The number of children and adolescents involved in criminal activities are on the rise.

The trend of study has been changing everyday and there are some people who want to do it through internet and other prefer by face to face interaction in classroom.

Crime rate among kids and youth has been on the rise in recent times. These could be attributed to poor parental guidance, peer group influence and lack of moral lessons in school curriculum. Parental restrictions should be put in place as penalty for offenders.

1. A few people would rather have electronically delivered lessons, whilst others consider the conventional classroom to be superior. 2. Achieving a state of equilibrium between the demands of work versus life outside the business environment have been sought by many people. However, a few literally accomplish this. 3. The number of teenagers and minors who violate the law has increased over time.

1.Recently, the crime rate among kids and adolescents is increasingly high .

2. A good number of people struggle to find a middle ground between their jobs and other activities of daily living.

3. It is considered by some that online lessons is better than learning in the classroom as opposed by others who believe that the later is best.

It is believed by some people that traditional classrooms are better than smart classes . On this ground , this essay represents scrutiny on both the views and give a plausible opinion.

Answers #2) A number of persons opt for online schools whereas, others see conventional classroom as a more suitable alternative.

#3) Finding a balance between job and other aspects of existence is really achievable by a few persons although, several individuals endeavour to find an equilibrium between both.

#4) The statistic of minors(Children and youngsters) involved in criminal acts has been on the increase.

Essay question 2 It is true, Online classes becoming increasingly popular these days, some would argue traditional classrooms are better than virtual classes. Essay question 3 Except a few, a large section of people struggles with managing their work/life balance. Essay Question 4 Recently, crime committed by juvenile has increased.

Paraphrasing Question 2 There is a dichotomy among people between learning through internet and conventional classroom training, which is considered as effective way of acquiring education.

Paraphrasing Question 3 It is a universal challange to harmonize professional obligations with personal necessacities, which only a small portion of the group has been able to met.

Paraphrasing Question 4 Number of youth involved in criminal activities is on the rise nowadays.

Essay Question 2: Although internet lectures are most preferable by some people, but the usual classroom learning method is still considered more effective by other people.

Essay Question 3: A lot of people make efforts to achieve stability, amongst their occupation and other areas of their life. But in reality, only a little number of people attain this achievement.

Essay Question 4: The rate of children and youngsters involving in juvenile delinquent has been incremental.

2) Although some are of the opinion that online classes is superior, while traditional classroom is the thought of others.

3) A balance between work life and other aspects of life has been the struggle of many, but only few could achieve this.

4)It is a known fact that a growing number of children and youngsters have been involving in crime.

question 2: Most of the people recommend online classes but many of them believe that traditional classes are good to be in a class room. question 3: Many people struggle to maintain balance between work and conditions of their lifestyle although very few people achieve it . question 4 :Crime rate is increasing among youngsters and children.

Essay Question 1 Recently due to Leaps and Bounds of developments in the scientific world, average living age will cross 100 years or more.

Essay question 2 These days owing to magnificent increase in Internet technology, many people prefer online tutorials however few people still love to attend brick-and-mortar classrooms

Essay Question 3 In order to survive in this fast growing world, it is getting hard to perform better at work as well as stabilize other crucial tasks of life in contrary some people have are of managing duo very beautifully.

Essay question 4 Robbery, violence and murders cases around the world are inflating exponentially, whereas contribution of teenagers and young peoples is on higher side in comparison of elder citizens.

Essay 2 – It has been a common topic of argument for quite sometime now, whether online classes are better or the age old traditional classroom learning is favourable. Essay 3 – Work life Balance is essential for a peaceful living and everyone tries to attain a balance. While few individuals achieve it, others fail to do so. Essay 4 – Criminal activities among minors and adolescents have increased quite alarmingly in the last few years.

For some people, traditional classrooms are still a preferred mode of elarning however, there are some other people who prefe online classes.

Despite trying hard to keep the work and other spects of life on a balanced level , only a few people out of many become successful in doing so.

Out of many people trying to keep their work balanced with other aspects of their life, only a few people are found to be successful in their attempt.

A growing number of youngsters as well as children are found to be involved in the criminal activities.

Question 2 – Eventhough some people prefer online classes there are many others who still prefer traditional classes only.

Question 3 – It is believed that many people try to find a balance between their work and other aspects of life but few of them acheive this.

Question 4 – Committing crime is increase in number especially in children and youngsters.

Answers to the background statement!

Ans to question 2. Many people have varring preferences on their learning environment. While some like online classes, others prefer the usual classroom.

Ans to question 3 Achieving a balance between work and other aspects of life has being a challenge to a lot of people. Nevertheless, a hand full have achieved this fit.

Ans to question 4 The number of young people involved in criminal activities has been rising.

2. The Role of Distance Learning in our society can not be over emphasize, However, Classroom Learning has contribute greatly to the society

3. The Balance between career and Pleasure can be actualized, Notwithstanding, it takes strategies to be achieved.

4 Increase in criminal act has been stream line to children and youngsters in the society.

1. Human’s lifespan is expected to be an average of 100 or more with the advancement of science.

2. There’s an increasing argument on preference for virtual classes and attending lectures in person.

3. Many aim to achieve a level-ground between career and other areas of life but few are to successful at this.

4. There is a high rate of crime among children and adolescents

A large number of people struggle with their work -life balance, but some people gain it

Background statement 2: Studying online is being preferred by some people. however, others believe that attending classes on campus is more beneficial.

Background statement 3: Achieving a balance between the job and the other sides of life is the aim of many working people. But only some of them managed to attain this goal.

Background statement 4: The number of children and teenagers who commit crime is rising these days.

Background statements. Essay question 2: Online classes are considered by some individuals as the most preferable mode of study while others see the traditional classroom as better. In my opinion, both modes of study are good depending on the amount of time an individual has at his or her disposal. This essay will discuss both options.

Essay question 3: Plethora of individuals attempt to balance work with other personal activities, although only a few succeed in their efforts. To achieve this balance, one would need to set daily achievable goals, created a scale of priorities and inculcate time management.

Essay question 4: Crime rate has risen dramatically among younger people. This essay will discuss reasons associated with this social vice and how it can be remedied.

#2: A set of people recommend virtual classes using internet, on the other hand another set of individuals feel physical training are more advantegous. In my opinion, there are benefits and drawbacks in both the approaches. I will detail my thoughts in the below paragraphs.

#3: Even though majoirty of workers try to obtain worklife balance, hardly certain individuals can able to accomplish that. This is due to various reasons. In below paragraphs, I will discuss those reasons and possible solutions to overcome it.

#4: The crime rate amoung childrean and young one is growing recently due to multiple factors. I will elobrate the reasons and the ways to penalize them in subsequent paragraphs.

2. Studying online is preferable to some people, whereas others are of the opinion learning in a classroom is a better option.

3. Maintaining a balance between work and other areas of life is the goal of the majority of people, but only small number of people eventually achieve this.

4. The number of children and adolescents involved in crimes has been increasing in recent times.

Q2: Although some people consider that technologically advance classes are better,others believe that old way of classroom is the best. Q3: to lead a balance life, people may make balance between their personal and professional life. While others already lead this type life. Q4: the number of young people who commit crime rose dramatically from past few years

2. It is considered by many that online method for classes is convenient way, whereas some people argue that traditional classroom is essential for study.

3. Number of people do effort to balance between their working patterns and fullfill their need, although some actually aquire this.

4. Immense number of juveniles and adults has been committing crime, which is rise.

Essay 1: Development in science will be responsible for people to live 100 years or more. Essay 2: Some people prefered to opt for online classes , while others believe that old traditional classroom is a better option. Essay3: Many people try to balance their professional life and personal life . But , very less people actually able to do this. Essay 4: Numer of children ad teenagers committing crime has increased recently.

For ESSAY 3. In the recent scenario, there has been remarkable upsurge in the unlawful offences by youngsters as well as by kids. There are numerous reson behind the antisocial activity they adopt. However to curb the offenders there should be some strict law and order so this type of businesses will under control. Both the reason and antidisciplinary action should they given will discuss further.

2: The method of learning has become a controversial topic for hot debates among people with a few support the online studying whilst some others still believe in the old-fashioned classroom style. In my opinion, I argue that the textbook studies is advantageous compared to the modern method having meagre benefits.

3: As the world progresses with tremendous growth and revolutionary changes in the way of living, commoners have to work accordingly, which they sometimes find it hard to balance with their family lives, however, few wins over this. The solutions suggesting include reducing office hours and adopting a better lifestyle.

4: Recent years have witnessed a hike in the crime rate and the majority of convicts are either teenaged or children. Continuous exposure to violent video games and lack of affection from parents are prime reasons for this, and moral punishments such as forced social services in orphanages and imprison in juvenile cells are recommended.

Answers Essay 2; Nowadays some people preferred internet lectures while others believed conventional method of lectures is most important. Essay 3; Is common today, people try to have equilibrium between work and other life activities, nevertheless only few people achieved it. essay 4; Recently, the numbers of young adult and children involving in criminal activities has jump up.

Essay 3: In today’s fast moving world,majority of people are endeavouring to discover a good work-life balance in their life,however,due to having tremendous pressure from workplace and family, hardly any is able to maintain stability.

1. As a result of the evolution in science, the life-span of people is expected to be prolonged to 100 years or beyond 2. Due to the desire to secure the opportunity to work and study at the same time, some people would rather prefer online studies to historical classroom studies. 3. Many people desire to find the right proportion between work and social feature of life, nevertheless, it is not easily access to everyone. 4. There is a progressive rate in the perpetuation of unlawful acts among the children and young people nowadays

Essay 2- Sample 1-Several individuals choose online classes for their study, whereas some believe old way of study, attending classes in university is more beneficial.

Sample 2- certain people are more likely to taking online classes, whereas some people believe attending classes in university is always good.

Please make me correct whereever i am wrong.

Thank you, Gurinder Kaur

Answer 2 – Some learners like to study online, while others feel more comfortable in brick and mortar classroom. Answer 3 – Majority aspire to achieve a work-life balance but only some are able to do so. Answer 4 – The population of juveniles involved in misconducts has been on the high side.

2. A lot of students embraced online classes but many of them still thinks physical classroom teaching is still the best.

3. The struggle to find an equilibrium point between work and other aspects of life is pursued by many but only few people hit the mark.

4. Crime rate among the youths is escalating nowadays.

Thank you so much for this wonderful website to aid many IELTS students. Here are my responses

1. It is commonly preferred by some, to attend online classes, whilst many think it is better with traditional classroom teaching. 2. In this modern world, many people want their life to be balanced with work, while some individuals have succeeded to achieve this circumstance. 3. In recent years, many children and adolescents are observed offending.

Regards, Sravani

2. Although, online classes are preferred by some, others believe that being in the class traditionally is better. 3. There has been efforts to balanced work and other life aspects by people, but only few has succeeded in this regard. 4. The rate of crime among children has been on the rise.

Essay 2: Although it is sometimes thought that pursuing internet based lessons is a satisfactory approach to gain knowledge ,other people deem visiting schoolrooms for classes far better.

Essay Q2.. A traditional classroom is thought to be better though, online classes are also getting preferences due to its easy access. Essay Q3 To get an equilibrium between work and other aspects of life majority of people are endeavouring their best, though only minority can achieve this.

essay 2 Some individuals prefer classes online while others believe that traditional classroom is better.

essay 3 Work and other aspects of life is tried to be balanced by most individuals although only few people actually achieve it.

essay 4 A grown in number of children and youngster committing crimes.

Science has developed a great deal over recent years. For this reason, an increase in the expectation of life of people to about 100 years or more will not be impossible in the near future. From my point of view, this can have both drawbacks and benefits.

Owing to many reasons crime rate among teenagers and adults has been increasing dramatically.

To gain knowledge on any field has become relatively easier with the advancement and easy accessibility of internet. However, it is still believed by many that nothing beats the learning environment of the classroom.

Owing to the advancements in technology, some people opt to study online whereas others believe learning in a classroom is worthwhile.

1 Although some people prefer online tutoring, others opined for traditional classroom as more effective.

2 Although majority of the people are trying to find a balance between their work and other aspects of life, few are actually able to achieve.

3 Crime has been considerably increasing in the age group of adolescents and teens.

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IELTS Agree or Disagree Essay

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Example of IETS Opinion essay

• You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
• Write at least 250 words.
• Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Structure of IELTS Opinion Essay

• Paragraph 1: Introduction
• Paraphrase the Essay Topic
• Thesis Statement
• Paragraph 2: Supporting Paragraph #1
• Topic Sentence
• Support (Example or Experience)
• Explanation
• Paragraph 3: Supporting Paragraph #2
• Paragraph 4: Conclusion
• Restate Thesis/Summarize your ideas

To what extent..

Example vocabulary and phrases: stating your opinion.

• In my opinion I believe that education should be free because it helps move society forward.
• As far as paying for education is concerned, I believe that you should have to pay because it creates competition which helps to develop stronger institutions.
• My impression is that education should require a cost whether it be through tax payer money or private institutions.
• Most institutions require tuition to attend. However. I believe that education should be free because it helps move society forward.

Example Vocabulary and Phrases: Arguing Your Point

• This proves that free education can provide many opportunities for those who cannot afford it.
• According to this, it can be argued that financial aid is a way to support students who cannot afford to pay for education.

Example Vocabulary and Phrases: Adding Adverb

Beginning of the sentence, middle of the sentence.

• Clearly, this is an example of numerous afford a proper education.
• This is definitely true because there are many students who are unable to attend school because they cannot afford it.
• Deciding whether education should be free is absolutely a major challenge to consider.
• The right to receive an education is substantially more important than earning money.

Example Vocabulary and Phrases: Verbs

• I disagree that education should cost students.
• I believe that education should be free.
• I have no doubt that society will benefit with free education.
• I think that education should be free.
• It cannot be denied that education costs money because teachers, faculty, and staff all need to be paid.
• As I see it, education has costs, so someone needs to pay for it.

Before You Start

• Think about how you will plan to write your essay.
• Brainstorm and generate ideas.

Outline structure for IELTS Essay

• ________________________________

Outline structure for IELTS Opinion Essay

• Paragraph I: Introduction
• Paraphrase the Essay Topic - I believe that everyone should have access to free education without limitations.
• Thesis Statement - Education is a valuable resource and it advances society.
• Education is tool that helps us succeed
• Germany - Free education
• Same philosophy - society advances
• Paying for education helps drive competition between institutions, but I believe this restricts social mobility.
• Student cannot afford education
• If every person of society is allowed to move forward, then all of society will benefit.
• In conclusion education is essential to any society
• By restricting access to it because of tuition limits societal advancements, it is important that we eliminate sort of barriers to education, Including costs.

Example Essay

• Thesis Statement - Education is a valuable resource and it advances society. If there are certain barriers to receiving education like costs, many students would lose the opportunity to pursue an education because of this.
• Education is a tool and it advances society and with free universal access to education, there are no limits to what a country and what a society can obtain.
• A perfect example of this Is Germany, where universities are now tuition-free.
• If all countries developed the same philosophy towards education as German. I have no doubt that society will benefit.
• Some may argue that paying for education helps drive competition between institutions and helps to develop stronger schools. However. 1 completely disagree because I believe this restricts social mobility.
• In other words, if a student who would like to pursue a degree In higher education, but cannot afford the high tuition rates then he or she will be unable to further their education.
• On the other hand, If every person of society is allowed to move forward, then all of society will benefit.
• In conclusion education is essential to any society.

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Thesis statement là gì? Cách viết Thesis Statement ấn tượng

Thesis Statement là gì? Cùng IDP tìm hiểu khái niệm cũng như cách viết luận điểm giúp bạn ghi trọn điểm trong từng dạng đề của bài thi IELTS Writing.

Chủ đề bài viết

Luận điểm (Thesis Statement) là một khái niệm khá quen thuộc đối với những ai đang học Tiếng Anh, đặc biệt là những bạn đang ôn luyện cho kỳ thi IELTS. Đây là yếu tố vô cùng quan trọng đối với mỗi bài luận, giúp mọi thông tin trong bài đều đi đúng hướng và mạch lạc nhất. Tuy nhiên, vẫn còn nhiều bạn vẫn chưa chú trọng phần này hoặc không biết viết sao cho phù hợp với từng dạng bài khác nhau. 

Trong bài viết dưới đây, IDP sẽ giúp bạn nắm rõ khái niệm câu Thesis Statement là gì cũng như cách viết luận điểm giúp bạn ghi trọn điểm trong từng dạng đề khác nhau của bài thi IELTS Writing.

1. Câu Thesis Statement là gì?

Thesis Statement (còn được gọi là luận điểm hoặc luận đề) là một câu văn tóm tắt ngắn gọn toàn bộ ý chính của người viết trong một bài luận. Một khi viết câu Thesis Statement, bạn đang thể hiện quan điểm của mình đối với đề bài, và đây cũng là luận điểm chính sẽ được làm rõ bằng cách đi sâu vào phân tích các luận điểm phụ xuyên suốt bài làm. Thesis Statement được nêu ở phần Mở bài và nhắc lại trong phần kết luận. 

Thesis Statement chặt chẽ cần đáp ứng được 3 tiêu chí sau: 

Súc tích (Concise): Đối với phần thi IELTS Writing, một câu Thesis Statement chỉ nên gói gọn từ 1-2 câu, ngắn gọn và đi vào thẳng vấn đề. 

Cụ thể (Specific): Câu luận điểm không được nêu chung chung hoặc trình bày một sự thật đơn giản mà ai cũng biết. Bạn cần làm nổi bật quan điểm của riêng bạn, nêu tổng quan một vài khía cạnh mà bạn muốn làm rõ trong phần thân bài.

Mang tính tranh luận (Arguable): Các ý được nhắc đến trong Thesis Statement phải thể hiện được ý kiến, quan điểm cá nhân của người viết. Ý kiến này có thể mang tính tranh luận hoặc không. 

2. Phân biệt giữa Thesis Statement và Topic Sentence

Có rất nhiều bạn thí sinh vẫn còn nhầm lẫn giữa hai khái niệm Thesis Statement và Topic Sentence. Tuy có cấu trúc và nhiều điểm tương đồng, Thesis Statement được dùng để tuyên bố luận điểm chính, trong khi Topic Sentence chỉ nêu luận điểm của một đoạn văn nhất định trong bài. 

3. Các bước viết Thesis Statement trong IELTS Writing

Để giúp bạn viết một câu Thesis Statement ngắn gọn nhưng chặt chẽ, bạn có thể làm theo 3 bước sau: 

Bước 1: Đọc kỹ chủ đề, vấn đề được thảo luận trong đề bài. Xác định các từ khóa và yêu cầu của đề bài dành cho thí sinh. Có 5 loại yêu cầu tương đương với 5 dạng bài phổ biến thường xuất hiện trong phần thi IELTS Writing. 

Bước 2: Dựa vào những thông tin được cung cấp trong đề bài, hãy phác thảo ý tưởng thông qua sơ đồ tư duy nhằm xác định khía cạnh mình muốn phân tích trong bài. Nếu bắt gặp một đề bài bạn không biết phải trình bày như thế nào, bạn có thể lập dàn ý dựa trên những câu hỏi dưới đây: 

What is the meaning of this statement? (Ý nghĩa của phát biểu này là gì?)

Is this likely true to me? (Phát biểu này có đúng với tôi hay không?)

Why is this true/not true to me? (Tại sao đúng/tại sao lại không đúng với tôi?)

Should I agree with this statement or disagree? (Tôi nên đồng ý hay không đồng ý với phát biểu này?)

Bước 3: Trả lời ngắn gọn cho những câu hỏi và thông tin cung cấp từ bước 1 và bước 2. Câu trả lời này chính là Thesis Statement của bạn.

4. Cách viết Thesis Statement mẫu cho từng dạng bài

Mỗi dạng bài trong phần thi IELTS Writing sẽ có các cách viết Thesis Statement khác nhau. Bạn có thể tham khảo phương pháp viết Thesis Statement mẫu cho từng dạng bài chi tiết dưới đây. 

4.1. Dạng bài Discussion 

Đối với dạng bài Discussion, bạn cần Paraphrase lại hai quan điểm được nêu trong đề bài và sau đó nêu quan điểm cá nhân của bạn. Không được nêu hai luồng quan điểm trái ngược nhau. 

Dưới đây là một Thesis Statement ví dụ:

Technology has changed every aspect of life, including the method of learning and teaching. In the 21st century, it is possible to earn a degree online and pursue a professional career without going to a school or a university. However, I believe that internet based programs are influencing today's time, but are inferior to already established classrooms.  

4.2. Dạng bài Argumentative/Opinion/Agree or Disagree

Đối với dạng bài này, bạn chỉ được chọn một luồng ý kiến tùy theo yêu cầu của đề bài “To what extent do you agree or disagree?” . Bạn sẽ đồng ý/ không đồng ý ở điểm nào. Sau khi nêu lên quan điểm cá nhân, bạn cũng cần đưa ra những luận điểm và lý do bổ trợ cho ý kiến của mình. 

Over the last few years, global issues such as traffic and pollution have received a great deal of attention from the public. Some believe that the best way to cope with the aforementioned problems is to rise petrol’s price. Personally, I am against the idea of adjusting gasoline’s price, and I strongly believe that there are other effective methods to tackle the problems.

4.3. Dạng bài Advantages and Disadvantages

Đối với dạng bài Advantages and Disadvantages, bạn không cần phải nêu quan điểm cá nhân. Bạn có thể chọn một ưu điểm và một nhược điểm và đề cập trong câu Thesis Statement của mình. Sau đó, hãy đi sâu phân tích ưu điểm và nhược điểm bạn vừa nêu trong phần mở bài. 

Đây là phần Mở bài (Introduction) áp dụng với dạng bài này: 

In recent times, people can reside wherever they want in the world because of the progress that has made in technology and transport. The main advantage is the career opportunities that a person can get outside their own country, while a possible downside would be the stress of adjusting to living in a different culture.

4.4. Dạng bài Problems and Solutions

Tương tự với dạng bài trên, khi viết Thesis Statement cho dạng bài Problems and Solutions bạn có thể chọn trình bày ngắn gọn 1-2 vấn đề và nêu ra giải pháp. Dưới đây là một phần mở bài hoàn chỉnh đi kèm với câu luận điểm giải quyết cho vấn đề này. 

People living in large cities have to deal with many issues in their day to day lives. The main problems people face are high rental costs and overcrowding. Some possible solutions would be to build more affordable housing and more green spaces.

4.5. Dạng bài Two parts question

Dưới đây là câu Thesis Statement mẫu được áp dụng cho dạng bài Two parts question bên trên: 

The world wide web is a huge source of knowledge which has created opportunities for people worldwide to study. However, not all information on the internet can be trusted, so the government needs to put measures in place to protect people from false information.

5. Những điều cần lưu ý khi viết Thesis Statement

Để viết Thesis Statement chặt chẽ nhất, bạn cần lưu ý những điều dưới đây: 

Không nên sử dụng câu hỏi tu từ. Thesis Statement là một câu khẳng định hoặc phủ định đòi hỏi bạn phải sử dụng từ ngữ mạnh mẽ, rõ ràng để truyền tải quan điểm của mình. Tránh sử dụng những cụm từ như “I think” hoặc “In my opinion” vì chúng sẽ khiến lập luận của bạn không chắc chắn. Thay vào đó, hãy áp dụng các động từ mang tính chủ động hơn. 

Tránh sử dụng đại từ nhân xưng trong bài làm. Hãy sử dụng những ngôn ngữ trung lập để trình bày lập luận của bạn để đảm bảo tính xác thực và khách quan trong bài. 

Không viết câu Thesis Statement quá chung chung như: “This essay would like to explore reasons for this in more detail.” Không nên sử dụng những từ vựng mơ hồ như “some,” “many,” hay “a lot”.

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Nếu như bạn đang tìm kiếm một địa chỉ thi IELTS đáng tin cậy, IDP cung cấp cả hai bài thi IELTS trên máy tính và thi IELTS trên giấy . Điểm thi IELTS trên máy sẽ có sau 3-5 ngày làm bài thi, và sau 13 ngày đối với những bạn chọn thi trên giấy. 

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